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七、书面表达（15 分）
假定你是李华，你校英语社团发起了暑期实践活动，如参加一次志愿活动、参观一所博物馆、分享一本好书、承担一件家务和体验一次农场实践，以此激发你们的责任感和使命感。请你结合自身情况，选择你要参加的两种活动，阐述原因并发出倡议，用英语写一篇文章向英语社团投稿。
内容包括：
1. 你选择的两种活动；
2. 陈述理由；
3. 发出倡议。
注意：1. 词数 100 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：激发：inspire；责任感和使命感：sense of responsibility and mission
Our school advises us to do meaningful activities during the summer holiday. Here are my plans.
假定你是李华，你校英语社团发起了暑期实践活动，如参加一次志愿活动、参观一所博物馆、分享一本好书、承担一件家务和体验一次农场实践，以此激发你们的责任感和使命感。请你结合自身情况，选择你要参加的两种活动，阐述原因并发出倡议，用英语写一篇文章向英语社团投稿。
内容包括：
1. 你选择的两种活动；
2. 陈述理由；
3. 发出倡议。
注意：1. 词数 100 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：激发：inspire；责任感和使命感：sense of responsibility and mission
Our school advises us to do meaningful activities during the summer holiday. Here are my plans.
I want to choose volunteering and farm practice. First, volunteering, like helping at a community center, allows me to help others. This can inspire my sense of responsibility and make me feel useful. Besides, farm practice is a special chance to learn how food grows. It teaches me to respect farmers' hard work and treasure food, which also builds a strong sense of mission.
So let's all join in! Choose activities you like and take action this summer. Doing meaningful things together can inspire our sense of responsibility and mission. Let's make our holiday count!
So let's all join in! Choose activities you like and take action this summer. Doing meaningful things together can inspire our sense of responsibility and mission. Let's make our holiday count!
答案
One possible version:
Our school advises us to do meaningful activities during the summer holiday. Here are my plans.
I want to choose volunteering and farm practice. First, volunteering, like helping at a community center, allows me to help others. This can inspire my sense of responsibility and make me feel useful. Besides, farm practice is a special chance to learn how food grows. It teaches me to respect farmers' hard work and treasure food, which also builds a strong sense of mission.
So let's all join in! Choose activities you like and take action this summer. Doing meaningful things together can inspire our sense of responsibility and mission. Let's make our holiday count!
Our school advises us to do meaningful activities during the summer holiday. Here are my plans.
I want to choose volunteering and farm practice. First, volunteering, like helping at a community center, allows me to help others. This can inspire my sense of responsibility and make me feel useful. Besides, farm practice is a special chance to learn how food grows. It teaches me to respect farmers' hard work and treasure food, which also builds a strong sense of mission.
So let's all join in! Choose activities you like and take action this summer. Doing meaningful things together can inspire our sense of responsibility and mission. Let's make our holiday count!
解析
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先先梳理全部题干要求：身份是李华，投稿给学校英语社团，需要从题干给出的5类暑期实践里选2种，依次完成说明所选活动、阐述选择理由、发出倡议三个核心要点，还要紧扣“激发责任感和使命感”的核心主题，词数控制在100左右。思考时优先选自己熟悉、容易展开理由的两个活动，比如志愿活动和农场实践，避免选太偏的活动导致无话可写；接下来给两个活动匹配理由的时候，要主动关联题干给出的“责任感、使命感”的提示，不要脱离主题凭空写好处，适当加少量细节比如去社区做志愿、体验作物生长让内容更饱满；最后收尾部分写倡议，呼应开头主题，控制总词数符合要求，用简单的衔接词让行文连贯即可。
【解析】
解题步骤如下：
1. 审题定位：明确本文是面向英语社团的主题投稿，体裁属于倡议类应用文，使用第一人称，时态以一般现在时为主，必须覆盖三个指定内容要点，词数不计给定开头控制在100词左右。
2. 搭建内容框架：
① 开篇直接点明自己选择的两类活动：志愿活动和农场实践，开门见山符合投稿的简洁风格。
② 分点阐述理由：首先说明志愿活动可以选择在社区中心提供帮助，在帮助他人的过程中激发自身的责任感，获得价值感；其次说明农场实践是难得的体验机会，可以了解粮食的生长过程，懂得尊重农民劳动、珍惜粮食，进而培养使命感，两处理由都紧扣题干给出的核心主题，不跑题。
③ 收尾发出倡议：号召全体同学选择自己喜欢的实践活动立刻行动，点明做有意义的事可以共同激发责任感和使命感，让暑假过得充实有价值，完成倡议部分的要求。
3. 润色调整：使用First, Besides, So等衔接词串联内容，调整语句流畅度，排查语法错误，最终得到符合要求的成文。
【答案】
One possible version:
Our school advises us to do meaningful activities during the summer holiday. Here are my plans.
