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(2025·江苏宿迁期中)假如你是李华，你的同学 Amy因其优秀的品质和积极的影响力，被提名为本年度“校园榜样之星”。请你根据表格内容用英语给王老师写一封推荐信。
姓名
Amy
品质
有条理，给同学提供更好的管理时间的建议……自信，不害怕当众演讲……
爱好
喜欢艺术(举一例说明)，因为……
理想
影响她最深的人是⋯⋯，因为⋯⋯
梦想成为……
【要求】
1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。
3.词数90左右，可适当发挥。文章开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr Wang,
I'm writing to recommend Amy as the“Star of Role Model”. She has many strong qualities.
Yours,
Li Hua
姓名
Amy
品质
有条理，给同学提供更好的管理时间的建议……自信，不害怕当众演讲……
爱好
喜欢艺术(举一例说明)，因为……
理想
影响她最深的人是⋯⋯，因为⋯⋯
梦想成为……
【要求】
1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。
3.词数90左右，可适当发挥。文章开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr Wang,
I'm writing to recommend Amy as the“Star of Role Model”. She has many strong qualities.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version
Dear Mr Wang,
I'm writing to recommend Amy as the "Star of Role Model". She has many strong qualities. She is very organized and often gives classmates advice on managing time. She is also confident and never afraid of speaking in public.
Amy enjoys painting because it helps her stay patient and creative. The person who influences her most is her Art teacher because he encourages her to follow her dreams. Amy wants to become an Art teacher in the future to help more students who like painting.
I believe Amy is a great choice for the award.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Mr Wang,
I'm writing to recommend Amy as the "Star of Role Model". She has many strong qualities. She is very organized and often gives classmates advice on managing time. She is also confident and never afraid of speaking in public.
Amy enjoys painting because it helps her stay patient and creative. The person who influences her most is her Art teacher because he encourages her to follow her dreams. Amy wants to become an Art teacher in the future to help more students who like painting.
I believe Amy is a great choice for the award.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题要求以李华的身份给王老师写一封推荐信，推荐Amy为“校园榜样之星”。解题思路：1. 承接已给开头，先介绍Amy的核心品质，对应表格中“有条理（给同学时间管理建议）、自信（不怕当众演讲）”的内容；2. 补充爱好部分，选择艺术中的绘画，说明其原因；3. 阐述理想部分，明确影响最深的人及原因，以及未来梦想；4. 结尾表达对Amy的认可，符合词数要求，不出现真实信息，语言通顺连贯。
【解析】
需遵循书信格式，结合表格内容写作：
1. 承接开头后，先写Amy的品质：She is very organized and often gives classmates advice on managing time. She is also confident and never afraid of speaking in public.
2. 补充爱好：Amy enjoys painting because it helps her stay patient and creative.
3. 阐述理想：The person who influences her most is her Art teacher because he encourages her to follow her dreams. Amy wants to become an Art teacher in the future to help more students who like painting.
4. 结尾表达认可：I believe Amy is a great choice for the award.
确保词数90左右，无真实信息，语言连贯。
【答案】
Dear Mr Wang,
I'm writing to recommend Amy as the "Star of Role Model". She has many strong qualities. She is very organized and often gives classmates advice on managing time. She is also confident and never afraid of speaking in public.
Amy enjoys painting because it helps her stay patient and creative. The person who influences her most is her Art teacher because he encourages her to follow her dreams. Amy wants to become an Art teacher in the future to help more students who like painting.
I believe Amy is a great choice for the award.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语品质表达、英语原因说明
【点评】
本题为英语书信写作题，考查学生的应用文写作能力，要求结合给定表格内容完成推荐信，需准确运用相关词汇和句式，内容连贯，符合书信格式，难度适中，适合学生练习。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以李华的身份给王老师写一封推荐信，推荐Amy为“校园榜样之星”。解题思路：1. 承接已给开头，先介绍Amy的核心品质，对应表格中“有条理（给同学时间管理建议）、自信（不怕当众演讲）”的内容；2. 补充爱好部分，选择艺术中的绘画，说明其原因；3. 阐述理想部分，明确影响最深的人及原因，以及未来梦想；4. 结尾表达对Amy的认可，符合词数要求，不出现真实信息，语言通顺连贯。
【解析】
需遵循书信格式，结合表格内容写作：
1. 承接开头后，先写Amy的品质：She is very organized and often gives classmates advice on managing time. She is also confident and never afraid of speaking in public.
2. 补充爱好：Amy enjoys painting because it helps her stay patient and creative.
3. 阐述理想：The person who influences her most is her Art teacher because he encourages her to follow her dreams. Amy wants to become an Art teacher in the future to help more students who like painting.
4. 结尾表达认可：I believe Amy is a great choice for the award.
确保词数90左右，无真实信息，语言连贯。
【答案】
Dear Mr Wang,
I'm writing to recommend Amy as the "Star of Role Model". She has many strong qualities. She is very organized and often gives classmates advice on managing time. She is also confident and never afraid of speaking in public.
Amy enjoys painting because it helps her stay patient and creative. The person who influences her most is her Art teacher because he encourages her to follow her dreams. Amy wants to become an Art teacher in the future to help more students who like painting.
I believe Amy is a great choice for the award.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语品质表达、英语原因说明
【点评】
本题为英语书信写作题，考查学生的应用文写作能力，要求结合给定表格内容完成推荐信，需准确运用相关词汇和句式，内容连贯，符合书信格式，难度适中，适合学生练习。
【难度系数】
0.6
