三、书面表达
假如你是李雨。现在你正和家人在北京度假。你的好友玲玲发来一封电子邮件,询问你的度假情况。请根据下列内容提示,给玲玲回一封60词左右的信。
内容提示:1.你们一家住在爸爸的朋友刘叔叔家;
2.今天北京的天气很热,你们没有出门;
3.爸爸在跟刘叔叔聊天,妈妈在和刘太太看电视、喝茶,你在和他们的女儿玩电脑游戏。
Dear Lingling,
Thank you for your email.
Yours,
Li Yu
假如你是李雨。现在你正和家人在北京度假。你的好友玲玲发来一封电子邮件,询问你的度假情况。请根据下列内容提示,给玲玲回一封60词左右的信。
内容提示:1.你们一家住在爸爸的朋友刘叔叔家;
2.今天北京的天气很热,你们没有出门;
3.爸爸在跟刘叔叔聊天,妈妈在和刘太太看电视、喝茶,你在和他们的女儿玩电脑游戏。
Dear Lingling,
Thank you for your email.
I'm having a good vacation in Beijing. We're living in my father's friend, Uncle Liu's home. Uncle Liu and his family are very friendly. Today it's very hot in Beijing. We don't go out. Now my father is talking with Uncle Liu. My mother is watching TV and drinking tea with Mrs Liu. I'm playing computer games with their daughter.
Yours,
Li Yu
答案
One possible version:
Dear Lingling,
Thank you for your email. I'm having a good
vacation in Beijing. We're living in my father's
friend, Uncle Liu's home. Uncle Liu and his family
are very friendly. Today it's very hot in Beijing.
We don't go out. Now my father is talking with Un-
cle Liu. My mother is watching TV and drinking tea
with Mrs Liu. I'm playing computer games with
their daughter.
Yours,
Li Yu
Dear Lingling,
Thank you for your email. I'm having a good
vacation in Beijing. We're living in my father's
friend, Uncle Liu's home. Uncle Liu and his family
are very friendly. Today it's very hot in Beijing.
We don't go out. Now my father is talking with Un-
cle Liu. My mother is watching TV and drinking tea
with Mrs Liu. I'm playing computer games with
their daughter.
Yours,
Li Yu
解析
【分析】
拿到这道题首先要明确写作身份是李雨,写作场景是给好友回邮件介绍在北京的度假近况,首先梳理所有给定的提示要点,确保一个都不遗漏:首先开篇承接已给出的开头句,先总述自己正在北京度假的整体状态,之后按逻辑顺序依次介绍住宿情况、今日天气和居家的原因,最后分别描述全家人当下正在进行的活动,全程以第一人称书写,重点使用现在进行时描述正在发生的动作,控制总词数在60左右,保证语句通顺符合邮件的口语化交流风格即可。
【解析】
1. 承接开头的感谢语句,首先总起说明自己正在北京度过愉快的假期,自然引出下文内容;
2. 对应第一个提示要点,说明全家暂住在爸爸的朋友刘叔叔家中,补充一句刘叔叔一家人很友好的内容,让行文更自然流畅;
3. 对应第二个提示要点,说明今日北京天气十分炎热,因此全家都没有出门外出;
4. 对应第三个提示要点,全部使用现在进行时,分别描述爸爸和刘叔叔聊天、妈妈和刘太太看电视喝茶、自己和刘叔叔的女儿玩电脑游戏的场景,完整覆盖所有提示信息,符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Lingling,
Thank you for your email. I'm having a good vacation in Beijing. We're living in my father's friend, Uncle Liu's home. Uncle Liu and his family are very friendly. Today it's very hot in Beijing. We don't go out. Now my father is talking with Uncle Liu. My mother is watching TV and drinking tea with Mrs Liu. I'm playing computer games with their daughter.
