书面表达

One possible version：
Happiness is important because it makes our lives more meaningful and enjoyable.
When we learn to be glad about the small things in our family, happiness will follow.
One of the happiest moments in my life was when my family and I went to the museum. I had a bad summer holiday that year because of my broken leg. My mum and dad did not tell me about the trip until the week before we left. That day we saw many different kinds of fossils and exciting shows. We all had great fun.
I love my parents so much for giving me such a special experience.

【分析】
本次书面表达主题为“幸福”，解题思路如下：首先明确文章结构，开篇点明幸福对生活的重要性；其次选取具体的个人经历作为支撑，让内容更生动真实；最后结尾升华情感，呼应主题。
【解析】
按照以下步骤写作：1. 开篇阐述幸福的意义，说明其能让生活更有意义和愉悦；2. 选取具体事例：因腿断度过糟糕的暑假，父母隐瞒带自己去博物馆，看到化石和表演，全家玩得开心；3. 结尾表达对父母的感激，点明幸福源于家人的爱。
【答案】
One possible version：
Happiness is important because it makes our lives more meaningful and enjoyable.
When we learn to be glad about the small things in our family, happiness will follow.
One of the happiest moments in my life was when my family and I went to the museum. I had a bad summer holiday that year because of my broken leg. My mum and dad did not tell me about the trip until the week before we left. That day we saw many different kinds of fossils and exciting shows. We all had great fun.
I love my parents so much for giving me such a special experience.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、记叙文写作、主题表达
【点评】
该范文结构清晰，逻辑连贯，通过具体事例诠释幸福的内涵，情感真挚，语言通顺，符合书面表达的要求。
【难度系数】
0.7

写作创新·看图写作 家庭是心灵的港湾，当我们学会为家里的小事感到高兴时，幸福就会随之而来。假设你是王明，请你根据以下图片的提示，用英文写一篇短文，分享你和你的家庭成员之间的温暖回忆。

注意：（1）短文应包含前两幅图片中的主要信息，并发挥合理想象描述第3幅图。
（2）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
（3）语句连贯，词数60左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
【巧列提纲】（以下部分仅供参考，希望同学们可以多开动脑筋、发散思维）
思路点拨
强调幸福的重要性 请列点：1. 2. ...
描述图片信息 请列点：1. 2. ... Tips [时间、人物、事件的经过等]
表达对家庭成员的爱 请列点：1. 2. ...
【实战演练】
Happiness is important because it makes our lives more meaningful and enjoyable.
【写作评价】（评分原则与方法可参考本书最后一页）

分项 自评分 互评分 老师评分
内容分 强调幸福的重要性（1分）
内容分 描述图片信息（5分）
内容分 表达对家庭成员的爱（1分）
语言分（8分）
总分（15分）

When we learn to be glad about the small things in our family, happiness will follow.
One of the happiest moments in my life was when my family and I went to the museum. I had a bad summer holiday that year because of my broken leg. My mum and dad did not tell me about the trip until the week before we left. That day we saw many different kinds of fossils and exciting shows. We all had great fun.
I love my parents so much for giving me such a special experience.

【分析】首先，承接给定的开头，围绕“家庭小事带来幸福”的主题，需包含前两幅图的核心信息（“我”因腿受伤假期不开心，父母带“我”去博物馆），合理想象第三幅图的场景（如一起看化石、玩得开心），最后表达对家人的爱，注意词数60左右，语句连贯，避免真实信息。
【解析】1. 衔接开头，引出具体事例：One of my happiest moments in my life was when my family and I went to the museum. 2. 补充前两幅图细节：I had a bad summer holiday that year because of my broken leg. My parents didn’t tell me about the trip until the week before leaving. 3. 描述第三幅图内容：We saw many different fossils and exciting shows, having great fun together. 4. 表达情感：I love my parents so much for giving me this special experience.
【答案】When we learn to be glad about the small things in our family, happiness will follow.
One of the happiest moments in my life was when my family and I went to the museum. I had a bad summer holiday that year because of my broken leg. My mum and dad did not tell me about the trip until the week before we left. That day we saw many different kinds of fossils and exciting shows. We all had great fun.
I love my parents so much for giving me such a special experience.
【知识点】英语看图写作、家庭主题短文、情感表达
【点评】本题为英语写作创新题，围绕“家庭温暖与幸福”主题，要求结合图片信息合理创作，既考查学生的英语语言运用能力，又引导学生体会亲情，符合初中英语写作的考查目标，需学生具备一定的叙事与情感表达能力。
【难度系数】0.5