最近,阳光中学英文校报正在举行以“My school life”为题的征文活动。假如你是阳光中学七年级的新生李敏,请根据下面表格中的内容,介绍一下你自己的学校生活。

【要求】1. 文章应包括所有提示内容,要求语句通顺、意思连贯,省略号处可适当发挥。
2. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My school life
I am Li Min, a new student at Sunshine Middle School. My school is not very big, but it’s very beautiful. Let me tell you something about my school life here.
【要求】1. 文章应包括所有提示内容,要求语句通顺、意思连贯,省略号处可适当发挥。
2. 词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My school life
I am Li Min, a new student at Sunshine Middle School. My school is not very big, but it’s very beautiful. Let me tell you something about my school life here.
Lessons start at 8 a. m. every day and we have all kinds of subjects. I like History best because it's very interesting and I can learn a lot about the world.
I like reading so I often borrow books from the school library. I also like sport.
I'm a member of the school basketball team. We practise playing basketball on Friday afternoons.
My classmates are all kind and we always help each other.
I feel happy at school and I enjoy my school life.
答案
One possible version
My school life
I am Li Min, a new student at Sunshine Middle School.
My school is not very big, but it's very beautiful. Let me tell you something about my school life here.
Lessons start at 8 a. m. every day and we have all kinds of subjects. I like History best because it's very interesting and I can learn a lot about the world.
I like reading so I often borrow books from the school library. I also like sport. I'm a member of the school basketball team. We practise playing basketball on Friday afternoons.
My classmates are all kind and we always help each other.
I feel happy at school and I enjoy my school life.
My school life
I am Li Min, a new student at Sunshine Middle School.
My school is not very big, but it's very beautiful. Let me tell you something about my school life here.
Lessons start at 8 a. m. every day and we have all kinds of subjects. I like History best because it's very interesting and I can learn a lot about the world.
I like reading so I often borrow books from the school library. I also like sport. I'm a member of the school basketball team. We practise playing basketball on Friday afternoons.
My classmates are all kind and we always help each other.
I feel happy at school and I enjoy my school life.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题,主题是介绍自己的学校生活。解题思路:首先承接已给出的开头,按表格要求依次覆盖学习、活动、同学、感受四个核心部分;学习部分需说明上课时间、科目及喜欢历史的原因;活动部分要体现读书、借书、篮球队练习的内容;同学部分突出友善互助;最后补充个人感受,注意语句通顺、词数符合要求,适当发挥省略号处内容。
【解析】
1. 承接开头写学习内容:先说明上课时间和科目,再点明喜欢历史的原因;
2. 接着写活动内容:结合读书、图书馆借书、篮球队练习的要点组织语句;
3. 然后写同学内容:体现同学间友善互助的特点;
4. 最后补充个人感受,完成全文。
【答案】
One possible version
My school life
I am Li Min, a new student at Sunshine Middle School.
My school is not very big, but it's very beautiful. Let me tell you something about my school life here.
Lessons start at 8 a. m. every day and we have all kinds of subjects. I like History best because it's very interesting and I can learn a lot about the world.
I like reading so I often borrow books from the school library. I also like sport. I'm a member of the school basketball team. We practise playing basketball on Friday afternoons.
My classmates are all kind and we always help each other.
I feel happy at school and I enjoy my school life.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题,完整涵盖所有提示内容,语句通顺连贯,适当发挥了省略号部分,符合七年级学生的写作要求,是一篇优秀的征文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语应用文写作题,主题是介绍自己的学校生活。解题思路:首先承接已给出的开头,按表格要求依次覆盖学习、活动、同学、感受四个核心部分;学习部分需说明上课时间、科目及喜欢历史的原因;活动部分要体现读书、借书、篮球队练习的内容;同学部分突出友善互助;最后补充个人感受,注意语句通顺、词数符合要求,适当发挥省略号处内容。
【解析】
1. 承接开头写学习内容:先说明上课时间和科目,再点明喜欢历史的原因;
2. 接着写活动内容:结合读书、图书馆借书、篮球队练习的要点组织语句;
3. 然后写同学内容:体现同学间友善互助的特点;
4. 最后补充个人感受,完成全文。
【答案】
One possible version
My school life
I am Li Min, a new student at Sunshine Middle School.
My school is not very big, but it's very beautiful. Let me tell you something about my school life here.
Lessons start at 8 a. m. every day and we have all kinds of subjects. I like History best because it's very interesting and I can learn a lot about the world.
I like reading so I often borrow books from the school library. I also like sport. I'm a member of the school basketball team. We practise playing basketball on Friday afternoons.
My classmates are all kind and we always help each other.
I feel happy at school and I enjoy my school life.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题,完整涵盖所有提示内容,语句通顺连贯,适当发挥了省略号部分,符合七年级学生的写作要求,是一篇优秀的征文。
【难度系数】
0.6
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