I want to choose volunteering and farm practice. First, volunteering, like helping at a community center, allows me to help others. This can inspire my sense of responsibility and make me feel useful. Besides, farm practice is a special chance to learn how food grows. It teaches me to respect farmers' hard work and treasure food, which also builds a strong sense of mission.
So let's all join in! Choose activities you like and take action this summer. Doing meaningful things together can inspire our sense of responsibility and mission. Let's make our holiday count!
【知识点】
倡议书类应用文写作
要点整合表达
主题词汇运用
【点评】
本篇范文完全覆盖题干所有指定要点，选择的两类活动完全贴合题干给出的活动范围，理由部分紧密围绕题干要求的“激发责任感和使命感”核心主题，加入的社区志愿、了解作物生长的细节让内容真实不空泛，行文衔接自然流畅，词数符合100左右的要求，收尾的倡议号召力强，完全适配向英语社团投稿的场景，是非常规范的考场参考范文，学生可以借鉴该文的“点明选择-分述理由-倡议升华”的结构完成同类主题写作。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道书面表达题，首先先梳理全部题干要求：身份是李华，投稿给学校英语社团，需要从题干给出的5类暑期实践里选2种，依次完成说明所选活动、阐述选择理由、发出倡议三个核心要点，还要紧扣“激发责任感和使命感”的核心主题，词数控制在100左右。思考时优先选自己熟悉、容易展开理由的两个活动，比如志愿活动和农场实践，避免选太偏的活动导致无话可写；接下来给两个活动匹配理由的时候，要主动关联题干给出的“责任感、使命感”的提示，不要脱离主题凭空写好处，适当加少量细节比如去社区做志愿、体验作物生长让内容更饱满；最后收尾部分写倡议，呼应开头主题，控制总词数符合要求，用简单的衔接词让行文连贯即可。
【解析】
解题步骤如下：
1. 审题定位：明确本文是面向英语社团的主题投稿，体裁属于倡议类应用文，使用第一人称，时态以一般现在时为主，必须覆盖三个指定内容要点，词数不计给定开头控制在100词左右。
2. 搭建内容框架：
① 开篇直接点明自己选择的两类活动：志愿活动和农场实践，开门见山符合投稿的简洁风格。
② 分点阐述理由：首先说明志愿活动可以选择在社区中心提供帮助，在帮助他人的过程中激发自身的责任感，获得价值感；其次说明农场实践是难得的体验机会，可以了解粮食的生长过程，懂得尊重农民劳动、珍惜粮食，进而培养使命感，两处理由都紧扣题干给出的核心主题，不跑题。
③ 收尾发出倡议：号召全体同学选择自己喜欢的实践活动立刻行动，点明做有意义的事可以共同激发责任感和使命感，让暑假过得充实有价值，完成倡议部分的要求。
3. 润色调整：使用First, Besides, So等衔接词串联内容，调整语句流畅度，排查语法错误，最终得到符合要求的成文。
【答案】
One possible version:
Our school advises us to do meaningful activities during the summer holiday. Here are my plans.
I want to choose volunteering and farm practice. First, volunteering, like helping at a community center, allows me to help others. This can inspire my sense of responsibility and make me feel useful. Besides, farm practice is a special chance to learn how food grows. It teaches me to respect farmers' hard work and treasure food, which also builds a strong sense of mission.
So let's all join in! Choose activities you like and take action this summer. Doing meaningful things together can inspire our sense of responsibility and mission. Let's make our holiday count!
【知识点】
倡议书类应用文写作
要点整合表达
主题词汇运用
【点评】
本篇范文完全覆盖题干所有指定要点，选择的两类活动完全贴合题干给出的活动范围，理由部分紧密围绕题干要求的“激发责任感和使命感”核心主题，加入的社区志愿、了解作物生长的细节让内容真实不空泛，行文衔接自然流畅，词数符合100左右的要求，收尾的倡议号召力强，完全适配向英语社团投稿的场景，是非常规范的考场参考范文，学生可以借鉴该文的“点明选择-分述理由-倡议升华”的结构完成同类主题写作。
【难度系数】
0.6
