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单元写作要求
本单元以“美丽的风景”为话题，谈论各种地理地貌、自然景观。其书面表达的命题形式主要是要求学生写一篇文章，介绍某个地貌下的自然景观。
写作方法策略
如何写与“地理地貌”相关的文章
写这类文章时，首先要确定四要素——体裁、时态、人称、结构。文章开篇要简要说明基本信息(如景观的名称、地理位置等)，点明要介绍的景观是什么；主体部分需要从景观特色、地形地貌、特色活动等方面详细介绍；最后抒情总结。
话题写作积累
1. 被……覆盖
2. 挡住某人去……的路
3. 在如此艰苦的环境中
4. 迫不及待做某事
5. 和……和睦相处
6. 流经……
7. 热带雨林产生供人类和动物呼吸的氧气，是数十万生物的家园。
8. 长江发源于青海省内的山脉，一直蜿蜒至东海。
9. 桂林山水甲天下。
写作提优
单元写作要求
本单元以“美丽的风景”为话题，谈论各种地理地貌、自然景观。其书面表达的命题形式主要是要求学生写一篇文章，介绍某个地貌下的自然景观。
写作方法策略
如何写与“地理地貌”相关的文章
写这类文章时，首先要确定四要素——体裁、时态、人称、结构。文章开篇要简要说明基本信息(如景观的名称、地理位置等)，点明要介绍的景观是什么；主体部分需要从景观特色、地形地貌、特色活动等方面详细介绍；最后抒情总结。
话题写作积累
1. 被……覆盖
be covered with
2. 挡住某人去……的路
get in one's way to
3. 在如此艰苦的环境中
in such difficult conditions
4. 迫不及待做某事
can't wait to do sth
5. 和……和睦相处
get along/on well with
6. 流经……
run through
7. 热带雨林产生供人类和动物呼吸的氧气，是数十万生物的家园。
Rainforests produce oxygen for humans and animals to breathe and are home to hundreds of thousands of living things.
8. 长江发源于青海省内的山脉，一直蜿蜒至东海。
The Yangtze River rises in the mountains of Qinghai Province and runs all the way to the East China Sea.
9. 桂林山水甲天下。
East or west, Guilin scenery is best.
答案
写作提优
话题写作积累
1. be covered with
2. get in one's way to
3. in such difficult conditions
4. can't wait to do sth
5. get along/on well with
6. run through
7. Rainforests produce oxygen for humans and animals to breathe and are home to hundreds of thousands of living things.
8. The Yangtze River rises in the mountains of Qinghai Province and runs all the way to the East China Sea.
9. East or west, Guilin scenery is best.
话题写作积累
1. be covered with
2. get in one's way to
3. in such difficult conditions
4. can't wait to do sth
5. get along/on well with
6. run through
7. Rainforests produce oxygen for humans and animals to breathe and are home to hundreds of thousands of living things.
8. The Yangtze River rises in the mountains of Qinghai Province and runs all the way to the East China Sea.
9. East or west, Guilin scenery is best.
解析
【分析】
这是英语“自然风景”主题写作的基础积累题型，解题时首先要对应中文释义回忆英语中描述地理地貌、景观游览的常用固定短语，汉译英部分要优先选用该写作主题下的地道通用表达，避免生硬直译，同时注意专有地名的标准译法，匹配写作场景的常用句式即可顺利完成作答。
【解析】
我们逐个对应完成积累内容：
1. 描述地貌被事物覆盖的固定常用搭配为be covered with
2. 表示阻挡通行路径的固定短语为get in one's way to
3. 描述极端艰苦地貌环境的常用表达为in such difficult conditions
4. 描述游览景观时急切心情的固定搭配为can't wait to do sth
5. 表示和睦相处的通用固定搭配为get along/on well with，两种写法均正确
6. 描述江河流经区域的常用表达为run through
7. 拆分句子逻辑：主语为Rainforests，并列两个核心动作“产生氧气”和“是生物家园”，翻译为Rainforests produce oxygen for humans and animals to breathe and are home to hundreds of thousands of living things.
8. 注意长江、青海、东海的标准官方译法，梳理动作逻辑“发源于山脉”“流向东海”，翻译为The Yangtze River rises in the mountains of Qinghai Province and runs all the way to the East China Sea.
9. 选用国内通用的地道谚语式译法对应“桂林山水甲天下”，即East or west, Guilin scenery is best.
【答案】
1. be covered with
2. get in one's way to
3. in such difficult conditions
4. can't wait to do sth
5. get along/on well with
6. run through
7. Rainforests produce oxygen for humans and animals to breathe and are home to hundreds of thousands of living things.
8. The Yangtze River rises in the mountains of Qinghai Province and runs all the way to the East China Sea.
9. East or west, Guilin scenery is best.
【知识点】
英语固定短语，景物描写表达，汉译英基础翻译
【点评】
本题属于风景主题写作的前置素材积累，覆盖了地貌描述、环境描写、游览心情表达、知名景观介绍的常用短语和经典句式，能帮助学生规避写作时表达生硬的问题，快速积累该主题的地道写作素材，提升相关书面表达的准确度。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是英语“自然风景”主题写作的基础积累题型，解题时首先要对应中文释义回忆英语中描述地理地貌、景观游览的常用固定短语，汉译英部分要优先选用该写作主题下的地道通用表达，避免生硬直译，同时注意专有地名的标准译法，匹配写作场景的常用句式即可顺利完成作答。
【解析】
我们逐个对应完成积累内容：
1. 描述地貌被事物覆盖的固定常用搭配为be covered with
2. 表示阻挡通行路径的固定短语为get in one's way to
3. 描述极端艰苦地貌环境的常用表达为in such difficult conditions
4. 描述游览景观时急切心情的固定搭配为can't wait to do sth
5. 表示和睦相处的通用固定搭配为get along/on well with，两种写法均正确
6. 描述江河流经区域的常用表达为run through
7. 拆分句子逻辑：主语为Rainforests，并列两个核心动作“产生氧气”和“是生物家园”，翻译为Rainforests produce oxygen for humans and animals to breathe and are home to hundreds of thousands of living things.
8. 注意长江、青海、东海的标准官方译法，梳理动作逻辑“发源于山脉”“流向东海”，翻译为The Yangtze River rises in the mountains of Qinghai Province and runs all the way to the East China Sea.
9. 选用国内通用的地道谚语式译法对应“桂林山水甲天下”，即East or west, Guilin scenery is best.
【答案】
1. be covered with
2. get in one's way to
3. in such difficult conditions
4. can't wait to do sth
5. get along/on well with
6. run through
7. Rainforests produce oxygen for humans and animals to breathe and are home to hundreds of thousands of living things.
8. The Yangtze River rises in the mountains of Qinghai Province and runs all the way to the East China Sea.
9. East or west, Guilin scenery is best.
【知识点】
英语固定短语，景物描写表达，汉译英基础翻译
【点评】
本题属于风景主题写作的前置素材积累，覆盖了地貌描述、环境描写、游览心情表达、知名景观介绍的常用短语和经典句式，能帮助学生规避写作时表达生硬的问题，快速积累该主题的地道写作素材，提升相关书面表达的准确度。
【难度系数】
0.6
