九、提升题＞假如你是Tom,请写一篇游记,介绍你的旅行经历。不少于50词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello! I'm Tom.

Last summer holiday, I went to Beijing with my family. It was an amazing trip. We visited the Great Wall and took many photos there. We also went to the Palace Museum. We saw many old buildings and learned about Chinese history. The local food was really good. We tried Beijing roast duck and soybean milk. They were delicious. We had a great time in Beijing. I felt happy and excited. I hope to go there again.

【分析】本题为英语游记写作题，要求以Tom的身份介绍旅行经历，开头已给出，需不少于50词。解题思路：1. 确定旅行的时间、地点及同行者，承接开头引出旅行背景；2. 具体描述旅行中的活动（如参观景点、体验当地美食等），需使用一般过去时态；3. 表达旅行的感受与愿望，确保内容连贯、符合字数要求。
【解析】写作时，先承接开头点明旅行的时间（去年暑假）、地点（北京）及同行者（家人）；接着列举旅行中的具体活动：参观长城并拍照、游览故宫了解中国历史；再提及体验当地特色美食（北京烤鸭、豆浆）；最后表达旅行的愉快感受及再次前往的愿望，全程使用一般过去时态，语句通顺，满足不少于50词的要求。
【答案】Last summer holiday, I went to Beijing with my family. It was an amazing trip. We visited the Great Wall and took many photos there. We also went to the Palace Museum. We saw many old buildings and learned about Chinese history. The local food was really good. We tried Beijing roast duck and soybean milk. They were delicious. We had a great time in Beijing. I felt happy and excited. I hope to go there again.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、一般过去时、游记写作
【点评】本题为提升类写作题，考查学生游记类短文的写作能力，要求内容贴合主题、时态正确、语句连贯，是对英语综合表达能力的检验。
【难度系数】0.4