三、实战演练
娱乐是我们生活中不可或缺的一部分,它让我们在忙碌中得到放松和快乐。但过多娱乐,也会使我们的生活受到影响。只有找到适合自己的娱乐方式,适度娱乐,才能够使身心愉悦。请根据所给要点,谈谈你的看法。
1. 娱乐的重要性;
2. 过度娱乐的不利影响;
3. 你的看法。
要求:70 词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
Fun is important in a number of ways.
First,
娱乐是我们生活中不可或缺的一部分,它让我们在忙碌中得到放松和快乐。但过多娱乐,也会使我们的生活受到影响。只有找到适合自己的娱乐方式,适度娱乐,才能够使身心愉悦。请根据所给要点,谈谈你的看法。
1. 娱乐的重要性;
2. 过度娱乐的不利影响;
3. 你的看法。
要求:70 词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
Fun is important in a number of ways.
First,
it can do away with bad feelings and lift our spirits. Then, it keeps us feeling youthful. At last, having fun is a good way to connect with others.
答案
One possible version:
Fun is important in a number of ways. First, it can do away with bad feelings and lift our spirits. Then, it keeps us feeling youthful. At last, having fun is a good way to connect with others.
However, too much fun is like a time - eating monster. It will eat away our time, and even make us get lost in it.
So, we should have fun in a proper way. We need to work hard, but we should be able to play hard, too.
Fun is important in a number of ways. First, it can do away with bad feelings and lift our spirits. Then, it keeps us feeling youthful. At last, having fun is a good way to connect with others.
However, too much fun is like a time - eating monster. It will eat away our time, and even make us get lost in it.
So, we should have fun in a proper way. We need to work hard, but we should be able to play hard, too.
解析
【解析】
本文需围绕“娱乐的重要性、过度娱乐的不利影响、个人看法”三个要点展开写作。首先分点阐述娱乐的重要作用,如舒缓情绪、保持活力、增进人际;接着点明过度娱乐浪费时间、使人沉迷的危害;最后提出适度娱乐的观点,注意紧扣主题,控制词数在要求范围内,语言简洁连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
Fun is important in a number of ways. First, it can do away with bad feelings and lift our spirits. Then, it keeps us feeling youthful. At last, having fun is a good way to connect with others.
However, too much fun is like a time - eating monster. It will eat away our time, and even make us get lost in it.
So, we should have fun in a proper way. We need to work hard, but we should be able to play hard, too.
【知识点】
英语议论文写作、话题类短文写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要点,结构清晰,层次分明,从娱乐的重要性到过度娱乐的危害,再到个人观点,逻辑连贯;用词生动贴切,如“time - eating monster”形象地体现过度娱乐的弊端,符合词数要求,是一篇优秀的话题作文范例。
【难度系数】
0.6
本文需围绕“娱乐的重要性、过度娱乐的不利影响、个人看法”三个要点展开写作。首先分点阐述娱乐的重要作用,如舒缓情绪、保持活力、增进人际;接着点明过度娱乐浪费时间、使人沉迷的危害;最后提出适度娱乐的观点,注意紧扣主题,控制词数在要求范围内,语言简洁连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
Fun is important in a number of ways. First, it can do away with bad feelings and lift our spirits. Then, it keeps us feeling youthful. At last, having fun is a good way to connect with others.
However, too much fun is like a time - eating monster. It will eat away our time, and even make us get lost in it.
So, we should have fun in a proper way. We need to work hard, but we should be able to play hard, too.
【知识点】
英语议论文写作、话题类短文写作
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要点,结构清晰,层次分明,从娱乐的重要性到过度娱乐的危害,再到个人观点,逻辑连贯;用词生动贴切,如“time - eating monster”形象地体现过度娱乐的弊端,符合词数要求,是一篇优秀的话题作文范例。
【难度系数】
0.6
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