第四部分 书面表达
假如你是李华,学校广播站正在举办“爱护动物”的主题征稿活动。请你根据下面提示,用英文写一篇题为“My Favourite Animals”的作文。
写作要点:
1. What animals do you like best?
2. Why do you like them?
3. What do you know about them?
要求:
1. 文中应包括所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
3. 至少50个词。
My Favourite Animals
My favourite animals are
假如你是李华,学校广播站正在举办“爱护动物”的主题征稿活动。请你根据下面提示,用英文写一篇题为“My Favourite Animals”的作文。
写作要点:
1. What animals do you like best?
2. Why do you like them?
3. What do you know about them?
要求:
1. 文中应包括所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
3. 至少50个词。
My Favourite Animals
My favourite animals are
答案
My Favourite Animals
My favourite animals are pandas. They are lovely with black and white fur, and they look very fat and cute. I like them best because they are very quiet and friendly, and their funny actions always make me laugh.
I know pandas are from China, and their favourite food is bamboo. Now pandas are in great danger, there are only a few of them in the wild. Animals are our good friends, we need to love and protect them together.
My favourite animals are pandas. They are lovely with black and white fur, and they look very fat and cute. I like them best because they are very quiet and friendly, and their funny actions always make me laugh.
I know pandas are from China, and their favourite food is bamboo. Now pandas are in great danger, there are only a few of them in the wild. Animals are our good friends, we need to love and protect them together.
解析
这是一篇贴合"爱护动物"主题的英语征稿作文,写作思路符合六年级英语学习要求:
1. 开篇直接点明自己最喜欢的动物是熊猫,回应第一个写作要点;
2. 描述熊猫软萌的外形、温顺友好的性格,说明自己喜爱它们的原因,回应第二个写作要点;
3. 补充介绍熊猫的相关常识:是中国特有的动物,主食竹子,目前野外种群数量稀少,最后自然引出爱护保护动物的主旨,贴合本次征稿主题,全文用词简单符合学段要求,字数达标,没有出现真实个人相关信息。
1. 开篇直接点明自己最喜欢的动物是熊猫,回应第一个写作要点;
2. 描述熊猫软萌的外形、温顺友好的性格,说明自己喜爱它们的原因,回应第二个写作要点;
3. 补充介绍熊猫的相关常识:是中国特有的动物,主食竹子,目前野外种群数量稀少,最后自然引出爱护保护动物的主旨,贴合本次征稿主题,全文用词简单符合学段要求,字数达标,没有出现真实个人相关信息。
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