1.写作任务
假如你所在的学校本学期增加了校车接送服务，请你根据下列提示，以“The School Bus Rules”为题写一篇英语短文，向同学们介绍一下乘坐校车要遵守的规则。

要求:(1)包含所给信息，可适当发挥；
(2)条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
(3)不少于60词。
The School Bus Rules


2.思路点拨
第一步:审题 体裁: 人称: 时态:
第二步:列提纲

第三步:句子积累
(1)Rules everywhere.规则无处不在。
(2)Second, we must the school bus .第二，我们必须保持校车清洁。
(3)Third, we on the bus.第三，我们不能在校车上吵闹。
(4)Fourth, we the bus before it stops.
第四，在校车停下来之前我们不能下车。
3.范文品鉴
The School Bus Rules
Rules are everywhere. If we want to go to school by school bus, we need to know the school bus rules.
First, we must arrive at the bus stop early and wait for the school bus there. Second, we must keep the school bus clean. Third, we can't be noisy on the bus. And we can't run or fight on the bus either. Fourth, we can't get off the bus before it stops. Fifth, it's dangerous for us to play around the bus stop, so we can't do that.
These rules are useful and important. To keep safe, we must follow them.
类文训练
假如你是李辉，想利用五一长假邀请你的朋友马克一起去合肥市动物园游玩。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一封信，告诉他去动物园游玩的时间和动物园的一些规定。
提示:

要求:1.短文须包含提示要点，可适当发挥；
2.条理清晰、语句通顺、语法正确；
3.词数60左右。
Dear Mark,
How are you? We'll go to the City Zoo in Hefei this Sunday.




Yours,
Li Hui

2.第一步:审题
说明文 第一人称 一般现在时
第三步:句子积累
(1)are (2)keep; clean (3)can't be noisy (4)can't get off
类文训练
One possible version:
Dear Mark,
How are you? We'll go to the City Zoo in Hefei this Sunday. The zoo is big and beautiful, and there are
different kinds of animals like elephants, lions and giraffes. But there are some rules. First, we must keep it
clean. Don't litter. Second, there are many kinds of birds in the park, but we can't feed them our snacks.
Third, don't make noise because noise can scare them. We can only watch them from a distance. All in all, to
have a good time in the zoo, we need to follow these rules.
What about meeting at the bus stop at 9:00 a.m.? Write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hui

【分析】
这道题分为基础填空和迁移写作两部分，解题思路可以分两步走：
1. 先完成思路点拨和句子积累的基础填空：首先审题，介绍乘坐校车的规则属于说明类文体，面向同学介绍规则用第一人称，描述常规规则用一般现在时；再对照给出的中文提示，结合所学的固定短语、语法搭配直接补全句子空缺内容。
2. 完成类文训练的书信写作：首先承接题干给出的开头句，先简单介绍合肥动物园的基本情况，再分点清晰列出动物园的相关规定，最后补充邀约见面的时间地点，保证内容覆盖所有要点，语句通顺，词数符合要求即可。
【解析】
第一部分：思路点拨审题填空
体裁：这篇短文的目的是向同学们介绍校车乘坐规则，属于说明文；
人称：面向同班同学，以我们的视角介绍规则，用第一人称；
时态：介绍长期生效的公共规则，用一般现在时。
第二部分：句子积累填空
(1) 主语Rules是复数，“无处不在”对应be everywhere，be动词用are；
(2) “保持某物清洁”是固定搭配keep sth. clean，所以依次填keep、clean；
(3) 对应中文“不能吵闹”，直接填can't be noisy；
(4) “下车”是固定短语get off，“不能下车”对应can't get off。
第三部分：类文训练写作
1. 承接开头句，先简单介绍动物园的特点：面积大环境美，有各类不同的动物；
2. 引出动物园的规则，分点说明：要保持环境整洁不能乱扔垃圾、不能私自投喂动物零食、不能大声喧哗惊扰动物；
3. 最后补充约定见面的时间地点，收尾呼应书信邀请的主题，保证逻辑通顺，符合词数要求。
【答案】
2.第一步:审题
说明文 第一人称 一般现在时
第三步:句子积累
(1)are (2)keep; clean (3)can't be noisy (4)can't get off
类文训练
One possible version:
Dear Mark,
How are you? We'll go to the City Zoo in Hefei this Sunday. The zoo is big and beautiful, and there are different kinds of animals like elephants, lions and giraffes. But there are some rules. First, we must keep it clean. Don't litter. Second, there are many kinds of birds in the park, but we can't feed them our snacks. Third, don't make noise because noise can scare them. We can only watch them from a distance. All in all, to have a good time in the zoo, we need to follow these rules.
What about meeting at the bus stop at 9:00 a.m.? Write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hui
【知识点】
规则类英语写作，情态动词用法，固定短语搭配
【点评】
本题是初中英语基础写作训练题，从审题引导、句子铺垫到同类话题迁移训练，循序渐进降低写作门槛，帮助学生快速掌握用must/can't表述规则的常用表达，巩固规则类话题的写作逻辑，适合夯实基础写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.6