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自然灾害时有发生，而且总是发生得很突然。请你以“What to do in an earthquake”为主题，根据以下提示写一篇报告，给同学们提供一些地震逃生的建议。
【注意】1.不少于90词。
2.短文必须包含以上内容，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
What to do in an earthquake
自然灾害时有发生，而且总是发生得很突然。请你以“What to do in an earthquake”为主题，根据以下提示写一篇报告，给同学们提供一些地震逃生的建议。
【注意】1.不少于90词。
2.短文必须包含以上内容，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
What to do in an earthquake
答案
What to do in an earthquake
Earthquakes are natural disasters that often happen suddenly. Mastering right escape skills can help us stay safe, so here is some useful advice for you.
If you stay indoors when the earthquake starts, never try to jump out of the high building, or you will get badly hurt. You had better hide under a strong table to protect your head from falling things. When the ground stops shaking, you should walk down the stairs to the open and safe area quickly, never take the elevator.
If you are outdoors, keep far away from bridges and tall buildings at once. If you are in a car, pull over to the roadside and do not get out before the earthquake ends. If you are in the mountains, stay away from steep slopes to avoid the dangerous falling rocks.
Above all, always keep calm during the whole process. Never rush blindly or you will put yourself in danger.
Earthquakes are natural disasters that often happen suddenly. Mastering right escape skills can help us stay safe, so here is some useful advice for you.
If you stay indoors when the earthquake starts, never try to jump out of the high building, or you will get badly hurt. You had better hide under a strong table to protect your head from falling things. When the ground stops shaking, you should walk down the stairs to the open and safe area quickly, never take the elevator.
If you are outdoors, keep far away from bridges and tall buildings at once. If you are in a car, pull over to the roadside and do not get out before the earthquake ends. If you are in the mountains, stay away from steep slopes to avoid the dangerous falling rocks.
Above all, always keep calm during the whole process. Never rush blindly or you will put yourself in danger.
解析
【分析】这是一篇英语应用文写作，主题为地震逃生建议。写作时需先总述地震突发的特点，引出逃生建议的必要性；再分室内、室外两类场景，对应提示内容给出具体应对措施，适当补充细节使行文连贯；最后强调保持冷静的重要性，确保覆盖所有提示点，满足词数要求，不出现真实人名地名。
【解析】首先开头点明地震是突发自然灾害，掌握逃生技能很重要；接着分室内情况：不能从高楼跳下，躲在坚固桌下，地面停止晃动后走楼梯到安全区域；室外情况：远离桥梁，在车里时靠边停车，在山里时远离陡坡；最后强调全程保持冷静，避免盲目慌乱，确保内容完整连贯，符合题目要求。
【答案】What to do in an earthquake
Earthquakes are natural disasters that often happen suddenly. Mastering right escape skills can help us stay safe, so here is some useful advice for you.
If you stay indoors when the earthquake starts, never try to jump out of the high building, or you will get badly hurt. You had better hide under a strong table to protect your head from falling things. When the ground stops shaking, you should walk down the stairs to the open and safe area quickly, never take the elevator.
If you are outdoors, keep far away from bridges and tall buildings at once. If you are in a car, pull over to the roadside and do not get out before the earthquake ends. If you are in the mountains, stay away from steep slopes to avoid the dangerous falling rocks.
Above all, always keep calm during the whole process. Never rush blindly or you will put yourself in danger.
【知识点】英语应用文写作；地震安全常识
【点评】本题结合地震逃生常识考查英语应用文写作能力，要求学生根据给定提示整合信息，组织连贯的内容，兼顾语言表达的准确性和实用性，同时传递安全知识。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先开头点明地震是突发自然灾害，掌握逃生技能很重要；接着分室内情况：不能从高楼跳下，躲在坚固桌下，地面停止晃动后走楼梯到安全区域；室外情况：远离桥梁，在车里时靠边停车，在山里时远离陡坡；最后强调全程保持冷静，避免盲目慌乱，确保内容完整连贯，符合题目要求。
【答案】What to do in an earthquake
Earthquakes are natural disasters that often happen suddenly. Mastering right escape skills can help us stay safe, so here is some useful advice for you.
If you stay indoors when the earthquake starts, never try to jump out of the high building, or you will get badly hurt. You had better hide under a strong table to protect your head from falling things. When the ground stops shaking, you should walk down the stairs to the open and safe area quickly, never take the elevator.
If you are outdoors, keep far away from bridges and tall buildings at once. If you are in a car, pull over to the roadside and do not get out before the earthquake ends. If you are in the mountains, stay away from steep slopes to avoid the dangerous falling rocks.
Above all, always keep calm during the whole process. Never rush blindly or you will put yourself in danger.
【知识点】英语应用文写作；地震安全常识
【点评】本题结合地震逃生常识考查英语应用文写作能力，要求学生根据给定提示整合信息，组织连贯的内容，兼顾语言表达的准确性和实用性，同时传递安全知识。
【难度系数】0.5
