Ⅳ. Think and write.
Write a passage about a memory challenge you faced and how you overcame it. The following questions will help you.
● What memory challenge did you have? (e.g., mixing up words)
● How did you feel about it?
● What methods did you use to improve your memory?
● How did things turn out in the end?

Write a passage about a memory challenge you faced and how you overcame it. The following questions will help you.
● What memory challenge did you have? (e.g., mixing up words)
● How did you feel about it?
● What methods did you use to improve your memory?
● How did things turn out in the end?
答案
One possible version:
In the past, I had trouble remembering English words. I would study a list for hours, but the next day I could only remember a few. I felt very frustrated.
Then my English teacher, Ms Li, noticed my problem. She taught me to use mind maps. I learnt to group words by topic and connect them with images. For example, for the word “kitchen”, I pictured a chicken cooking in the kitchen. This helped me remember both words without getting them mixed up.
I also reviewed the words every night before sleep.
Yesterday, we had a vocabulary test, and I got 90 percent! I was so proud of myself. I learnt that the right method makes all the difference.
In the past, I had trouble remembering English words. I would study a list for hours, but the next day I could only remember a few. I felt very frustrated.
Then my English teacher, Ms Li, noticed my problem. She taught me to use mind maps. I learnt to group words by topic and connect them with images. For example, for the word “kitchen”, I pictured a chicken cooking in the kitchen. This helped me remember both words without getting them mixed up.
I also reviewed the words every night before sleep.
Yesterday, we had a vocabulary test, and I got 90 percent! I was so proud of myself. I learnt that the right method makes all the difference.
解析
【分析】这是一道英语话题写作题,要求围绕“记忆挑战及克服方法”完成写作,需结合题目给出的四个问题(记忆挑战的具体内容、当时的感受、克服挑战的方法、最终结果),选取具体事例(如记英语单词的困难),运用记叙文结构,加入细节让内容充实,符合写作要求。
【解析】写作步骤:1. 确定核心事例:选择记英语单词困难作为记忆挑战;2. 描述挑战与感受:说明记单词的困境(如学习很久却遗忘多),表达沮丧的心情;3. 阐述克服方法:引入老师传授的思维导图法(按主题分组单词、联想图像记忆),搭配睡前复习的辅助方法;4. 说明结果与感悟:通过词汇测试取得好成绩的结果,总结合适方法的重要性。
【答案】One possible version:
In the past, I had trouble remembering English words. I would study a list for hours, but the next day I could only remember a few. I felt very frustrated.
Then my English teacher, Ms Li, noticed my problem. She taught me to use mind maps. I learnt to group words by topic and connect them with images. For example, for the word “kitchen”, I pictured a chicken cooking in the kitchen. This helped me remember both words without getting them mixed up.
I also reviewed the words every night before sleep.
Yesterday, we had a vocabulary test, and I got 90 percent! I was so proud of myself. I learnt that the right method makes all the difference.
【知识点】英语话题写作、记叙文写作
【点评】范文围绕记忆挑战展开,结构清晰,有具体事例支撑,符合题目要求,语言流畅自然,完整呈现了克服困难的过程与感悟,是符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤:1. 确定核心事例:选择记英语单词困难作为记忆挑战;2. 描述挑战与感受:说明记单词的困境(如学习很久却遗忘多),表达沮丧的心情;3. 阐述克服方法:引入老师传授的思维导图法(按主题分组单词、联想图像记忆),搭配睡前复习的辅助方法;4. 说明结果与感悟:通过词汇测试取得好成绩的结果,总结合适方法的重要性。
【答案】One possible version:
In the past, I had trouble remembering English words. I would study a list for hours, but the next day I could only remember a few. I felt very frustrated.
Then my English teacher, Ms Li, noticed my problem. She taught me to use mind maps. I learnt to group words by topic and connect them with images. For example, for the word “kitchen”, I pictured a chicken cooking in the kitchen. This helped me remember both words without getting them mixed up.
I also reviewed the words every night before sleep.
Yesterday, we had a vocabulary test, and I got 90 percent! I was so proud of myself. I learnt that the right method makes all the difference.
【知识点】英语话题写作、记叙文写作
【点评】范文围绕记忆挑战展开,结构清晰,有具体事例支撑,符合题目要求,语言流畅自然,完整呈现了克服困难的过程与感悟,是符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.5
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