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七、书面表达。（满分20分）
假如你是阳光中学的一名学生李华，学校英语报号召全校同学参与到下学期的社团创建活动中来。请阅读以下海报，根据提示给校报写一封信谈谈你的想法和建议。
Your Ideas Needed
Hi, guys! Our school is planning to start many clubs next term. We did a survey and we found that students are interested in these topics, including good manners, international charities, green lifestyles and giving a helping hand to others. If you are interested, please write to us. Please choose ONE of the topics above, voice your opinions and ask more students to join.
In your letter, you should write about:
What is the name of the club?
What is the purpose of the club?
What activities are you going to organize?
What will students learn in this club?
We are looking forward to hearing from you!
注意：
1. 语句通顺,要点齐全,并作适当发挥；
2. 80词左右。信件的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得提及有关个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to start a club named .
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
假如你是阳光中学的一名学生李华，学校英语报号召全校同学参与到下学期的社团创建活动中来。请阅读以下海报，根据提示给校报写一封信谈谈你的想法和建议。
Your Ideas Needed
Hi, guys! Our school is planning to start many clubs next term. We did a survey and we found that students are interested in these topics, including good manners, international charities, green lifestyles and giving a helping hand to others. If you are interested, please write to us. Please choose ONE of the topics above, voice your opinions and ask more students to join.
In your letter, you should write about:
What is the name of the club?
What is the purpose of the club?
What activities are you going to organize?
What will students learn in this club?
We are looking forward to hearing from you!
注意：
1. 语句通顺,要点齐全,并作适当发挥；
2. 80词左右。信件的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得提及有关个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to start a club named .
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to start a club named "We are green". The purpose of the club is to call on more people to protect the environment around us.
First, we will put up posters to highlight the importance of protecting the environment. In our daily lives, it's possible for us students to recycle the used books and paper. For example, we can make full use of both sides of the paper. And such small action will do good to the environment in the long run. Second, we will organize some lectures about how to save water and electricity in our daily lives. Third, we will organize some events like "Biking Day" or "Walking Day" to call on more students to ride or walk to school.
I believe that as long as we all work together, we will make a difference to the environment. And we students can also learn how to organize different activities and get enough self-development in both mental and physical health.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to start a club named "We are green". The purpose of the club is to call on more people to protect the environment around us.
First, we will put up posters to highlight the importance of protecting the environment. In our daily lives, it's possible for us students to recycle the used books and paper. For example, we can make full use of both sides of the paper. And such small action will do good to the environment in the long run. Second, we will organize some lectures about how to save water and electricity in our daily lives. Third, we will organize some events like "Biking Day" or "Walking Day" to call on more students to ride or walk to school.
I believe that as long as we all work together, we will make a difference to the environment. And we students can also learn how to organize different activities and get enough self-development in both mental and physical health.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，要求以学生李华的身份给校报写信，围绕给定的四个主题（良好礼仪、国际慈善、绿色生活、帮助他人）选其一创建社团，需涵盖俱乐部名称、目的、活动、学生可学到的内容四个核心要点，同时要符合信件格式，语句通顺、要点齐全，词数约80词。解题思路：1. 选定熟悉的主题（如绿色生活方式）；2. 按要求的四个要点依次展开，补充合理细节；3. 遵循信件格式，利用已给的开头结尾，控制词数，避免提及个人身份信息。
【解析】首先确定俱乐部名称为“We are green”，明确其目的是号召更多人保护周边环境；接着列举具体活动：张贴环保主题海报、回收旧书纸、举办节水节电讲座、组织“骑行日”“步行日”活动；最后说明学生能学到的内容：组织不同活动的能力，身心的自我发展。写作时注意语句连贯，要点完整，符合词数要求。
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to start a club named "We are green". The purpose of the club is to call on more people to protect the environment around us.
First, we will put up posters to highlight the importance of protecting the environment. In our daily lives, it's possible for us students to recycle the used books and paper. For example, we can make full use of both sides of the paper. And such small action will do good to the environment in the long run. Second, we will organize some lectures about how to save water and electricity in our daily lives. Third, we will organize some events like "Biking Day" or "Walking Day" to call on more students to ride or walk to school.
I believe that as long as we all work together, we will make a difference to the environment. And we students can also learn how to organize different activities and get enough self-development in both mental and physical health.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、要点式书面表达、社团主题表达
【点评】本题贴合校园生活实际，要求明确，要点清晰，既考查学生对英语书信格式的掌握，又考查围绕指定主题组织语言、补充细节的能力，是初中英语常见的书面表达题型，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】首先确定俱乐部名称为“We are green”，明确其目的是号召更多人保护周边环境；接着列举具体活动：张贴环保主题海报、回收旧书纸、举办节水节电讲座、组织“骑行日”“步行日”活动；最后说明学生能学到的内容：组织不同活动的能力，身心的自我发展。写作时注意语句连贯，要点完整，符合词数要求。
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to start a club named "We are green". The purpose of the club is to call on more people to protect the environment around us.
First, we will put up posters to highlight the importance of protecting the environment. In our daily lives, it's possible for us students to recycle the used books and paper. For example, we can make full use of both sides of the paper. And such small action will do good to the environment in the long run. Second, we will organize some lectures about how to save water and electricity in our daily lives. Third, we will organize some events like "Biking Day" or "Walking Day" to call on more students to ride or walk to school.
I believe that as long as we all work together, we will make a difference to the environment. And we students can also learn how to organize different activities and get enough self-development in both mental and physical health.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、要点式书面表达、社团主题表达
【点评】本题贴合校园生活实际，要求明确，要点清晰，既考查学生对英语书信格式的掌握，又考查围绕指定主题组织语言、补充细节的能力，是初中英语常见的书面表达题型，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.7
