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[新考法·思维导图提示]交流是我们收获珍贵友谊的重要途径之一。那么我们如何与朋友交流,让友谊长存呢?请根据下面图示信息,以“How to communicate with our friends”为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
要求:1. 语意连贯,层次清晰,书写规范；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
How to communicate with our friends
要求:1. 语意连贯,层次清晰,书写规范；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
How to communicate with our friends
A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart. It's important for us to communicate with our friends. Here are some suggestions.
First, we should trust our friends.
Second, we should learn to share our experiences with our friends, especially when we have problems. Sharing a problem is like cutting it in half.
Third, we should help each other. When our friends are in trouble, we should try to help them to solve problems.
Last but not least, we should do something together. This can help us understand each other better.
In a word, we should communicate with our friends.
It can make our friendship stronger.
答案
How to communicate with our friends
A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart. It's important for us to communicate with our friends. Here are some suggestions.
First, we should trust our friends. Second, we should learn to share our experiences with our friends, especially when we have problems. Sharing a problem is like cutting it in half. Third, we should help each other. When our friends are in trouble, we should try to help them to solve problems. Last but not least, we should do something together. This can help us understand each other better.
In a word, we should communicate with our friends. It can make our friendship stronger.
A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart. It's important for us to communicate with our friends. Here are some suggestions.
First, we should trust our friends. Second, we should learn to share our experiences with our friends, especially when we have problems. Sharing a problem is like cutting it in half. Third, we should help each other. When our friends are in trouble, we should try to help them to solve problems. Last but not least, we should do something together. This can help us understand each other better.
In a word, we should communicate with our friends. It can make our friendship stronger.
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作主题是“How to communicate with our friends”，需结合思维导图的“trust（信任）、share（分享）、help（帮助）”及补充内容展开。第一步开头引出与朋友交流对维系友谊的重要性；第二步分点阐述具体建议，对应思维导图要点依次说明信任、分享、帮助的做法及意义，再补充一起做事情增进理解；第三步总结，点明合理交流能巩固友谊，确保语意连贯、符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头：引出话题，说明与朋友交流的重要性，如“A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart. It's important for us to communicate with our friends. Here are some suggestions.”
2. 主体：分点给出建议，对应思维导图内容：
信任：First, we should trust our friends.
分享：Second, we should learn to share our experiences with our friends, especially when we have problems. Sharing a problem is like cutting it in half.
帮助：Third, we should help each other. When our friends are in trouble, we should try to help them to solve problems.
补充（对应思维导图“...”）：Last but not least, we should do something together. This can help us understand each other better.
3. 结尾：总结，强调交流对友谊的作用，如“In a word, we should communicate with our friends. It can make our friendship stronger.”
【答案】
How to communicate with our friends
A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart. It's important for us to communicate with our friends. Here are some suggestions.
First, we should trust our friends. Second, we should learn to share our experiences with our friends, especially when we have problems. Sharing a problem is like cutting it in half. Third, we should help each other. When our friends are in trouble, we should try to help them to solve problems. Last but not least, we should do something together. This can help us understand each other better.
In a word, we should communicate with our friends. It can make our friendship stronger.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、思维导图运用、英语短文写作
【点评】
本题结合思维导图考查英语话题写作能力，围绕“如何与朋友交流”展开，结构清晰，要点明确，既考查语言组织能力，又引导学生思考友谊的维系方式，符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确写作主题是“How to communicate with our friends”，需结合思维导图的“trust（信任）、share（分享）、help（帮助）”及补充内容展开。第一步开头引出与朋友交流对维系友谊的重要性；第二步分点阐述具体建议，对应思维导图要点依次说明信任、分享、帮助的做法及意义，再补充一起做事情增进理解；第三步总结，点明合理交流能巩固友谊，确保语意连贯、符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开头：引出话题，说明与朋友交流的重要性，如“A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart. It's important for us to communicate with our friends. Here are some suggestions.”
2. 主体：分点给出建议，对应思维导图内容：
信任：First, we should trust our friends.
分享：Second, we should learn to share our experiences with our friends, especially when we have problems. Sharing a problem is like cutting it in half.
帮助：Third, we should help each other. When our friends are in trouble, we should try to help them to solve problems.
补充（对应思维导图“...”）：Last but not least, we should do something together. This can help us understand each other better.
3. 结尾：总结，强调交流对友谊的作用，如“In a word, we should communicate with our friends. It can make our friendship stronger.”
【答案】
How to communicate with our friends
A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart. It's important for us to communicate with our friends. Here are some suggestions.
First, we should trust our friends. Second, we should learn to share our experiences with our friends, especially when we have problems. Sharing a problem is like cutting it in half. Third, we should help each other. When our friends are in trouble, we should try to help them to solve problems. Last but not least, we should do something together. This can help us understand each other better.
In a word, we should communicate with our friends. It can make our friendship stronger.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、思维导图运用、英语短文写作
【点评】
本题结合思维导图考查英语话题写作能力，围绕“如何与朋友交流”展开，结构清晰，要点明确，既考查语言组织能力，又引导学生思考友谊的维系方式，符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
