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九、书面表达(根据横线后的写作素材提示补全句子)。(每小题3.5分，共17.5分)
假如你是江柯，是一名青少年心理咨询师。当中学生遇到一些烦恼或者难题时，他们总会给你发电子邮件诉说他们的烦心事。下面是中学生李诚发给你的一封电子邮件，请你给他回一封邮件，提出你的建议。
Dear Mr Jiang,
How are you? I'm a middle school student. I'm having a problem getting on with my parents. They don't allow me to talk with my friends on the phone. They think it's a waste of time. But I don't think so. I always feel lonely at home. It makes me relaxed to talk with my friends. But my parents don't like that. Sometimes I'm so angry that I argue with them. I really don't know how to get on with them. I don't think they know my feelings. What can I do? Will you please help me?
Li Cheng
Dear Li Cheng,
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Jiang Ke
假如你是江柯，是一名青少年心理咨询师。当中学生遇到一些烦恼或者难题时，他们总会给你发电子邮件诉说他们的烦心事。下面是中学生李诚发给你的一封电子邮件，请你给他回一封邮件，提出你的建议。
Dear Mr Jiang,
How are you? I'm a middle school student. I'm having a problem getting on with my parents. They don't allow me to talk with my friends on the phone. They think it's a waste of time. But I don't think so. I always feel lonely at home. It makes me relaxed to talk with my friends. But my parents don't like that. Sometimes I'm so angry that I argue with them. I really don't know how to get on with them. I don't think they know my feelings. What can I do? Will you please help me?
Li Cheng
Dear Li Cheng,
1.
I'm sorry to hear that you are not allowed to talk with your friends on the phone
(很遗憾听说你不被允许和朋友们在电话里交谈). I understand your feelings. Talking with friends really helps you relax and stop feeling lonely.2.
First, you should calm down and avoid arguing with your parents
(首先，你应该冷静下来，避免和你的父母争吵).3.
Then, find a quiet time to have an honest dialogue with them
(然后，找一个安静的时刻与他们进行一次坦诚的对话).4.
Tell them how you truly feel and explain that chatting with friends is important for you
(告诉他们你的真实感受，并解释和朋友聊天对你来说很重要).5.
At the same time, you can show them you study hard and won't waste too much time
(同时，你可以向他们表明你学习很努力，不会浪费太多时间). I believe they will understand you little by little.Jiang Ke
答案
1. I'm sorry to hear that you are not allowed to talk with your friends on the phone
2. First, you should calm down and avoid arguing with your parents
3. Then, find a quiet time to have an honest dialogue with them
4. Tell them how you truly feel and explain that chatting with friends is important for you
5. At the same time, you can show them you study hard and won't waste too much time
2. First, you should calm down and avoid arguing with your parents
3. Then, find a quiet time to have an honest dialogue with them
4. Tell them how you truly feel and explain that chatting with friends is important for you
5. At the same time, you can show them you study hard and won't waste too much time
解析
【分析】
本题为书面表达中的补全句子题型，需根据中文提示准确翻译成符合英语表达习惯的句子，同时契合邮件的亲切语气。解题时需注意：1. 掌握“很遗憾听说”“被允许做某事”等常用表达的英文句式；2. 牢记“冷静下来”“避免争吵”等固定短语的搭配；3. 正确使用被动语态、宾语从句等基础语法，确保句子语法正确、语义通顺。
【解析】
1. 中文“很遗憾听说你不被允许和朋友们在电话里交谈”，对应英文为“I'm sorry to hear that you are not allowed to talk with your friends on the phone”，其中“很遗憾听说”用固定句式“I'm sorry to hear that”，“不被允许做某事”用被动结构“are not allowed to do sth”；
