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中国是一个有着五千多年历史的国家，在民间流传着许多传统艺术和文化。假如你叫李华，你的外国朋友 Sam 对中国传统文化很感兴趣，他写信向你询问有关中国传统文化的事情。请你写一篇英文短文向 Sam 介绍下面两种传统艺术，要求包含以下要点。
Dear Sam，
I'm glad to hear from you. You said you had great interest in traditional Chinese culture. Now let me tell you something about it.
Yours，
Li Hua
中国是一个有着五千多年历史的国家，在民间流传着许多传统艺术和文化。假如你叫李华，你的外国朋友 Sam 对中国传统文化很感兴趣，他写信向你询问有关中国传统文化的事情。请你写一篇英文短文向 Sam 介绍下面两种传统艺术，要求包含以下要点。
Dear Sam，
I'm glad to hear from you. You said you had great interest in traditional Chinese culture. Now let me tell you something about it.
The Chinese knot is one of the traditional Chinese art forms. It is made of silk thread. It usually comes in red in the shape of flowers, animals and so on. The Chinese knot carries the meaning of good luck. Another traditional Chinese art form is paper - cutting. We can use scissors to cut out different patterns. People usually put up paper - cuts on doors, windows, etc. Paper - cuts often express people's hope for happiness. I think the two traditional Chinese art forms are precious treasures. I hope more and more young people like them and develop them.
Yours，
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Sam,
I'm glad to hear from you. You said you had great interest in traditional Chinese culture. Now let me tell you something about it.
The Chinese knot is one of the traditional Chinese art forms. It is made of silk thread. It usually comes in red in the shape of flowers, animals and so on. The Chinese knot carries the meaning of good luck. Another traditional Chinese art form is paper - cutting. We can use scissors to cut out different patterns. People usually put up paper - cuts on doors, windows, etc. Paper - cuts often express people's hope for happiness.
I think the two traditional Chinese art forms are precious treasures. I hope more and more young people like them and develop them.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Sam,
I'm glad to hear from you. You said you had great interest in traditional Chinese culture. Now let me tell you something about it.
The Chinese knot is one of the traditional Chinese art forms. It is made of silk thread. It usually comes in red in the shape of flowers, animals and so on. The Chinese knot carries the meaning of good luck. Another traditional Chinese art form is paper - cutting. We can use scissors to cut out different patterns. People usually put up paper - cuts on doors, windows, etc. Paper - cuts often express people's hope for happiness.
I think the two traditional Chinese art forms are precious treasures. I hope more and more young people like them and develop them.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
这是一篇给外国友人介绍中国传统艺术的书信类写作，解题时首先要梳理所有给定的信息点，避免遗漏：首先按顺序分别介绍中国结和剪纸的相关属性，介绍中国结时要覆盖材料丝线、红色、造型为花和动物等要点，介绍剪纸时要覆盖制作工具材料、可剪出多样图案、张贴在门窗上的用途要点；之后再完成题干要求的两个部分：阐述你对这两种传统艺术的看法，再说明你的期望。行文要贴合给好友写信的轻松自然的语气，适当补充符合文化常识的寓意内容，让文章衔接更流畅，逻辑更清晰。
【解析】
1. 承接题干给出的开篇内容，首先引出第一个介绍对象中国结：点明它是中国传统艺术形式之一，依次说明它以丝线为制作材料，通常为红色，造型多为花、动物等样式，补充它承载着好运的美好寓意，让内容更生动。
2. 用过渡词衔接引出第二个介绍对象剪纸：说明剪纸是另一项中国传统艺术，人们使用纸张和剪刀就可以剪出各式各样的图案，人们通常会把做好的剪纸张贴在门、窗上，补充剪纸寄托了人们对幸福生活的向往，符合文化常识。
3. 完成题干要求的两个核心要点：首先表达自己的看法，点明这两项传统艺术都是非常珍贵的文化瑰宝，之后说明自己的期望，希望越来越多的年轻人喜爱它们，并且将它们传承发展下去，最后配合题干给出的落款完成全文，检查所有信息点无遗漏，语句通顺符合英语表达规范。
【答案】
Dear Sam,
I'm glad to hear from you. You said you had great interest in traditional Chinese culture. Now let me tell you something about it.
The Chinese knot is one of the traditional Chinese art forms. It is made of silk thread. It usually comes in red in the shape of flowers, animals and so on. The Chinese knot carries the meaning of good luck. Another traditional Chinese art form is paper - cutting. We can use scissors to cut out different patterns. People usually put up paper - cuts on doors, windows, etc. Paper - cuts often express people's hope for happiness.
I think the two traditional Chinese art forms are precious treasures. I hope more and more young people like them and develop them.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作，传统文化表达，写作要点整合
【点评】
本题属于传统文化主题的初中英语应用文写作，所有核心信息点都已给出，学生只需要将零散的信息点用通顺的英文串联起来，适当补充合理的文化寓意即可完成写作，难度较低，既考察了学生的基础英文表达能力，也能帮助学生加深对中国传统民间艺术的了解。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇给外国友人介绍中国传统艺术的书信类写作，解题时首先要梳理所有给定的信息点，避免遗漏：首先按顺序分别介绍中国结和剪纸的相关属性，介绍中国结时要覆盖材料丝线、红色、造型为花和动物等要点，介绍剪纸时要覆盖制作工具材料、可剪出多样图案、张贴在门窗上的用途要点；之后再完成题干要求的两个部分：阐述你对这两种传统艺术的看法，再说明你的期望。行文要贴合给好友写信的轻松自然的语气，适当补充符合文化常识的寓意内容，让文章衔接更流畅，逻辑更清晰。
【解析】
1. 承接题干给出的开篇内容，首先引出第一个介绍对象中国结：点明它是中国传统艺术形式之一，依次说明它以丝线为制作材料，通常为红色，造型多为花、动物等样式，补充它承载着好运的美好寓意，让内容更生动。
2. 用过渡词衔接引出第二个介绍对象剪纸：说明剪纸是另一项中国传统艺术，人们使用纸张和剪刀就可以剪出各式各样的图案，人们通常会把做好的剪纸张贴在门、窗上，补充剪纸寄托了人们对幸福生活的向往，符合文化常识。
3. 完成题干要求的两个核心要点：首先表达自己的看法，点明这两项传统艺术都是非常珍贵的文化瑰宝，之后说明自己的期望，希望越来越多的年轻人喜爱它们，并且将它们传承发展下去，最后配合题干给出的落款完成全文，检查所有信息点无遗漏，语句通顺符合英语表达规范。
【答案】
Dear Sam,
I'm glad to hear from you. You said you had great interest in traditional Chinese culture. Now let me tell you something about it.
The Chinese knot is one of the traditional Chinese art forms. It is made of silk thread. It usually comes in red in the shape of flowers, animals and so on. The Chinese knot carries the meaning of good luck. Another traditional Chinese art form is paper - cutting. We can use scissors to cut out different patterns. People usually put up paper - cuts on doors, windows, etc. Paper - cuts often express people's hope for happiness.
I think the two traditional Chinese art forms are precious treasures. I hope more and more young people like them and develop them.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作，传统文化表达，写作要点整合
【点评】
本题属于传统文化主题的初中英语应用文写作，所有核心信息点都已给出，学生只需要将零散的信息点用通顺的英文串联起来，适当补充合理的文化寓意即可完成写作，难度较低，既考察了学生的基础英文表达能力，也能帮助学生加深对中国传统民间艺术的了解。
【难度系数】
0.7
