六、书面表达。
假设你是学校的学生会主席,请你写一篇英语演讲稿,介绍中国红十字会(Red Cross Society of China),并呼吁同学们积极参加其组织的捐款活动。

要求:1. 词数90左右;2. 要点齐全,行文流畅。
假设你是学校的学生会主席,请你写一篇英语演讲稿,介绍中国红十字会(Red Cross Society of China),并呼吁同学们积极参加其组织的捐款活动。
要求:1. 词数90左右;2. 要点齐全,行文流畅。
答案
One possible version:
Red Cross is an international organization. Red Cross Society of China was set up in 1904. Its aim is to help people in need. Millions of people work for it, including many volunteers. People support it by donating money, things, blood and so on.
Our school is organizing the activity "One-Yuan Donation for Love". I hope every student will take an active part in it. Let's save our pocket money and show our love. Even one or two yuan is OK, because love is priceless.
I think our donations can provide people in need with food, clothes, medicine and so on.
Red Cross is an international organization. Red Cross Society of China was set up in 1904. Its aim is to help people in need. Millions of people work for it, including many volunteers. People support it by donating money, things, blood and so on.
Our school is organizing the activity "One-Yuan Donation for Love". I hope every student will take an active part in it. Let's save our pocket money and show our love. Even one or two yuan is OK, because love is priceless.
I think our donations can provide people in need with food, clothes, medicine and so on.
解析
【分析】本题要求以学生会主席的身份写英语演讲稿,需涵盖中国红十字会的简介、目标、规模,以及呼吁参加“博爱周爱心一元捐”活动。解题思路:首先梳理给定的所有要点,用准确的英语表达;其次组织演讲稿结构,先介绍红十字会相关信息,再引出学校的捐款活动,最后发出真诚呼吁;注意词数控制在90左右,行文自然流畅。
【解析】1. 开篇点明红十字会的性质:国际组织,中国红十字会成立于1904年;2. 说明其目标是帮助有需要的人,规模方面提到数百万人(含志愿者)参与,人们通过捐钱、捐物、献血支持;3. 引出学校的“博爱周爱心一元捐”活动,呼吁同学们积极参加,强调爱心无价,捐款能帮助有需要的人;4. 调整语句使行文连贯,符合演讲稿的语气,控制词数。
【答案】One possible version:
Red Cross is an international organization. Red Cross Society of China was set up in 1904. Its aim is to help people in need. Millions of people work for it, including many volunteers. People support it by donating money, things, blood and so on.
Our school is organizing the activity "One-Yuan Donation for Love". I hope every student will take an active part in it. Let's save our pocket money and show our love. Even one or two yuan is OK, because love is priceless.
I think our donations can provide people in need with food, clothes, medicine and so on.
【知识点】英语书面表达、要点式写作、应用文写作
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求,涵盖所有要点,语言流畅自然,符合演讲稿的语气,呼吁部分真诚感人,词数符合要求,是一篇符合标准的书面表达。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 开篇点明红十字会的性质:国际组织,中国红十字会成立于1904年;2. 说明其目标是帮助有需要的人,规模方面提到数百万人(含志愿者)参与,人们通过捐钱、捐物、献血支持;3. 引出学校的“博爱周爱心一元捐”活动,呼吁同学们积极参加,强调爱心无价,捐款能帮助有需要的人;4. 调整语句使行文连贯,符合演讲稿的语气,控制词数。
【答案】One possible version:
Red Cross is an international organization. Red Cross Society of China was set up in 1904. Its aim is to help people in need. Millions of people work for it, including many volunteers. People support it by donating money, things, blood and so on.
Our school is organizing the activity "One-Yuan Donation for Love". I hope every student will take an active part in it. Let's save our pocket money and show our love. Even one or two yuan is OK, because love is priceless.
I think our donations can provide people in need with food, clothes, medicine and so on.
【知识点】英语书面表达、要点式写作、应用文写作
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求,涵盖所有要点,语言流畅自然,符合演讲稿的语气,呼吁部分真诚感人,词数符合要求,是一篇符合标准的书面表达。
【难度系数】0.6
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