2. 中文“首先，你应该冷静下来，避免和你的父母争吵”，翻译为“First, you should calm down and avoid arguing with your parents”，“首先”对应“First”，“冷静下来”是“calm down”，“避免做某事”为固定搭配“avoid doing sth”，故“避免争吵”为“avoid arguing with your parents”；
3. 中文“然后，找一个安静的时刻与他们进行一次坦诚的对话”，翻译为“Then, find a quiet time to have an honest dialogue with them”，“然后”对应“Then”，“找时间做某事”是“find a time to do sth”，“坦诚的对话”为“honest dialogue”；
4. 中文“告诉他们你的真实感受，并解释和朋友聊天对你来说很重要”，翻译为“Tell them how you truly feel and explain that chatting with friends is important for you”，“真实感受”是“how you truly feel”，“解释”后接宾语从句，“和朋友聊天”作主语用动名词形式“chatting with friends”；
5. 中文“同时，你可以向他们表明你学习很努力，不会浪费太多时间”，翻译为“At the same time, you can show them you study hard and won't waste too much time”，“同时”对应“At the same time”，“表明”是“show”，后接宾语从句，“不会浪费太多时间”为“won't waste too much time”。
【答案】
1. I'm sorry to hear that you are not allowed to talk with your friends on the phone
2. First, you should calm down and avoid arguing with your parents
3. Then, find a quiet time to have an honest dialogue with them
4. Tell them how you truly feel and explain that chatting with friends is important for you
5. At the same time, you can show them you study hard and won't waste too much time
【知识点】
汉译英、固定短语搭配、被动语态
【点评】
本题考查学生的汉译英能力，涉及初中英语常用短语和基础语法，要求学生准确理解中文提示并转化为符合英语表达的句子，难度适中，是书面表达的基础题型，学生只要掌握相关知识点即可完成。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题为书面表达中的补全句子题型，需根据中文提示准确翻译成符合英语表达习惯的句子，同时契合邮件的亲切语气。解题时需注意：1. 掌握“很遗憾听说”“被允许做某事”等常用表达的英文句式；2. 牢记“冷静下来”“避免争吵”等固定短语的搭配；3. 正确使用被动语态、宾语从句等基础语法，确保句子语法正确、语义通顺。
【解析】
1. 中文“很遗憾听说你不被允许和朋友们在电话里交谈”，对应英文为“I'm sorry to hear that you are not allowed to talk with your friends on the phone”，其中“很遗憾听说”用固定句式“I'm sorry to hear that”，“不被允许做某事”用被动结构“are not allowed to do sth”；
2. 中文“首先，你应该冷静下来，避免和你的父母争吵”，翻译为“First, you should calm down and avoid arguing with your parents”，“首先”对应“First”，“冷静下来”是“calm down”，“避免做某事”为固定搭配“avoid doing sth”，故“避免争吵”为“avoid arguing with your parents”；
3. 中文“然后，找一个安静的时刻与他们进行一次坦诚的对话”，翻译为“Then, find a quiet time to have an honest dialogue with them”，“然后”对应“Then”，“找时间做某事”是“find a time to do sth”，“坦诚的对话”为“honest dialogue”；
4. 中文“告诉他们你的真实感受，并解释和朋友聊天对你来说很重要”，翻译为“Tell them how you truly feel and explain that chatting with friends is important for you”，“真实感受”是“how you truly feel”，“解释”后接宾语从句，“和朋友聊天”作主语用动名词形式“chatting with friends”；
5. 中文“同时，你可以向他们表明你学习很努力，不会浪费太多时间”，翻译为“At the same time, you can show them you study hard and won't waste too much time”，“同时”对应“At the same time”，“表明”是“show”，后接宾语从句，“不会浪费太多时间”为“won't waste too much time”。
【答案】
1. I'm sorry to hear that you are not allowed to talk with your friends on the phone
2. First, you should calm down and avoid arguing with your parents
3. Then, find a quiet time to have an honest dialogue with them
4. Tell them how you truly feel and explain that chatting with friends is important for you
5. At the same time, you can show them you study hard and won't waste too much time
【知识点】
汉译英、固定短语搭配、被动语态
【点评】
本题考查学生的汉译英能力，涉及初中英语常用短语和基础语法，要求学生准确理解中文提示并转化为符合英语表达的句子，难度适中，是书面表达的基础题型，学生只要掌握相关知识点即可完成。
【难度系数】
0.7