Yours,
Li Yu
【知识点】
现在进行时,英文邮件写作,要点整合
【点评】
本题属于基础提示类应用文写作,所有核心内容都已经给出明确提示,只需要学生正确使用现在进行时描述当下的动作,将所有要点连贯串联,避免语法错误,就可以完成符合要求的作品,能够有效考察学生对现在进行时结构的掌握情况。
【难度系数】
0.8
拿到这道题首先要明确写作身份是李雨,写作场景是给好友回邮件介绍在北京的度假近况,首先梳理所有给定的提示要点,确保一个都不遗漏:首先开篇承接已给出的开头句,先总述自己正在北京度假的整体状态,之后按逻辑顺序依次介绍住宿情况、今日天气和居家的原因,最后分别描述全家人当下正在进行的活动,全程以第一人称书写,重点使用现在进行时描述正在发生的动作,控制总词数在60左右,保证语句通顺符合邮件的口语化交流风格即可。
【解析】
1. 承接开头的感谢语句,首先总起说明自己正在北京度过愉快的假期,自然引出下文内容;
2. 对应第一个提示要点,说明全家暂住在爸爸的朋友刘叔叔家中,补充一句刘叔叔一家人很友好的内容,让行文更自然流畅;
3. 对应第二个提示要点,说明今日北京天气十分炎热,因此全家都没有出门外出;
4. 对应第三个提示要点,全部使用现在进行时,分别描述爸爸和刘叔叔聊天、妈妈和刘太太看电视喝茶、自己和刘叔叔的女儿玩电脑游戏的场景,完整覆盖所有提示信息,符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Lingling,
Thank you for your email. I'm having a good vacation in Beijing. We're living in my father's friend, Uncle Liu's home. Uncle Liu and his family are very friendly. Today it's very hot in Beijing. We don't go out. Now my father is talking with Uncle Liu. My mother is watching TV and drinking tea with Mrs Liu. I'm playing computer games with their daughter.
Yours,
Li Yu
【知识点】
现在进行时,英文邮件写作,要点整合
【点评】
本题属于基础提示类应用文写作,所有核心内容都已经给出明确提示,只需要学生正确使用现在进行时描述当下的动作,将所有要点连贯串联,避免语法错误,就可以完成符合要求的作品,能够有效考察学生对现在进行时结构的掌握情况。
【难度系数】
0.8
四、补充练习
根据短文内容,提取信息,填入表格。(一空一词)
It is very cold in winter and it is not easy to find food. But animals know how to live in winter. Let's look at how they make it.
Some animals just eat and eat and eat. They eat a lot. Their bodies save the food as fat(脂肪). And they use the stored(储存的) fat for energy. The fat keeps them warm, too. They also have more fur. It will warm them like our winter jackets.
Some animals find food before winter comes. In winter, they are always at their homes and they sleep much of the winter. But on warm winter days, they get up and eat some of the food they store.
Some animals just sleep all winter long. They don't eat at all. Before winter these animals eat and eat and eat to get fat. When winter comes, they go to sleep. In this way they don't use much of the fat in their bodies.
Some animals fly south for thousands of kilometres. The weather is warm there and food is easy to find. Usually they go in groups. They come back after winter.

1.
根据短文内容,提取信息,填入表格。(一空一词)
It is very cold in winter and it is not easy to find food. But animals know how to live in winter. Let's look at how they make it.
Some animals just eat and eat and eat. They eat a lot. Their bodies save the food as fat(脂肪). And they use the stored(储存的) fat for energy. The fat keeps them warm, too. They also have more fur. It will warm them like our winter jackets.
Some animals find food before winter comes. In winter, they are always at their homes and they sleep much of the winter. But on warm winter days, they get up and eat some of the food they store.
Some animals just sleep all winter long. They don't eat at all. Before winter these animals eat and eat and eat to get fat. When winter comes, they go to sleep. In this way they don't use much of the fat in their bodies.
Some animals fly south for thousands of kilometres. The weather is warm there and food is easy to find. Usually they go in groups. They come back after winter.
