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51. 在学习和生活中，我们不可避免地会碰到成长的烦恼，这些烦恼会给人带来压力，过重、过久的压力又会引发许多心理问题。你们班级特意开展了一次以“Less Pressure，Better Life”为题的英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇发言稿，谈谈你是如何成功缓解压力的，要求包含以下内容：
（1）同学们普遍的压力是什么？
（2）我的压力是什么？
（3）我是如何成功缓解压力的？
注意：
（1）作文要包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
（2）词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Less Pressure，Better Life
Hello, boys and girls!
That's all. Thank you!
51. 在学习和生活中，我们不可避免地会碰到成长的烦恼，这些烦恼会给人带来压力，过重、过久的压力又会引发许多心理问题。你们班级特意开展了一次以“Less Pressure，Better Life”为题的英语演讲比赛，请你写一篇发言稿，谈谈你是如何成功缓解压力的，要求包含以下内容：
（1）同学们普遍的压力是什么？
（2）我的压力是什么？
（3）我是如何成功缓解压力的？
注意：
（1）作文要包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
（2）词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Less Pressure，Better Life
Hello, boys and girls!
That's all. Thank you!
答案
51. 参考范文：
Less Pressure, Better Life
Hello, boys and girls!
Pressure is a serious problem in today's world. Many students are under too much pressure. Some students can't get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.
Before, I was always under pressure too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. So they sent me to all kinds of after-school classes at weekends. At last, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem. Besides, listening to music is also a good way to relax ourselves while we are feeling tired. Having enough good sleep is helpful too.
That's all. Thank you!
Less Pressure, Better Life
Hello, boys and girls!
Pressure is a serious problem in today's world. Many students are under too much pressure. Some students can't get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.
Before, I was always under pressure too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. So they sent me to all kinds of after-school classes at weekends. At last, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem. Besides, listening to music is also a good way to relax ourselves while we are feeling tired. Having enough good sleep is helpful too.
That's all. Thank you!
解析
【分析】
本题要求完成以“Less Pressure，Better Life”为题的英语发言稿，需包含三个核心内容：①同学们普遍存在的压力；②自身曾面临的压力；③缓解压力的具体方法，词数约80，开头结尾已给出。解题思路：先承接已给问候，开篇点明压力是学生面临的普遍问题，列举同学常见压力；再过渡到自身压力（如父母要求成绩顶尖、周末补课）；接着阐述缓解压力的有效方式（与父母沟通、听音乐、保证睡眠），确保内容完整、逻辑连贯、符合发言稿语气。
【解析】
写作按以下步骤：1. 承接问候，说明压力是当今学生的普遍问题，列举同学们的常见压力（如与同学相处不融洽、担忧考试）；2. 讲述自身曾有的压力：父母希望自己成为班级尖子生，周末安排各类课外班，导致身心疲惫；3. 说明缓解压力的方法：主动与父母沟通表达真实感受，辅以听音乐、保证充足睡眠等方式；4. 注意语言简洁，符合词数要求，内容连贯，符合发言稿的正式亲切语气。
【答案】
Less Pressure, Better Life
Hello, boys and girls!
Pressure is a serious problem in today's world. Many students are under too much pressure. Some students can't get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.
Before, I was always under pressure too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. So they sent me to all kinds of after-school classes at weekends. At last, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem. Besides, listening to music is also a good way to relax ourselves while we are feeling tired. Having enough good sleep is helpful too.
That's all. Thank you!
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题作文（压力与生活）
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，全面覆盖所有要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言简洁流畅，符合发言稿体裁特点，生动传达了缓解压力的有效方法，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.5
本题要求完成以“Less Pressure，Better Life”为题的英语发言稿，需包含三个核心内容：①同学们普遍存在的压力；②自身曾面临的压力；③缓解压力的具体方法，词数约80，开头结尾已给出。解题思路：先承接已给问候，开篇点明压力是学生面临的普遍问题，列举同学常见压力；再过渡到自身压力（如父母要求成绩顶尖、周末补课）；接着阐述缓解压力的有效方式（与父母沟通、听音乐、保证睡眠），确保内容完整、逻辑连贯、符合发言稿语气。
【解析】
写作按以下步骤：1. 承接问候，说明压力是当今学生的普遍问题，列举同学们的常见压力（如与同学相处不融洽、担忧考试）；2. 讲述自身曾有的压力：父母希望自己成为班级尖子生，周末安排各类课外班，导致身心疲惫；3. 说明缓解压力的方法：主动与父母沟通表达真实感受，辅以听音乐、保证充足睡眠等方式；4. 注意语言简洁，符合词数要求，内容连贯，符合发言稿的正式亲切语气。
【答案】
Less Pressure, Better Life
Hello, boys and girls!
Pressure is a serious problem in today's world. Many students are under too much pressure. Some students can't get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.
Before, I was always under pressure too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. So they sent me to all kinds of after-school classes at weekends. At last, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem. Besides, listening to music is also a good way to relax ourselves while we are feeling tired. Having enough good sleep is helpful too.
That's all. Thank you!
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题作文（压力与生活）
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，全面覆盖所有要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言简洁流畅，符合发言稿体裁特点，生动传达了缓解压力的有效方法，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.5
