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电影作为一种健康的娱乐和消遣方式，可以给我们带来快乐和享受，并且能够触动我们的心弦，激发共鸣，有时甚至会令人感动落泪或热血沸腾。这个暑假你观看了哪部电影?你校英文校刊正在开展以“我最喜欢的电影”为题的征文活动。请根据要点提示，以“My favourite film”为题，写一篇作文投稿。
【要点】1. What is your favourite film?
2. What is it about?
3. Who is your favourite character and why?
4. Why do you like this film?
【注意】1.可在要点提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
2.不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名。
3.语句连贯，词数100左右。作文的标题已经给出，不计入总词数。
【提示词语】 friendship, brave, interesting
My favourite film
电影作为一种健康的娱乐和消遣方式，可以给我们带来快乐和享受，并且能够触动我们的心弦，激发共鸣，有时甚至会令人感动落泪或热血沸腾。这个暑假你观看了哪部电影?你校英文校刊正在开展以“我最喜欢的电影”为题的征文活动。请根据要点提示，以“My favourite film”为题，写一篇作文投稿。
【要点】1. What is your favourite film?
2. What is it about?
3. Who is your favourite character and why?
4. Why do you like this film?
【注意】1.可在要点提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
2.不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名。
3.语句连贯，词数100左右。作文的标题已经给出，不计入总词数。
【提示词语】 friendship, brave, interesting
My favourite film
答案
One possible version
My favourite film
My favourite film is Zootopia. This movie is about a bunny named Judy who dreams of becoming a police officer. Even though others doubt her because she is small, Judy works hard and finally becomes the first bunny police officer in Zootopia.
The movie is very exciting because Judy has to solve a big mystery in the city. She teams up with a fox named Nick, and together they find out who is causing trouble in Zootopia. Along the way, they learn to trust each other and become good friends.
My favourite character in the movie is Judy. She is brave and never gives up on her dreams, even when things get tough. I admire her because she shows that you can achieve your goals if you work hard and believe in yourself.
I like this film because it teaches us important lessons about friendship and following our dreams. It is also very funny and has a lot of exciting scenes. Watching Zootopia always makes me happy, and it reminds me to be brave and kind like Judy.
My favourite film
My favourite film is Zootopia. This movie is about a bunny named Judy who dreams of becoming a police officer. Even though others doubt her because she is small, Judy works hard and finally becomes the first bunny police officer in Zootopia.
The movie is very exciting because Judy has to solve a big mystery in the city. She teams up with a fox named Nick, and together they find out who is causing trouble in Zootopia. Along the way, they learn to trust each other and become good friends.
My favourite character in the movie is Judy. She is brave and never gives up on her dreams, even when things get tough. I admire her because she shows that you can achieve your goals if you work hard and believe in yourself.
I like this film because it teaches us important lessons about friendship and following our dreams. It is also very funny and has a lot of exciting scenes. Watching Zootopia always makes me happy, and it reminds me to be brave and kind like Judy.
解析
【分析】
首先审题，明确本次征文主题为“My favourite film”，需覆盖四个要点：最喜欢的电影名称、电影内容、最喜欢的角色及原因、喜欢该电影的理由，同时要适当拓展信息，不得出现真实校名、地名、姓名，词数控制在100左右，需运用提示词汇。写作时可选择大众熟知的电影（如《疯狂动物城》Zootopia），按要点依次展开：先点明电影名称，再简述电影核心剧情，接着说明最喜欢的角色及原因，最后阐述喜欢的理由，确保语句连贯，符合要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇：直接点明最喜欢的电影是《疯狂动物城》（Zootopia），呼应主题；
2. 介绍电影内容：简述兔子朱迪的梦想（成为警察），克服他人质疑，与狐狸尼克组队破案的剧情；
3. 说明最喜欢的角色：选择朱迪，原因是她勇敢、不放弃梦想；
4. 阐述喜欢的理由：结合提示词汇，说明电影传递的关于友谊和追梦的道理，以及电影有趣、有意义的特点；
5. 收尾：呼应主题，表达电影带来的积极影响，确保语句连贯，词数符合要求。
【答案】
My favourite film
My favourite film is Zootopia. This movie is about a bunny named Judy who dreams of becoming a police officer. Even though others doubt her because she is small, Judy works hard and finally becomes the first bunny police officer in Zootopia.
The movie is very exciting because Judy has to solve a big mystery in the city. She teams up with a fox named Nick, and together they find out who is causing trouble in Zootopia. Along the way, they learn to trust each other and become good friends.
My favourite character in the movie is Judy. She is brave and never gives up on her dreams, even when things get tough. I admire her because she shows that you can achieve your goals if you work hard and believe in yourself.
I like this film because it teaches us important lessons about friendship and following our dreams. It is also very funny and has a lot of exciting scenes. Watching Zootopia always makes me happy, and it reminds me to be brave and kind like Judy.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、电影话题英语表达、要点式作文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，全面覆盖所有要点，内容具体充实，语言流畅自然，运用了提示词汇，传递了积极向上的价值观，符合征文的各项要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先审题，明确本次征文主题为“My favourite film”，需覆盖四个要点：最喜欢的电影名称、电影内容、最喜欢的角色及原因、喜欢该电影的理由，同时要适当拓展信息，不得出现真实校名、地名、姓名，词数控制在100左右，需运用提示词汇。写作时可选择大众熟知的电影（如《疯狂动物城》Zootopia），按要点依次展开：先点明电影名称，再简述电影核心剧情，接着说明最喜欢的角色及原因，最后阐述喜欢的理由，确保语句连贯，符合要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇：直接点明最喜欢的电影是《疯狂动物城》（Zootopia），呼应主题；
2. 介绍电影内容：简述兔子朱迪的梦想（成为警察），克服他人质疑，与狐狸尼克组队破案的剧情；
3. 说明最喜欢的角色：选择朱迪，原因是她勇敢、不放弃梦想；
4. 阐述喜欢的理由：结合提示词汇，说明电影传递的关于友谊和追梦的道理，以及电影有趣、有意义的特点；
5. 收尾：呼应主题，表达电影带来的积极影响，确保语句连贯，词数符合要求。
【答案】
My favourite film
My favourite film is Zootopia. This movie is about a bunny named Judy who dreams of becoming a police officer. Even though others doubt her because she is small, Judy works hard and finally becomes the first bunny police officer in Zootopia.
The movie is very exciting because Judy has to solve a big mystery in the city. She teams up with a fox named Nick, and together they find out who is causing trouble in Zootopia. Along the way, they learn to trust each other and become good friends.
My favourite character in the movie is Judy. She is brave and never gives up on her dreams, even when things get tough. I admire her because she shows that you can achieve your goals if you work hard and believe in yourself.
I like this film because it teaches us important lessons about friendship and following our dreams. It is also very funny and has a lot of exciting scenes. Watching Zootopia always makes me happy, and it reminds me to be brave and kind like Judy.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、电影话题英语表达、要点式作文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，全面覆盖所有要点，内容具体充实，语言流畅自然，运用了提示词汇，传递了积极向上的价值观，符合征文的各项要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