1.
difficult/hard
2.eating
3.food
4.sleep
5.leave
答案
1.difficult/hard 2.eating 3.food 4.sleep 5.leave
解析
【分析】
这是一篇信息提取类的阅读填空题,要求一空一词完成表格。解题时我们可以逐空对照表格的提示,回到原文定位对应的描述:
1. 先看第1空,表格里给出的两点原因是冬天寒冷、很难找到食物,由此可以推断冬天对动物来说是很艰难的,从原文开头的描述也能对应得出表示“困难”的词汇。
2. 第2空前面是动词keep,我们知道keep后面要接动名词形式,对应原文里“动物不停吃很多来储存脂肪作为能量、给自己保暖”的描述,就能得出对应的动作。
3. 第3空后面的提示是冬天不外出、不会一直睡,对应原文里部分动物提前在冬天来临前储备好,冬天待在窝里暖和的时候起来吃的东西,很容易定位到对应的名词。
4. 第4空后面的提示是不吃任何东西、一直睡觉来节省能量,直接对应原文里部分动物整个冬季的行为,填入对应的动词原形即可。
5. 第5空后面的提示是前往南方、长途旅行到天气温暖食物充足的地方,对应动物从寒冷的地方离开的动作,填入合适的动词原形。
【解析】
1. 原文开篇说明冬季天气寒冷、动物很难找到食物,因此冬季对动物来说是困难的,可填difficult或者hard。
2. 固定搭配keep doing sth.表示持续做某事,原文提到部分动物在冬季来临前大量进食储存脂肪,因此这里填eat的动名词形式eating。
3. 原文第三段说明部分动物会在冬季来临前提前找好食物,冬季待在居所里不外出,在暖和的日子起来吃之前储存的食物,因此这里填food。
4. 原文第四段说明部分动物整个冬季全程睡觉,不吃任何东西,靠睡眠减少能量消耗,因此这里填sleep。
5. 原文第五段说明部分动物会前往南方越冬,也就是离开寒冷的区域,等冬季结束再返回,因此这里填leave。
【答案】
1. difficult/hard 2. eating 3. food 4. sleep 5. leave
【知识点】
阅读信息提取;固定搭配;动词词义辨析
【点评】
本题属于基础的阅读信息匹配题型,整体难度较低,只需要学生准确定位原文对应段落的关键描述,注意部分固定搭配的形式要求,就可以顺利得出答案,主要考察学生快速抓取文本关键信息的能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇信息提取类的阅读填空题,要求一空一词完成表格。解题时我们可以逐空对照表格的提示,回到原文定位对应的描述:
1. 先看第1空,表格里给出的两点原因是冬天寒冷、很难找到食物,由此可以推断冬天对动物来说是很艰难的,从原文开头的描述也能对应得出表示“困难”的词汇。
2. 第2空前面是动词keep,我们知道keep后面要接动名词形式,对应原文里“动物不停吃很多来储存脂肪作为能量、给自己保暖”的描述,就能得出对应的动作。
3. 第3空后面的提示是冬天不外出、不会一直睡,对应原文里部分动物提前在冬天来临前储备好,冬天待在窝里暖和的时候起来吃的东西,很容易定位到对应的名词。
4. 第4空后面的提示是不吃任何东西、一直睡觉来节省能量,直接对应原文里部分动物整个冬季的行为,填入对应的动词原形即可。
5. 第5空后面的提示是前往南方、长途旅行到天气温暖食物充足的地方,对应动物从寒冷的地方离开的动作,填入合适的动词原形。
【解析】
1. 原文开篇说明冬季天气寒冷、动物很难找到食物,因此冬季对动物来说是困难的,可填difficult或者hard。
2. 固定搭配keep doing sth.表示持续做某事,原文提到部分动物在冬季来临前大量进食储存脂肪,因此这里填eat的动名词形式eating。
3. 原文第三段说明部分动物会在冬季来临前提前找好食物,冬季待在居所里不外出,在暖和的日子起来吃之前储存的食物,因此这里填food。
4. 原文第四段说明部分动物整个冬季全程睡觉,不吃任何东西,靠睡眠减少能量消耗,因此这里填sleep。
5. 原文第五段说明部分动物会前往南方越冬,也就是离开寒冷的区域,等冬季结束再返回,因此这里填leave。
【答案】
1. difficult/hard 2. eating 3. food 4. sleep 5. leave
【知识点】
阅读信息提取;固定搭配;动词词义辨析
【点评】
本题属于基础的阅读信息匹配题型,整体难度较低,只需要学生准确定位原文对应段落的关键描述,注意部分固定搭配的形式要求,就可以顺利得出答案,主要考察学生快速抓取文本关键信息的能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
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