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七、书面表达(满分 25 分)
(2024·南京七下期末)假如你是交换生 Amy，向同学们提议暑假期间多参加一些户外活动。请根据以下要点，用英语写一封倡议信。
1. Talk about why we need more outdoor activities.
2. Recommend one or two outdoor activities and give reasons.
要求：1. 文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；2. 紧扣主题，语句通顺，要点全面，书写规范；3. 词数 90 左右，文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students，
I am Amy from Class Six, Grade Seven. When we are busy with our study, it’s also important for us to
Let’s spend at least one day each week doing something outdoors this summer holiday!
Yours，
Amy
(2024·南京七下期末)假如你是交换生 Amy，向同学们提议暑假期间多参加一些户外活动。请根据以下要点，用英语写一封倡议信。
1. Talk about why we need more outdoor activities.
2. Recommend one or two outdoor activities and give reasons.
要求：1. 文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；2. 紧扣主题，语句通顺，要点全面，书写规范；3. 词数 90 左右，文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students，
I am Amy from Class Six, Grade Seven. When we are busy with our study, it’s also important for us to
Let’s spend at least one day each week doing something outdoors this summer holiday!
Yours，
Amy
答案
七、One possible version:
Dear fellow students,
I am Amy from Class Six, Grade Seven. When we are busy with our study, it's also important for us to take part in more outdoor activities.
Being outside helps us learn more about the world around us. It's like opening a window to see the sky and hear the birds. Also, outdoor activities can improve our health. They help us exercise and relax after finishing a lot of homework.
I suggest everyone choose one or two outdoor activities. Hiking is a good way to visit new places and have a good time with friends at the same time. And the views from the top are always great! If you don't have much time, you can also go jogging around your home. Going jogging in the morning can help us enjoy fresh air and prepare for the whole day.
Let's spend at least one day each week doing something outdoors this summer holiday!
Yours,
Amy
Dear fellow students,
I am Amy from Class Six, Grade Seven. When we are busy with our study, it's also important for us to take part in more outdoor activities.
Being outside helps us learn more about the world around us. It's like opening a window to see the sky and hear the birds. Also, outdoor activities can improve our health. They help us exercise and relax after finishing a lot of homework.
I suggest everyone choose one or two outdoor activities. Hiking is a good way to visit new places and have a good time with friends at the same time. And the views from the top are always great! If you don't have much time, you can also go jogging around your home. Going jogging in the morning can help us enjoy fresh air and prepare for the whole day.
Let's spend at least one day each week doing something outdoors this summer holiday!
Yours,
Amy
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以交换生Amy的身份写一封倡议信，核心要点为“说明参加户外活动的原因+推荐1-2项户外活动及理由”，开头和结尾已给出，词数约90。解题思路：1. 承接开头点明倡议主题（多参加户外活动）；2. 从“拓展认知、有益健康”两方面阐述参加户外活动的原因；3. 推荐1-2项适合学生的户外活动（如徒步、慢跑），分别说明理由；4. 衔接结尾发出倡议，确保语句通顺、紧扣要点，避免使用真实信息。
【解析】
1. 承接开头后，先点明倡议核心：take part in more outdoor activities；2. 阐述原因：户外能帮助了解周围世界（like opening a window to see the sky and hear birds），还能改善健康、放松身心（help exercise and relax after homework）；3. 推荐活动：①徒步旅行（hiking）：可游览新地方、和朋友相处，山顶风景好；②慢跑（jogging）：适合时间少的情况，早上能呼吸新鲜空气；4. 衔接结尾，发出每周至少一天户外活动的倡议，确保词数符合要求。
【答案】
Dear fellow students,
I am Amy from Class Six, Grade Seven. When we are busy with our study, it's also important for us to take part in more outdoor activities.
Being outside helps us learn more about the world around us. It's like opening a window to see the sky and hear the birds. Also, outdoor activities can improve our health. They help us exercise and relax after finishing a lot of homework.
I suggest everyone choose one or two outdoor activities. Hiking is a good way to visit new places and have a good time with friends at the same time. And the views from the top are always great! If you don't have much time, you can also go jogging around your home. Going jogging in the morning can help us enjoy fresh air and prepare for the whole day.
Let's spend at least one day each week doing something outdoors this summer holiday!
Yours,
Amy
【知识点】
英语应用文写作（倡议信）、户外活动话题表达、英语句子连贯
【点评】
本题为七年级下册期末英语书面表达题，以学生熟悉的户外活动为话题，考察倡议信的基本写作结构，要点明确、贴近学生生活，要求基础，能有效考察学生的英语应用写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题为英语书面表达题，要求以交换生Amy的身份写一封倡议信，核心要点为“说明参加户外活动的原因+推荐1-2项户外活动及理由”，开头和结尾已给出，词数约90。解题思路：1. 承接开头点明倡议主题（多参加户外活动）；2. 从“拓展认知、有益健康”两方面阐述参加户外活动的原因；3. 推荐1-2项适合学生的户外活动（如徒步、慢跑），分别说明理由；4. 衔接结尾发出倡议，确保语句通顺、紧扣要点，避免使用真实信息。
【解析】
1. 承接开头后，先点明倡议核心：take part in more outdoor activities；2. 阐述原因：户外能帮助了解周围世界（like opening a window to see the sky and hear birds），还能改善健康、放松身心（help exercise and relax after homework）；3. 推荐活动：①徒步旅行（hiking）：可游览新地方、和朋友相处，山顶风景好；②慢跑（jogging）：适合时间少的情况，早上能呼吸新鲜空气；4. 衔接结尾，发出每周至少一天户外活动的倡议，确保词数符合要求。
【答案】
Dear fellow students,
I am Amy from Class Six, Grade Seven. When we are busy with our study, it's also important for us to take part in more outdoor activities.
Being outside helps us learn more about the world around us. It's like opening a window to see the sky and hear the birds. Also, outdoor activities can improve our health. They help us exercise and relax after finishing a lot of homework.
I suggest everyone choose one or two outdoor activities. Hiking is a good way to visit new places and have a good time with friends at the same time. And the views from the top are always great! If you don't have much time, you can also go jogging around your home. Going jogging in the morning can help us enjoy fresh air and prepare for the whole day.
Let's spend at least one day each week doing something outdoors this summer holiday!
Yours,
Amy
【知识点】
英语应用文写作（倡议信）、户外活动话题表达、英语句子连贯
【点评】
本题为七年级下册期末英语书面表达题，以学生熟悉的户外活动为话题，考察倡议信的基本写作结构，要点明确、贴近学生生活，要求基础，能有效考察学生的英语应用写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
