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51. 假设你是李华,你的美国笔友 Sam 即将来中国旅行。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示,用英语给他写一封信,介绍中国的餐桌礼仪。
注意:
(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)词数 80 左右。作文开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sam,
You must be excited about coming to China soon! As you know, Chinese culture is different from that in America. Let me give you some advice on Chinese table manners.
I am looking forward to meeting you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
51. 假设你是李华,你的美国笔友 Sam 即将来中国旅行。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示,用英语给他写一封信,介绍中国的餐桌礼仪。
注意:
(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)词数 80 左右。作文开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sam,
You must be excited about coming to China soon! As you know, Chinese culture is different from that in America. Let me give you some advice on Chinese table manners.
First of all, you should be on time when you are asked to eat a meal. Second, you are supposed to let the old eat first at table because it's our fine tradition to respect the old. Third, you should eat up the food. It shows your love for the dishes. Otherwise, you aren't supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. It's rude. Besides, it is quite impolite to speak loudly while eating. You shouldn't point at anyone with your chopsticks either. I hope the advice will be helpful to you.
I am looking forward to meeting you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
51. 参考范文：
Dear Sam,
You must be excited about coming to China soon! As you know, Chinese culture is different from that in America. Let me give you some advice on Chinese table manners. First of all, you should be on time when you are asked to eat a meal. Second, you are supposed to let the old eat first at table because it's our fine tradition to respect the old. Third, you should eat up the food. It shows your love for the dishes. Otherwise, you aren't supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. It's rude. Besides, it is quite impolite to speak loudly while eating. You shouldn't point at anyone with your chopsticks either. I hope the advice will be helpful to you.
I am looking forward to meeting you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Sam,
You must be excited about coming to China soon! As you know, Chinese culture is different from that in America. Let me give you some advice on Chinese table manners. First of all, you should be on time when you are asked to eat a meal. Second, you are supposed to let the old eat first at table because it's our fine tradition to respect the old. Third, you should eat up the food. It shows your love for the dishes. Otherwise, you aren't supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. It's rude. Besides, it is quite impolite to speak loudly while eating. You shouldn't point at anyone with your chopsticks either. I hope the advice will be helpful to you.
I am looking forward to meeting you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题要求以李华的身份给美国笔友Sam写一封介绍中国餐桌礼仪的英文信，需结合思维导图中“应该做的”和“不应该做的”内容，适当拓展，词数80左右，且开头结尾已给出。解题思路：1. 遵循英文书信格式，使用友好得体的语气；2. 围绕思维导图要点，补充符合中国餐桌礼仪的拓展内容（如让长辈先用餐、不将筷子插在食物中等）；3. 用准确的英语表达，确保语句通顺，覆盖所有要求要点。
【解析】
首先承接开头引出餐桌礼仪建议，分两部分展开：①应该做的：准时赴宴、让长辈先用餐（体现尊老传统）、吃光食物（表达对食物的喜爱）；②不应该做的：吃饭时大声喧哗、用筷子指人、将筷子插在食物中（这些行为在中国餐桌礼仪中不礼貌）。最后表达希望建议有帮助，符合书信礼貌结尾。
【答案】
Dear Sam,
You must be excited about coming to China soon! As you know, Chinese culture is different from that in America. Let me give you some advice on Chinese table manners. First of all, you should be on time when you are invited to a meal. Second, you are supposed to let the old eat first at table because it's our fine tradition to respect the old. Third, you should eat up the food. It shows your love for the dishes. Otherwise, you aren't supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. It's rude. Besides, it is quite impolite to speak loudly while eating. You shouldn't point at anyone with your chopsticks either. I hope the advice will be helpful to you.
I am looking forward to meeting you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、中国餐桌礼仪英语表达、书信格式
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，覆盖思维导图核心要点，适当拓展符合中国文化的餐桌礼仪内容，语言准确流畅，语气友好得体，符合英文书信写作规范，是一篇优秀的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以李华的身份给美国笔友Sam写一封介绍中国餐桌礼仪的英文信，需结合思维导图中“应该做的”和“不应该做的”内容，适当拓展，词数80左右，且开头结尾已给出。解题思路：1. 遵循英文书信格式，使用友好得体的语气；2. 围绕思维导图要点，补充符合中国餐桌礼仪的拓展内容（如让长辈先用餐、不将筷子插在食物中等）；3. 用准确的英语表达，确保语句通顺，覆盖所有要求要点。
【解析】
首先承接开头引出餐桌礼仪建议，分两部分展开：①应该做的：准时赴宴、让长辈先用餐（体现尊老传统）、吃光食物（表达对食物的喜爱）；②不应该做的：吃饭时大声喧哗、用筷子指人、将筷子插在食物中（这些行为在中国餐桌礼仪中不礼貌）。最后表达希望建议有帮助，符合书信礼貌结尾。
【答案】
Dear Sam,
You must be excited about coming to China soon! As you know, Chinese culture is different from that in America. Let me give you some advice on Chinese table manners. First of all, you should be on time when you are invited to a meal. Second, you are supposed to let the old eat first at table because it's our fine tradition to respect the old. Third, you should eat up the food. It shows your love for the dishes. Otherwise, you aren't supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. It's rude. Besides, it is quite impolite to speak loudly while eating. You shouldn't point at anyone with your chopsticks either. I hope the advice will be helpful to you.
I am looking forward to meeting you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、中国餐桌礼仪英语表达、书信格式
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，覆盖思维导图核心要点，适当拓展符合中国文化的餐桌礼仪内容，语言准确流畅，语气友好得体，符合英文书信写作规范，是一篇优秀的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
