51. 阳光儿童医院计划在暑假招募一批志愿者,服务内容如下:帮助医院打扫卫生、照顾生病的小朋友。假如你是第一中学的王凯,受到 Melvin Sheppard 故事的鼓舞,决定参与志愿活动,请给该项目的负责人周先生写一封申请信。
内容提示:
(1)申请成为志愿者;
(2)说明自己乐于助人,善于帮助小朋友。
要求:
(1)申请信要包含以上所有要点,可适当发挥。
(2)词数 80 左右,信的格式和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr Zhou,
I'm Wang Kai from No. 1 Middle School.
Yours,
Wang Kai
内容提示:
(1)申请成为志愿者;
(2)说明自己乐于助人,善于帮助小朋友。
要求:
(1)申请信要包含以上所有要点,可适当发挥。
(2)词数 80 左右,信的格式和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr Zhou,
I'm Wang Kai from No. 1 Middle School.
I want to be a volunteer to help at the Sunshine Children's Hospital. I'm always ready to help others. I can help to clean the room, make the bed and care for the sick children.
Well, I'm good with children. I can teach them to sing and draw. I can also tell them stories.
When I'm with them, I can always cheer them up. I hope I can get this job.
And if I can get this job, I believe I will be a great helper.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Wang Kai
答案
参考范文:
Dear Mr Zhou,
I'm Wang Kai from No. 1 Middle School.
I want to be a volunteer to help at the Sunshine Children's Hospital. I'm always ready to help others. I can help to clean the room, make the bed and care for the sick children. Well, I'm good with children. I can teach them to sing and draw. I can also tell them stories. When I'm with them, I can always cheer them up. I hope I can get this job. And if I can get this job, I believe I will be a great helper.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Wang Kai
Dear Mr Zhou,
I'm Wang Kai from No. 1 Middle School.
I want to be a volunteer to help at the Sunshine Children's Hospital. I'm always ready to help others. I can help to clean the room, make the bed and care for the sick children. Well, I'm good with children. I can teach them to sing and draw. I can also tell them stories. When I'm with them, I can always cheer them up. I hope I can get this job. And if I can get this job, I believe I will be a great helper.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Wang Kai
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一封申请志愿者的英文信,需完成两个核心要点:一是明确表达申请成为志愿者的意愿;二是说明自身乐于助人、善于与小朋友相处的优势。写作时需遵循申请信的格式,开头已给出,补充内容要简洁(约80词),可适当添加具体细节(如教小朋友唱歌、讲故事等)丰富内容,最后用礼貌用语表达期待回复。
【解析】
首先开篇直接表明申请意愿;接着说明自己乐于助人的特点,列举可承担的志愿工作(如打扫卫生、照顾生病小朋友);然后阐述自己善于与小朋友相处的具体表现(如教唱歌、画画、讲故事,能让小朋友开心);最后表达对获得机会的期待,并用礼貌用语收尾。
【答案】
参考范文:
Dear Mr Zhou,
I'm Wang Kai from No. 1 Middle School.
I want to be a volunteer to help at the Sunshine Children's Hospital. I'm always ready to help others. I can help to clean the room, make the bed and care for the sick children. Well, I'm good with children. I can teach them to sing and draw. I can also tell them stories. When I'm with them, I can always cheer them up. I hope I can get this job. And if I can get this job, I believe I will be a great helper.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Wang Kai
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、申请信格式
【点评】
本题考查英文申请信的写作,要求学生掌握申请信的基本结构,准确传达申请意愿与个人优势,符合初中英语写作的考查方向,注重语言的得体性和实用性。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求写一封申请志愿者的英文信,需完成两个核心要点:一是明确表达申请成为志愿者的意愿;二是说明自身乐于助人、善于与小朋友相处的优势。写作时需遵循申请信的格式,开头已给出,补充内容要简洁(约80词),可适当添加具体细节(如教小朋友唱歌、讲故事等)丰富内容,最后用礼貌用语表达期待回复。
【解析】
首先开篇直接表明申请意愿;接着说明自己乐于助人的特点,列举可承担的志愿工作(如打扫卫生、照顾生病小朋友);然后阐述自己善于与小朋友相处的具体表现(如教唱歌、画画、讲故事,能让小朋友开心);最后表达对获得机会的期待,并用礼貌用语收尾。
【答案】
参考范文:
Dear Mr Zhou,
I'm Wang Kai from No. 1 Middle School.
I want to be a volunteer to help at the Sunshine Children's Hospital. I'm always ready to help others. I can help to clean the room, make the bed and care for the sick children. Well, I'm good with children. I can teach them to sing and draw. I can also tell them stories. When I'm with them, I can always cheer them up. I hope I can get this job. And if I can get this job, I believe I will be a great helper.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Wang Kai
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、申请信格式
【点评】
本题考查英文申请信的写作,要求学生掌握申请信的基本结构,准确传达申请意愿与个人优势,符合初中英语写作的考查方向,注重语言的得体性和实用性。
【难度系数】
0.5
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