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为了创建班级良好的学风，九年级3班班委决定积极参与学校示范班(model class)称号的评比。假设你是班长李华，请以班委的名义给班级同学写一份不少于80词的倡议书，结合班级规范在实行中存在的1—2个问题，向全体同学提出改进建议，号召大家一起参与示范班的建设。
Dear Fellow Classmates,
Yours sincerely,
Class Committee of Class 3, Grade 9
为了创建班级良好的学风，九年级3班班委决定积极参与学校示范班(model class)称号的评比。假设你是班长李华，请以班委的名义给班级同学写一份不少于80词的倡议书，结合班级规范在实行中存在的1—2个问题，向全体同学提出改进建议，号召大家一起参与示范班的建设。
Dear Fellow Classmates,
Yours sincerely,
Class Committee of Class 3, Grade 9
答案
One possible version:
Dear Fellow Classmates,
Our class has always been a warm and united group. On behalf of the class committee, I'd like to call on everyone to work together to apply for the title of the Model Class of our school.
However, our class still has some problems to be faced with. A few classmates are often late in the morning, which disturbs the overall learning rhythm of the class. Also, some classmates always leave their desks messy after class, making our classroom look untidy.
To make our class move closer to the "model class" standard, we urge every classmate to take the following actions:
1. Please leave home early if necessary to ensure you arrive on time.
2. Tidy up your desk before leaving the classroom every day.
A good learning environment needs everyone's effort. Let's act now to be a shining example in our school!
Yours sincerely,
Class Committee of Class 3, Grade 9
Dear Fellow Classmates,
Our class has always been a warm and united group. On behalf of the class committee, I'd like to call on everyone to work together to apply for the title of the Model Class of our school.
However, our class still has some problems to be faced with. A few classmates are often late in the morning, which disturbs the overall learning rhythm of the class. Also, some classmates always leave their desks messy after class, making our classroom look untidy.
To make our class move closer to the "model class" standard, we urge every classmate to take the following actions:
1. Please leave home early if necessary to ensure you arrive on time.
2. Tidy up your desk before leaving the classroom every day.
A good learning environment needs everyone's effort. Let's act now to be a shining example in our school!
Yours sincerely,
Class Committee of Class 3, Grade 9
解析
【分析】本题要求以九年级3班班委名义写倡议书，参与学校示范班评比。解题思路：1. 遵循倡议书格式：开头称呼，正文包含倡议背景、班级现存问题、改进建议，结尾落款；2. 紧扣题目要求：明确指出1-2个具体问题（如迟到、桌面凌乱），对应提出可操作建议，确保字数不少于80词；3. 语言要正式得体，符合班委身份，语气诚恳有号召力。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开头：以班委身份说明倡议目的，即号召同学共同参与示范班评比；2. 正文第一部分：列举班级存在的具体问题，如部分同学早晨迟到影响班级学习节奏，部分同学课后桌面凌乱使教室不整洁；3. 正文第二部分：针对问题提出具体改进建议，如提前出门确保按时到校，每日离校前整理桌面；4. 结尾：号召全体同学共同努力，建设示范班，呼应主题；5. 检查格式与字数，确保符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Fellow Classmates,
Our class has always been a warm and united group. On behalf of the class committee, I'd like to call on everyone to work together to apply for the title of the Model Class of our school.
However, our class still has some problems to be faced with. A few classmates are often late in the morning, which disturbs the overall learning rhythm of the class. Also, some classmates always leave their desks messy after class, making our classroom look untidy.
To make our class move closer to the "model class" standard, we urge every classmate to take the following actions:
1. Please leave home early if necessary to ensure you arrive on time.
2. Tidy up your desk before leaving the classroom every day.
A good learning environment needs everyone's effort. Let's act now to be a shining example in our school!
Yours sincerely,
Class Committee of Class 3, Grade 9
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语书面表达
【点评】该倡议书结构清晰，紧扣题目要求，明确指出班级存在的问题并提出具体可行的改进建议，语言得体，符合班委身份，具有号召力，达到了不少于80词的要求，是一篇符合标准的范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开头：以班委身份说明倡议目的，即号召同学共同参与示范班评比；2. 正文第一部分：列举班级存在的具体问题，如部分同学早晨迟到影响班级学习节奏，部分同学课后桌面凌乱使教室不整洁；3. 正文第二部分：针对问题提出具体改进建议，如提前出门确保按时到校，每日离校前整理桌面；4. 结尾：号召全体同学共同努力，建设示范班，呼应主题；5. 检查格式与字数，确保符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Fellow Classmates,
Our class has always been a warm and united group. On behalf of the class committee, I'd like to call on everyone to work together to apply for the title of the Model Class of our school.
However, our class still has some problems to be faced with. A few classmates are often late in the morning, which disturbs the overall learning rhythm of the class. Also, some classmates always leave their desks messy after class, making our classroom look untidy.
To make our class move closer to the "model class" standard, we urge every classmate to take the following actions:
1. Please leave home early if necessary to ensure you arrive on time.
2. Tidy up your desk before leaving the classroom every day.
A good learning environment needs everyone's effort. Let's act now to be a shining example in our school!
Yours sincerely,
Class Committee of Class 3, Grade 9
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语书面表达
【点评】该倡议书结构清晰，紧扣题目要求，明确指出班级存在的问题并提出具体可行的改进建议，语言得体，符合班委身份，具有号召力，达到了不少于80词的要求，是一篇符合标准的范文。
【难度系数】0.6
