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实验小学六(3)班将举办一场聚会,涛涛、玲玲、兵兵、贝贝和 Mike 正在为聚会做准备。请你以“A party”为题发挥想象,写一写他们分别做了什么准备,不少于 5 句话。
A party
实验小学六(3)班将举办一场聚会,涛涛、玲玲、兵兵、贝贝和 Mike 正在为聚会做准备。请你以“A party”为题发挥想象,写一写他们分别做了什么准备,不少于 5 句话。
A party
The children are going to have a party in the classroom.
Mike is going to bring some balloons.
Lingling is going to bring some toys from home.
Taotao is going to bring some fruit.
Bingbing is going to bring some snacks and drinks.
Beibei is going to think of some party games. They are all excited. They will have a good time.
答案
素养主题写作
One possible version:
A party
The children are going to have a party in the classroom. Mike is going to bring some balloons. Lingling is going to bring some toys from home. Taotao is going to bring some fruit. Bingbing is going to bring some snacks and drinks. Beibei is going to think of some party games. They are all excited. They will have a good time.
One possible version:
A party
The children are going to have a party in the classroom. Mike is going to bring some balloons. Lingling is going to bring some toys from home. Taotao is going to bring some fruit. Bingbing is going to bring some snacks and drinks. Beibei is going to think of some party games. They are all excited. They will have a good time.
解析
【分析】
这是一道小学英语情景命题写作题,解题思路如下:1. 首先开篇点题,交代聚会即将举办的背景信息;2. 按照题干给出的涛涛、玲玲、兵兵、贝贝、Mike五个人物顺序,依次描述每个人为聚会准备的具体事项,内容要贴合聚会准备的合理场景;3. 最后补充收尾内容,描述大家的心情和对聚会的期待,保证总句数不少于5句,写作时优先使用小学阶段常用的be going to结构的一般将来时,保证语句通顺、没有语法错误即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题:直接说明孩子们即将在教室举办一场聚会,自然引出下文的准备内容。
2. 依次对应人物写合理的准备事项:
描述Mike的准备:Mike打算带来一些气球,适配聚会场景布置的需求
描述Lingling的准备:玲玲打算从家里带来一些玩具,适配聚会的娱乐需求
描述Taotao的准备:涛涛打算带来一些水果,作为聚会的餐食内容
描述Bingbing的准备:兵兵打算带来零食和饮品,满足聚会的饮食需求
描述Beibei的准备:贝贝打算构思一些派对游戏,丰富聚会的互动环节
3. 收尾补充:说明所有人都很兴奋,预判大家会玩得很愉快,让短文逻辑更完整流畅。
【答案】
A party
The children are going to have a party in the classroom. Mike is going to bring some balloons. Lingling is going to bring some toys from home. Taotao is going to bring some fruit. Bingbing is going to bring some snacks and drinks. Beibei is going to think of some party games. They are all excited. They will have a good time.
【知识点】
一般将来时;英语情景写作;人物活动描述
【点评】
本题属于小学六年级基础写作题,没有设置过高的句式要求,只需要紧扣题干给出的人物要素,结合生活常识给每个人物匹配合理的聚会准备行为,正确使用一般将来时的基础表达,保证语句连贯通顺,很容易达到题目的字数和内容要求。
【难度系数】
0.8
这是一道小学英语情景命题写作题,解题思路如下:1. 首先开篇点题,交代聚会即将举办的背景信息;2. 按照题干给出的涛涛、玲玲、兵兵、贝贝、Mike五个人物顺序,依次描述每个人为聚会准备的具体事项,内容要贴合聚会准备的合理场景;3. 最后补充收尾内容,描述大家的心情和对聚会的期待,保证总句数不少于5句,写作时优先使用小学阶段常用的be going to结构的一般将来时,保证语句通顺、没有语法错误即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题:直接说明孩子们即将在教室举办一场聚会,自然引出下文的准备内容。
2. 依次对应人物写合理的准备事项:
描述Mike的准备:Mike打算带来一些气球,适配聚会场景布置的需求
描述Lingling的准备:玲玲打算从家里带来一些玩具,适配聚会的娱乐需求
描述Taotao的准备:涛涛打算带来一些水果,作为聚会的餐食内容
描述Bingbing的准备:兵兵打算带来零食和饮品,满足聚会的饮食需求
描述Beibei的准备:贝贝打算构思一些派对游戏,丰富聚会的互动环节
3. 收尾补充:说明所有人都很兴奋,预判大家会玩得很愉快,让短文逻辑更完整流畅。
【答案】
A party
The children are going to have a party in the classroom. Mike is going to bring some balloons. Lingling is going to bring some toys from home. Taotao is going to bring some fruit. Bingbing is going to bring some snacks and drinks. Beibei is going to think of some party games. They are all excited. They will have a good time.
【知识点】
一般将来时;英语情景写作;人物活动描述
【点评】
本题属于小学六年级基础写作题,没有设置过高的句式要求,只需要紧扣题干给出的人物要素,结合生活常识给每个人物匹配合理的聚会准备行为,正确使用一般将来时的基础表达,保证语句连贯通顺,很容易达到题目的字数和内容要求。
【难度系数】
0.8
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