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八、书面表达
假设你是李华，你的妈妈是餐馆服务员。请根据下面表格中的提示信息，写一篇
英语短文介绍你妈妈的日常工作。词数80个左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含表格中的所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua.
假设你是李华，你的妈妈是餐馆服务员。请根据下面表格中的提示信息，写一篇
英语短文介绍你妈妈的日常工作。词数80个左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含表格中的所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua.
My mother is a waitress in a restaurant.
She works from 10:00 a.m. to 8:00 p.m. every day. In the restaurant, she greets guests when they come and leads them to the tables.
She also serves meals and drinks from the kitchen to the tables. After meals, she cleans the tables and washes the plates.
My mother is very busy, but she loves her job very much.
She is happy because she can help others and make money for our family.
答案
参考范文
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua.
My mother is a waitress in a restaurant.
She works from 10:00 a.m. to 8:00 p.m. every day. In the restaurant, she greets guests when they come and leads them to the tables. She also serves meals and drinks from the kitchen to the tables. After meals, she cleans the tables and washes the plates.
My mother is very busy, but she loves her job very much. She is happy because she can help others and make money for our family.
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua.
My mother is a waitress in a restaurant.
She works from 10:00 a.m. to 8:00 p.m. every day. In the restaurant, she greets guests when they come and leads them to the tables. She also serves meals and drinks from the kitchen to the tables. After meals, she cleans the tables and washes the plates.
My mother is very busy, but she loves her job very much. She is happy because she can help others and make money for our family.
解析
【分析】本题是英语书面表达题，要求以李华的身份介绍做餐馆服务员的妈妈的日常工作，需覆盖表格中所有提示信息（工作时间、日常工作、感受），开头已给出，词数约80。解题思路：1. 承接开头点明妈妈的职业；2. 按表格顺序介绍工作时间；3. 围绕日常工作，包含表格的问候客人、洗盘子，适当补充合理内容使行文连贯；4. 最后表达妈妈的感受，确保语句通顺、符合词数要求。
【解析】1. 承接开头，点明妈妈职业：My mother is a waitress in a restaurant.；2. 介绍工作时间：She works from 10:00 a.m. to 8:00 p.m. every day.；3. 日常工作：结合表格内容，补充合理细节使内容完整：When guests come, she greets them and shows them to seats. She also serves meals and drinks. After meals, she cleans the tables and washes the plates.；4. 表达感受：My mother is very busy, but she loves her job very much. She is happy because she can help others and make money for our family.；注意所有提示信息都需包含，语句连贯，词数符合要求。
【答案】参考范文
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua.
My mother is a waitress in a restaurant.
She works from 10:00 a.m. to 8:00 p.m. every day. In the restaurant, she greets guests when they come and leads them to the tables. She also serves meals and drinks from the kitchen to the tables. After meals, she cleans the tables and washes the plates.
My mother is very busy, but she loves her job very much. She is happy because she can help others and make money for our family.
【知识点】英语书面表达、人物介绍、日常活动描述
【点评】本题为初中英语基础书面表达题，考查学生整合提示信息、运用英语进行连贯写作的能力，要求覆盖所有要点并适当拓展，难度适中，适合巩固日常英语表达。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】1. 承接开头，点明妈妈职业：My mother is a waitress in a restaurant.；2. 介绍工作时间：She works from 10:00 a.m. to 8:00 p.m. every day.；3. 日常工作：结合表格内容，补充合理细节使内容完整：When guests come, she greets them and shows them to seats. She also serves meals and drinks. After meals, she cleans the tables and washes the plates.；4. 表达感受：My mother is very busy, but she loves her job very much. She is happy because she can help others and make money for our family.；注意所有提示信息都需包含，语句连贯，词数符合要求。
【答案】参考范文
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua.
My mother is a waitress in a restaurant.
She works from 10:00 a.m. to 8:00 p.m. every day. In the restaurant, she greets guests when they come and leads them to the tables. She also serves meals and drinks from the kitchen to the tables. After meals, she cleans the tables and washes the plates.
My mother is very busy, but she loves her job very much. She is happy because she can help others and make money for our family.
【知识点】英语书面表达、人物介绍、日常活动描述
【点评】本题为初中英语基础书面表达题，考查学生整合提示信息、运用英语进行连贯写作的能力，要求覆盖所有要点并适当拓展，难度适中，适合巩固日常英语表达。
【难度系数】0.3
