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51. 上文告诉我们，长久的友谊离不开诚实、乐于分享与彼此理解这三个关键品质。请你以“Friendship in My Heart”为题，给校刊“英语美文”专栏投稿，分享你和朋友间的故事，谈谈你对友谊的理解。要点如下：
(1)介绍你最好的朋友，包括他/她的外貌、性格；
(2)描述你们一次共同的经历，写清事情的时间、地点与经过等；
(3)评价你们之间的友谊。
注意：
(1)不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
(2)语句连贯，词数80左右，作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Friendship in My Heart
Friendship is like sunshine in my life.
51. 上文告诉我们，长久的友谊离不开诚实、乐于分享与彼此理解这三个关键品质。请你以“Friendship in My Heart”为题，给校刊“英语美文”专栏投稿，分享你和朋友间的故事，谈谈你对友谊的理解。要点如下：
(1)介绍你最好的朋友，包括他/她的外貌、性格；
(2)描述你们一次共同的经历，写清事情的时间、地点与经过等；
(3)评价你们之间的友谊。
注意：
(1)不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
(2)语句连贯，词数80左右，作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Friendship in My Heart
Friendship is like sunshine in my life.
答案
51. 参考范文：
Friendship in My Heart
Friendship is like sunshine in my life.
My best friend is Jack. He is tall and he is as outgoing as me. He is a warm-hearted boy and he is always ready to help others.
Jack studies very hard. When I have difficulty in learning, he always helps me. Last year, I was bad at English. So he came to my house and helped me with it every day. With his help, I finally got good grades.
I think Jack is a true friend who reaches for my hand and touches my heart. I like him so much that I hope our friendship will last forever.
Friendship in My Heart
Friendship is like sunshine in my life.
My best friend is Jack. He is tall and he is as outgoing as me. He is a warm-hearted boy and he is always ready to help others.
Jack studies very hard. When I have difficulty in learning, he always helps me. Last year, I was bad at English. So he came to my house and helped me with it every day. With his help, I finally got good grades.
I think Jack is a true friend who reaches for my hand and touches my heart. I like him so much that I hope our friendship will last forever.
解析
【分析】
首先审题，明确题目要求：需完成“Friendship in My Heart”的英语短文，覆盖三个核心要点——介绍最好朋友的外貌与性格、描述一次共同经历（含时间、地点、经过）、评价友谊，词数80左右，开头已给出，不得出现真实信息。解题思路：1. 虚构朋友的名字，简单描述其外貌（如tall）和性格（如outgoing、warm-hearted）；2. 选取具体生活经历（如学习上的帮助），明确时间（如last year）、地点（如my house），写清事件起因、经过、结果；3. 用简洁语句评价友谊，表达对友谊的理解，确保语句连贯、词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，介绍朋友的外貌与性格：My best friend is Jack. He is tall and outgoing, warm-hearted and always ready to help others.
2. 叙述具体经历：Last year I was poor in English, so Jack came to my house to help me with it every day. With his help, I got good grades finally.（明确时间、地点、经过）
3. 评价友谊：I think he is a true friend who touches my heart, and I hope our friendship lasts forever.（紧扣友谊主题，表达感悟）
整体控制词数，确保语句连贯，无真实信息，覆盖所有要点。
【答案】
Friendship in My Heart
Friendship is like sunshine in my life.
My best friend is Jack. He is tall and he is as outgoing as me. He is a warm-hearted boy and he is always ready to help others.
Jack studies very hard. When I have difficulty in learning, he always helps me. Last year, I was bad at English. So he came to my house and helped me with it every day. With his help, I finally got good grades.
I think Jack is a true friend who reaches for my hand and touches my heart. I like him so much that I hope our friendship will last forever.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、记叙文写作、友谊主题英语表达
【点评】
范文全面覆盖题目要求的所有要点，内容具体充实，语言简洁流畅，用词准确恰当，符合初中英语写作的词数要求，生动诠释了友谊的意义，是一篇优秀的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先审题，明确题目要求：需完成“Friendship in My Heart”的英语短文，覆盖三个核心要点——介绍最好朋友的外貌与性格、描述一次共同经历（含时间、地点、经过）、评价友谊，词数80左右，开头已给出，不得出现真实信息。解题思路：1. 虚构朋友的名字，简单描述其外貌（如tall）和性格（如outgoing、warm-hearted）；2. 选取具体生活经历（如学习上的帮助），明确时间（如last year）、地点（如my house），写清事件起因、经过、结果；3. 用简洁语句评价友谊，表达对友谊的理解，确保语句连贯、词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，介绍朋友的外貌与性格：My best friend is Jack. He is tall and outgoing, warm-hearted and always ready to help others.
2. 叙述具体经历：Last year I was poor in English, so Jack came to my house to help me with it every day. With his help, I got good grades finally.（明确时间、地点、经过）
3. 评价友谊：I think he is a true friend who touches my heart, and I hope our friendship lasts forever.（紧扣友谊主题，表达感悟）
整体控制词数，确保语句连贯，无真实信息，覆盖所有要点。
【答案】
Friendship in My Heart
Friendship is like sunshine in my life.
My best friend is Jack. He is tall and he is as outgoing as me. He is a warm-hearted boy and he is always ready to help others.
Jack studies very hard. When I have difficulty in learning, he always helps me. Last year, I was bad at English. So he came to my house and helped me with it every day. With his help, I finally got good grades.
I think Jack is a true friend who reaches for my hand and touches my heart. I like him so much that I hope our friendship will last forever.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、记叙文写作、友谊主题英语表达
【点评】
范文全面覆盖题目要求的所有要点，内容具体充实，语言简洁流畅，用词准确恰当，符合初中英语写作的词数要求，生动诠释了友谊的意义，是一篇优秀的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
