📚典例赏析
假如你是李明,打算向校报 Weekly Topic 栏目投稿,请你以“How to Shop Wisely”为题,根据以下内容提示完成稿件。
内容要点:花钱要有计划;考虑选择商场打折的商品;购物前要制作购物清单;购物时要认真比对同种商品。
注意:
1. 短文须包含上述要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 词数 80—100。



审题指导
1.体裁:说明文 2.时态:一般现在时 3.人称:以第一人称为主
写作框架

How to Shop Wisely
Shopping wisely is an important skill that helps us avoid waste.
Firstly, we should make a careful plan for our money before shopping, and never spend beyond our budget. Secondly, it is a good choice to pick proper products that are on sale in malls. Thirdly, we need to make a shopping list before going out, so that we won't buy unnecessary things on impulse. Finally, we should compare the same kind of products carefully on their quality and price.
By following these steps, we can save much money and shop in a more reasonable way.

【分析】
本题要求以“How to Shop Wisely”为题写一篇英语说明文，需遵循“开篇点题-具体描述-总结”的结构，包含给定的四个要点，使用一般现在时，以第一人称为主，词数控制在80-100。首先开篇点明明智购物的重要性，接着分点阐述具体做法，最后总结遵循这些方法的好处，确保内容连贯、要点齐全。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：直接说明明智购物是重要技能，引出主题；
2. 具体描述：用Firstly/Secondly/Thirdly/Finally连接，对应四个要点，补充细节（如不超预算、避免冲动消费、比对质量价格等），使逻辑清晰；
3. 总结：呼应开篇，说明遵循步骤的好处，完善文章结构；
4. 注意时态和人称，控制词数，保证语言准确流畅。
【答案】
How to Shop Wisely
Shopping wisely is an important skill that helps us avoid waste.
Firstly, we should make a careful plan for our money before shopping, and never spend beyond our budget. Secondly, it is a good choice to pick proper products that are on sale in malls. Thirdly, we need to make a shopping list before going out, so that we won't buy unnecessary things on impulse. Finally, we should compare the same kind of products carefully on their quality and price.
By following these steps, we can save much money and shop in a more reasonable way.
【知识点】
英语说明文写作；英语应用文写作
【点评】
本文结构清晰，要点齐全，符合题目要求，语言流畅自然，适当补充细节使内容更充实，是一篇符合要求的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6