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五、书面表达
学校英语社团举办题为“My favorite teacher”的英语征文活动，请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文参赛：
1. 老师的外貌、性格、所教科目等；
2. 以事例描述喜爱的原因；
3. 表达对这位老师的感激和祝福。
要求：
1. 要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2. 词数:80词左右，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
My Favorite Teacher
I'd like to write something about my favorite teacher.
学校英语社团举办题为“My favorite teacher”的英语征文活动，请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文参赛：
1. 老师的外貌、性格、所教科目等；
2. 以事例描述喜爱的原因；
3. 表达对这位老师的感激和祝福。
要求：
1. 要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2. 词数:80词左右，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
My Favorite Teacher
I'd like to write something about my favorite teacher.
Of all the teachers, I like my English teacher best. She is a lovely and outgoing girl who loves singing and reading. She is of medium height and has long straight hair. When I was in Grade Seven, I was so shy that I was afraid to take part in the English competition. She encouraged me not to give up any chance to show myself to others. Thanks to her, I changed my attitude and won the first prize. I will never forget the wonderful time we were together. Best wishes to her!
答案
My Favorite Teacher
I'd like to write something about my favorite teacher. Of all the teachers, I like my English teacher best. She is a lovely and outgoing girl who loves singing and reading. She is of medium height and has long straight hair.
When I was in Grade Seven, I was so shy that I was afraid to take part in the English competition. She encouraged me not to give up any chance to show myself to others. Thanks to her, I changed my attitude and won the first prize.
I will never forget the wonderful time we were together. Best wishes to her!
I'd like to write something about my favorite teacher. Of all the teachers, I like my English teacher best. She is a lovely and outgoing girl who loves singing and reading. She is of medium height and has long straight hair.
When I was in Grade Seven, I was so shy that I was afraid to take part in the English competition. She encouraged me not to give up any chance to show myself to others. Thanks to her, I changed my attitude and won the first prize.
I will never forget the wonderful time we were together. Best wishes to her!
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，主题是“My favorite teacher”，需完成三个核心要求：介绍老师的外貌、性格及所教科目，用事例说明喜爱原因，表达感激与祝福。解题思路：首先确定贴近学生生活的核心人物（如英语老师），接着按顺序组织内容：先点明最喜欢的老师身份，再描述老师的基本特征，然后选取具体事例体现老师的帮助，最后抒发感激与祝福，同时注意控制词数，适当添加细节让文章生动。
【解析】1. 承接已给开头，点明最喜欢的老师是英语老师；2. 描述老师的外貌（中等身高、长直发）、性格（开朗、爱唱歌阅读）及所教科目（英语）；3. 选取七年级时的事例：自己因害羞不敢参加英语竞赛，老师鼓励后改变态度并获奖，说明喜爱的原因；4. 结尾表达对老师的难忘时光与祝福，确保要点齐全、词数符合要求。
【答案】My Favorite Teacher
I'd like to write something about my favorite teacher. Of all the teachers, I like my English teacher best. She is a lovely and outgoing girl who loves singing and reading. She is of medium height and has long straight hair.
When I was in Grade Seven, I was so shy that I was afraid to take part in the English competition. She encouraged me not to give up any chance to show myself to others. Thanks to her, I changed my attitude and won the first prize.
I will never forget the wonderful time we were together. Best wishes to her!
【知识点】英语书面表达、人物话题写作、英语应用文写作
【点评】本文紧扣征文主题，涵盖所有要求的要点，事例具体真实，语言流畅自然，情感真挚，符合80词左右的要求，是一篇优秀的参赛习作。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 承接已给开头，点明最喜欢的老师是英语老师；2. 描述老师的外貌（中等身高、长直发）、性格（开朗、爱唱歌阅读）及所教科目（英语）；3. 选取七年级时的事例：自己因害羞不敢参加英语竞赛，老师鼓励后改变态度并获奖，说明喜爱的原因；4. 结尾表达对老师的难忘时光与祝福，确保要点齐全、词数符合要求。
【答案】My Favorite Teacher
I'd like to write something about my favorite teacher. Of all the teachers, I like my English teacher best. She is a lovely and outgoing girl who loves singing and reading. She is of medium height and has long straight hair.
When I was in Grade Seven, I was so shy that I was afraid to take part in the English competition. She encouraged me not to give up any chance to show myself to others. Thanks to her, I changed my attitude and won the first prize.
I will never forget the wonderful time we were together. Best wishes to her!
【知识点】英语书面表达、人物话题写作、英语应用文写作
【点评】本文紧扣征文主题，涵盖所有要求的要点，事例具体真实，语言流畅自然，情感真挚，符合80词左右的要求，是一篇优秀的参赛习作。
【难度系数】0.6
