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“少年强则国强。”青少年是祖国的未来。近几年,中学生职业生涯规划正悄然兴起,我校英语社团正开展有关职业规划的讨论。请你根据以下思维导图的要点写一篇英文发言稿。

注意:语句连贯,词数80—100。
My Dream Job
Hello, everyone. It’s so nice to share something about my dream job with you.
“少年强则国强。”青少年是祖国的未来。近几年,中学生职业生涯规划正悄然兴起,我校英语社团正开展有关职业规划的讨论。请你根据以下思维导图的要点写一篇英文发言稿。
注意:语句连贯,词数80—100。
My Dream Job
Hello, everyone. It’s so nice to share something about my dream job with you.
My dream job is to be a doctor. Here are some reasons.
First, doctors are able to save many lives, which gives me a sense of achievement.
Second, I love learning and am willing to take up a challenging job.
Lastly, both my grandfather and father are doctors. I hope I can be a doctor, too.
To realize my dream, I'll study hard to enter a good medical college.
And I'll read books about how to be a doctor.
My dream will come true one day as long as I work hard
and I hope to help build a bright future for my country.
答案
My Dream Job
Hello, everyone. It's so nice to share something about my
dream job with you. My dream job is to be a doctor. Here are some reasons.
First, doctors are able to save many lives, which gives me a sense of achievement. Second, I love learning and am willing to take up a challenging job. Lastly, both my grandfather and father are doctors. I hope I can be a doctor, too.
To realize my dream, I'll study hard to enter a good medical college. And I'll read books about how to be a doctor. My dream will come true one day as long as I work hard and I hope to help build a bright future for my country.
Hello, everyone. It's so nice to share something about my
dream job with you. My dream job is to be a doctor. Here are some reasons.
First, doctors are able to save many lives, which gives me a sense of achievement. Second, I love learning and am willing to take up a challenging job. Lastly, both my grandfather and father are doctors. I hope I can be a doctor, too.
To realize my dream, I'll study hard to enter a good medical college. And I'll read books about how to be a doctor. My dream will come true one day as long as I work hard and I hope to help build a bright future for my country.
解析
【分析】本题要求根据思维导图要点撰写关于职业规划的英文发言稿,需遵循“梦想职业→选择原因→实现方法→希望”的逻辑结构。首先明确梦想职业,接着从职业价值、个人兴趣、家庭影响等角度说明选择原因,再补充实现梦想的具体行动,最后表达努力就能实现的希望,同时控制词数在80-100,保证语句连贯。
【解析】按照思维导图的三个模块依次展开:1. 点明梦想职业为医生,从救死扶伤的成就感、热爱挑战、家庭熏陶三个方面阐述原因;2. 说明实现梦想的具体做法:努力学习考入好的医学院、阅读相关书籍;3. 表达希望,呼应“只要努力就能实现梦想”的主题,完成发言稿。
【答案】My Dream Job
Hello, everyone. It's so nice to share something about my dream job with you. My dream job is to be a doctor. Here are some reasons. First, doctors are able to save many lives, which gives me a sense of achievement. Second, I love learning and am willing to take up a challenging job. Lastly, both my grandfather and father are doctors. I hope I can be a doctor, too.
To realize my dream, I'll study hard to enter a good medical college. And I'll read books about how to be a doctor. My dream will come true one day as long as I work hard and I hope to help build a bright future for my country.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、职业话题表达
【点评】本题结合中学生职业规划主题,考查英语发言稿的写作能力,要求学生能依据思维导图组织内容,语言通顺,符合词数要求,贴近学生生活实际,易于发挥。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照思维导图的三个模块依次展开:1. 点明梦想职业为医生,从救死扶伤的成就感、热爱挑战、家庭熏陶三个方面阐述原因;2. 说明实现梦想的具体做法:努力学习考入好的医学院、阅读相关书籍;3. 表达希望,呼应“只要努力就能实现梦想”的主题,完成发言稿。
【答案】My Dream Job
Hello, everyone. It's so nice to share something about my dream job with you. My dream job is to be a doctor. Here are some reasons. First, doctors are able to save many lives, which gives me a sense of achievement. Second, I love learning and am willing to take up a challenging job. Lastly, both my grandfather and father are doctors. I hope I can be a doctor, too.
To realize my dream, I'll study hard to enter a good medical college. And I'll read books about how to be a doctor. My dream will come true one day as long as I work hard and I hope to help build a bright future for my country.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、职业话题表达
【点评】本题结合中学生职业规划主题,考查英语发言稿的写作能力,要求学生能依据思维导图组织内容,语言通顺,符合词数要求,贴近学生生活实际,易于发挥。
【难度系数】0.6
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