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植物对我们人类、动物以及周围的环境都非常重要。假如你叫李华，请你根据以下思维导图提示，以“The Importance of Plants”为题写一篇短文，从三个方面谈论一下植物的重要性，呼吁大家要爱护花草树木。
要求：
1. 短文须包括所给提示，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The Importance of Plants
As we all know, plants are very important for humans, animals and the environment we live in. Now, let me introduce the importance of plants to you.
植物对我们人类、动物以及周围的环境都非常重要。假如你叫李华，请你根据以下思维导图提示，以“The Importance of Plants”为题写一篇短文，从三个方面谈论一下植物的重要性，呼吁大家要爱护花草树木。
要求：
1. 短文须包括所给提示，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The Importance of Plants
As we all know, plants are very important for humans, animals and the environment we live in. Now, let me introduce the importance of plants to you.
Firstly, plants provide us with basic needs for living. We can get some food from them. Some plants are natural medicinal materials. Besides, wild animals live in forests and they can't live without plants because lots of animals feed on plants.
Secondly, plants play a key role in protecting the environment.
Plants not only cover the soil and stop the wind but also help make the air clean and fresh.
Big trees can protect us from the sun and make it cooler in summer.
Last but not the least, plants make our world colorful.
There are different kinds of beautiful flowers in spring, which makes us feel happy.
In a word, all of us cannot live without plants.
Let's protect them together in our daily life.
答案
One possible version:
The Importance of Plants
As we all know, plants are very important for humans, animals and the environment we live in. Now, let me introduce the importance of plants to you.
Firstly, plants provide us with basic needs for living. We can get some food from them. Some plants are natural medicinal materials. Besides, wild animals live in forests and they can't live without plants because lots of animals feed on plants. Secondly, plants play a key role in protecting the environment. Plants not only cover the soil and stop the wind but also help make the air clean and fresh. Big trees can protect us from the sun and make it cooler in summer. Last but not the least, plants make our world colorful. There are different kinds of beautiful flowers in spring, which makes us feel happy.
In a word, all of us cannot live without plants. Let's protect them together in our daily life.
The Importance of Plants
As we all know, plants are very important for humans, animals and the environment we live in. Now, let me introduce the importance of plants to you.
Firstly, plants provide us with basic needs for living. We can get some food from them. Some plants are natural medicinal materials. Besides, wild animals live in forests and they can't live without plants because lots of animals feed on plants. Secondly, plants play a key role in protecting the environment. Plants not only cover the soil and stop the wind but also help make the air clean and fresh. Big trees can protect us from the sun and make it cooler in summer. Last but not the least, plants make our world colorful. There are different kinds of beautiful flowers in spring, which makes us feel happy.
In a word, all of us cannot live without plants. Let's protect them together in our daily life.
解析
【分析】首先明确题目要求：需根据思维导图从人类、动物、环境三个方面阐述植物的重要性，开头已给出，词数80左右，最后呼吁爱护植物。解题思路：先承接开头，分三个层次对应思维导图提示展开，适当补充合理细节（如大树遮阴），最后总结并发出保护植物的呼吁，确保覆盖所有要点，语言通顺，符合词数要求。
【解析】1. 承接开头后，先写植物对人类的作用：提供生存基本需求，包括食物、药材；2. 再写植物对动物的作用：为动物提供栖息地（森林）和食物（果实等）；3. 接着写植物对环境的作用：净化空气、固土防风，补充大树遮阴降温的细节；4. 最后总结，发出呼吁，控制词数在80左右，语言简洁准确。
【答案】One possible version:
The Importance of Plants
As we all know, plants are very important for humans, animals and the environment we live in. Now, let me introduce the importance of plants to you.
Firstly, plants provide us with basic needs for living. We can get some food from them. Some plants are natural medicinal materials. Besides, wild animals live in forests and they can't live without plants because lots of animals feed on plants. Secondly, plants play a key role in protecting the environment. Plants not only cover the soil and stop the wind but also help make the air clean and fresh. Big trees can protect us from the sun and make it cooler in summer. Last but not the least, plants make our world colorful. There are different kinds of beautiful flowers in spring, which makes us feel happy.
In a word, all of us cannot live without plants. Let's protect them together in our daily life.
【知识点】英语书面表达、说明文写作
【点评】该作文紧扣主题，全面覆盖思维导图的所有要点，结构清晰，适当补充细节丰富内容，结尾呼吁合理，语言通顺，符合题目要求。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 承接开头后，先写植物对人类的作用：提供生存基本需求，包括食物、药材；2. 再写植物对动物的作用：为动物提供栖息地（森林）和食物（果实等）；3. 接着写植物对环境的作用：净化空气、固土防风，补充大树遮阴降温的细节；4. 最后总结，发出呼吁，控制词数在80左右，语言简洁准确。
【答案】One possible version:
The Importance of Plants
As we all know, plants are very important for humans, animals and the environment we live in. Now, let me introduce the importance of plants to you.
Firstly, plants provide us with basic needs for living. We can get some food from them. Some plants are natural medicinal materials. Besides, wild animals live in forests and they can't live without plants because lots of animals feed on plants. Secondly, plants play a key role in protecting the environment. Plants not only cover the soil and stop the wind but also help make the air clean and fresh. Big trees can protect us from the sun and make it cooler in summer. Last but not the least, plants make our world colorful. There are different kinds of beautiful flowers in spring, which makes us feel happy.
In a word, all of us cannot live without plants. Let's protect them together in our daily life.
【知识点】英语书面表达、说明文写作
【点评】该作文紧扣主题，全面覆盖思维导图的所有要点，结构清晰，适当补充细节丰富内容，结尾呼吁合理，语言通顺，符合题目要求。
【难度系数】0.5
