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Ⅴ. 书面表达。
为弘扬中华民族“劳动最光荣”的传统美德，这学期你校组织了一系列劳动实践活动(a series of labour activities)。假如你是李华，请利用表格中的活动信息或结合自身经历，写一篇题为“Let’s Enjoy Working”的英语短文向学校英语报投稿。
注意：
1. 短文必须包括表格中的所有要点，并适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3. 词数80-100。
为弘扬中华民族“劳动最光荣”的传统美德，这学期你校组织了一系列劳动实践活动(a series of labour activities)。假如你是李华，请利用表格中的活动信息或结合自身经历，写一篇题为“Let’s Enjoy Working”的英语短文向学校英语报投稿。
注意：
1. 短文必须包括表格中的所有要点，并适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3. 词数80-100。
答案
One possible version:
Let's Enjoy Working
This term, I took part in a series of labour activities in our school. I was happy to learn so much. In March, I learned to grow vegetables and plant trees on our school farm. In April, I learned to repair things, such as electric fans and bicycles with the help of our teachers. In May, I learned to do housework, such as making the bed, sweeping the floor, and folding clothes.
I think labour activities are not only educational but also useful. I'm sure the more life skills I have, the more independent I will be.
Let's Enjoy Working
This term, I took part in a series of labour activities in our school. I was happy to learn so much. In March, I learned to grow vegetables and plant trees on our school farm. In April, I learned to repair things, such as electric fans and bicycles with the help of our teachers. In May, I learned to do housework, such as making the bed, sweeping the floor, and folding clothes.
I think labour activities are not only educational but also useful. I'm sure the more life skills I have, the more independent I will be.
解析
【分析】
解题思路：首先明确写作任务：标题为“Let’s Enjoy Working”，需包含表格中所有时间对应的劳动要点（三月种蔬菜、种树，四月修理电扇等物品，五月补充合理劳动内容），词数80-100，不得出现真实人名校名，弘扬“劳动最光荣”主题；其次采用时间顺序（March→April→May）组织内容，开头点题参加学校劳动活动，中间按时间写具体活动，结尾表达劳动感悟；最后检查是否符合所有要求，确保语言通顺。
【解析】
按照书面表达的规范步骤：1. 开头引出主题：说明本学期参加了学校的一系列劳动实践活动；2. 按时间顺序依次描述：三月在学校农场种蔬菜、种树，四月在老师帮助下修理电扇、自行车等物品，五月补充家务劳动内容（整理床铺、扫地、叠衣服等），涵盖表格所有要点；3. 结尾表达感悟：说明劳动活动既有教育意义又实用，强调掌握生活技能能提升独立性，呼应主题；4. 检查词数、是否符合要求，确保无真实信息，语言准确通顺。
【答案】
Let's Enjoy Working
This term, I took part in a series of labour activities in our school. I was happy to learn so much. In March, I learned to grow vegetables and plant trees on our school farm. In April, I learned to repair things, such as electric fans and bicycles with the help of our teachers. In May, I learned to do housework, such as making the bed, sweeping the floor, and folding clothes.
I think labour activities are not only educational but also useful. I'm sure the more life skills I have, the more independent I will be.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文写作
【点评】
该范文严格遵循题目要求，完整包含表格所有要点，适当补充五月的劳动内容，结构清晰，采用时间顺序行文，语言通顺自然，准确传达了劳动的价值，符合“劳动最光荣”的主题，是一篇优秀的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
解题思路：首先明确写作任务：标题为“Let’s Enjoy Working”，需包含表格中所有时间对应的劳动要点（三月种蔬菜、种树，四月修理电扇等物品，五月补充合理劳动内容），词数80-100，不得出现真实人名校名，弘扬“劳动最光荣”主题；其次采用时间顺序（March→April→May）组织内容，开头点题参加学校劳动活动，中间按时间写具体活动，结尾表达劳动感悟；最后检查是否符合所有要求，确保语言通顺。
【解析】
按照书面表达的规范步骤：1. 开头引出主题：说明本学期参加了学校的一系列劳动实践活动；2. 按时间顺序依次描述：三月在学校农场种蔬菜、种树，四月在老师帮助下修理电扇、自行车等物品，五月补充家务劳动内容（整理床铺、扫地、叠衣服等），涵盖表格所有要点；3. 结尾表达感悟：说明劳动活动既有教育意义又实用，强调掌握生活技能能提升独立性，呼应主题；4. 检查词数、是否符合要求，确保无真实信息，语言准确通顺。
【答案】
Let's Enjoy Working
This term, I took part in a series of labour activities in our school. I was happy to learn so much. In March, I learned to grow vegetables and plant trees on our school farm. In April, I learned to repair things, such as electric fans and bicycles with the help of our teachers. In May, I learned to do housework, such as making the bed, sweeping the floor, and folding clothes.
I think labour activities are not only educational but also useful. I'm sure the more life skills I have, the more independent I will be.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文写作
【点评】
该范文严格遵循题目要求，完整包含表格所有要点，适当补充五月的劳动内容，结构清晰，采用时间顺序行文，语言通顺自然，准确传达了劳动的价值，符合“劳动最光荣”的主题，是一篇优秀的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
