四、书面表达(共20分)
假设你是江华,下周一你所在的班级将举行英语课外阅读交流会。请根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,向同学们介绍The Race Between a Tortoise and a Rabbit这则故事的第二次比赛和第三次比赛。
The second race
the rabbit wins the second race
be good at running
The third race
swim across the river

to let ... sit on the back
reach ... together
What I have learnt: ...
要求:1. 文章必须包含表格中的主要信息,可适当发挥;
2. 词数80左右(开头已写好,不计入总词数)。
We all know that the rabbit lost the first race against the tortoise.
假设你是江华,下周一你所在的班级将举行英语课外阅读交流会。请根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,向同学们介绍The Race Between a Tortoise and a Rabbit这则故事的第二次比赛和第三次比赛。
The second race
the rabbit wins the second race
be good at running
The third race
swim across the river
to let ... sit on the back
reach ... together
What I have learnt: ...
要求:1. 文章必须包含表格中的主要信息,可适当发挥;
2. 词数80左右(开头已写好,不计入总词数)。
We all know that the rabbit lost the first race against the tortoise.
答案
One possible version:
We all know that the rabbit lost the first race against the tortoise. After that the rabbit decided to have a second race. This time the rabbit didn't sleep and won because he was good at running. However, the tortoise didn't give up. He had a third race with the rabbit. At first, the rabbit ran faster than the tortoise. But shortly there was a wide river ahead of him. The rabbit had no idea about how to cross the river, and later the tortoise got to the river bank. He let the rabbit sit on his back. The tortoise swam across the river together with the rabbit. They reached the finishing line together.
From the story I have learnt that with teamwork all of us can achieve success.
We all know that the rabbit lost the first race against the tortoise. After that the rabbit decided to have a second race. This time the rabbit didn't sleep and won because he was good at running. However, the tortoise didn't give up. He had a third race with the rabbit. At first, the rabbit ran faster than the tortoise. But shortly there was a wide river ahead of him. The rabbit had no idea about how to cross the river, and later the tortoise got to the river bank. He let the rabbit sit on his back. The tortoise swam across the river together with the rabbit. They reached the finishing line together.
From the story I have learnt that with teamwork all of us can achieve success.
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题,需承接给定开头,围绕龟兔赛跑的第二次、第三次比赛展开写作。首先明确两次比赛的核心要点:第二次比赛中,兔子利用擅长跑步的优势,吸取首次失败的教训赢得比赛;第三次比赛遇到河流障碍,兔子不会游泳,乌龟发挥游泳长处,让兔子坐在背上共同过河、抵达终点;最后点明从故事中获得的道理,需包含所有提示信息,语句通顺,词数符合要求。
【解析】首先承接开头,写第二次比赛:After that the rabbit decided to have a second race. This time he didn't sleep and won because he was good at running. 接着写第三次比赛:The tortoise didn't give up, so they had a third race. Soon there was a wide river ahead. The rabbit couldn't swim, but the tortoise could. He let the rabbit sit on his back and swam across the river with him. They reached the finishing line together. 最后点明道理:From the story I have learnt that teamwork helps us achieve success. 确保所有提示要点齐全,语句连贯,词数符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
We all know that the rabbit lost the first race against the tortoise. After that the rabbit decided to have a second race. This time the rabbit didn't sleep and won because he was good at running. However, the tortoise didn't give up. He had a third race with the rabbit. At first, the rabbit ran faster than the tortoise. But shortly there was a wide river ahead of him. The rabbit had no idea about how to cross the river, and later the tortoise got to the river bank. He let the rabbit sit on his back. The tortoise swam across the river together with the rabbit. They reached the finishing line together.
From the story I have learnt that with teamwork all of us can achieve success.
【知识点】英语书面表达、记叙文写作、词汇运用
【点评】本题考查学生对故事内容的理解及英语书面表达能力,要求结合提示要点完成短文,注重语言连贯性和要点完整性,是常见的英语写作题型。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】首先承接开头,写第二次比赛:After that the rabbit decided to have a second race. This time he didn't sleep and won because he was good at running. 接着写第三次比赛:The tortoise didn't give up, so they had a third race. Soon there was a wide river ahead. The rabbit couldn't swim, but the tortoise could. He let the rabbit sit on his back and swam across the river with him. They reached the finishing line together. 最后点明道理:From the story I have learnt that teamwork helps us achieve success. 确保所有提示要点齐全,语句连贯,词数符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
We all know that the rabbit lost the first race against the tortoise. After that the rabbit decided to have a second race. This time the rabbit didn't sleep and won because he was good at running. However, the tortoise didn't give up. He had a third race with the rabbit. At first, the rabbit ran faster than the tortoise. But shortly there was a wide river ahead of him. The rabbit had no idea about how to cross the river, and later the tortoise got to the river bank. He let the rabbit sit on his back. The tortoise swam across the river together with the rabbit. They reached the finishing line together.
From the story I have learnt that with teamwork all of us can achieve success.
【知识点】英语书面表达、记叙文写作、词汇运用
【点评】本题考查学生对故事内容的理解及英语书面表达能力,要求结合提示要点完成短文,注重语言连贯性和要点完整性,是常见的英语写作题型。
【难度系数】0.6
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