三、书面表达
假如你是Mike,你的朋友Tom给你发了一封电子邮件,他想了解一下你难忘的一次旅游经历。请根据以下要点提示和写作要求,给他回复一封电子邮件。
要点提示:
1. Where did you go?
2. What did you do there?
3. What did you learn from the experience?
写作要求:
1. 短文应包含以上所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息;
3. 词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
I am happy to get your email. I will share one of my travel experiences with you.







Best wishes.
Yours,
Mike

One possible version:
I went to a farm with my classmates last month. At 7: 00 a. m. we got to the farm by bus. After arriving there, the farmer welcomed us warmly. He showed us large tents with many vegetables and fruits, such as cucumbers and tomatoes. Then we watered some tomato plants. The farmer taught us how to cut branches and leaves from tomato plants. We picked some strawberries and took them back to school. They tasted very delicious.
I had a good time on the farm and learned a lot from this meaningful activity. It taught us the value of hard work.

【分析】
本题要求以Mike的身份给Tom回复邮件，分享难忘的旅游经历，需涵盖三个核心要点：旅游地点、活动内容、收获感悟。解题思路为：1. 确定贴近生活的具体旅游场景（如农场），便于展开细节；2. 围绕要点补充行程细节（交通方式、具体活动）；3. 总结经历带来的感悟，确保符合邮件格式、词数要求，不出现真实信息。
【解析】
写作时按以下步骤展开：1. 承接已给开头，明确旅游地点（如和同学去农场）；2. 描述行程细节：交通方式、农民的接待、具体活动（浇水、剪枝、摘草莓）；3. 点明收获：体会劳动的价值，呼应“难忘”主题，用词简单，控制词数在要求范围内。
【答案】
One possible version:
I went to a farm with my classmates last month. At 7: 00 a. m. we got to the farm by bus. After arriving there, the farmer welcomed us warmly. He showed us large tents with many vegetables and fruits, such as cucumbers and tomatoes. Then we watered some tomato plants. The farmer taught us how to cut branches and leaves from tomato plants. We picked some strawberries and took them back to school. They tasted very delicious.
I had a good time on the farm and learned a lot from this meaningful activity. It taught us the value of hard work.
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、旅游经历描述、要点式书面表达
【点评】
范文覆盖所有要点，内容具体生动，语言符合初中英语水平，结构清晰，结尾点明感悟，符合邮件格式和写作要求，是一篇合格的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.6