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三、现在，很多社区在开展以“阳光运动，健康
生活”为主题的活动。假如你是夏林，请根据
下面表格中的提示和写作要求，用英语写一
篇短文，介绍自己和家人的运动情况。
m Fe a mm biel yrs Fa sv po our r tite Reason pl Way he snp o trots
Father basketball helpful Saturday
Mother swimming relaxing Friday
Xia Lin tennis interesting Sunday
写作要求:
1.短文应包括以上所有提示信息，可适
当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等;
3.词数70左右(开头已给出，不计入总
词数)。
Hello,everyone ! My name is Xia Lin.
生活”为主题的活动。假如你是夏林，请根据
下面表格中的提示和写作要求，用英语写一
篇短文，介绍自己和家人的运动情况。
m Fe a mm biel yrs Fa sv po our r tite Reason pl Way he snp o trots
Father basketball helpful Saturday
Mother swimming relaxing Friday
Xia Lin tennis interesting Sunday
写作要求:
1.短文应包括以上所有提示信息，可适
当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等;
3.词数70左右(开头已给出，不计入总
词数)。
Hello,everyone ! My name is Xia Lin.
答案
三、One possible version:
Hello, everyone! My name is Xia Lin. There are three people in my family. We like different kinds of sports. Now let me tell you our favourite sports.
My father likes basketball best. He thinks it is helpful and can keep him healthy. He plays basketball with his friends every Saturday. My mother's favourite sport is swimming. She thinks it is relaxing for her. She often goes swimming on Friday. As for me, I love playing tennis best. I think it is very interesting. I often play tennis with my best friend on Sunday.
We all think exercise is good for our health. So we keep doing it.
Hello, everyone! My name is Xia Lin. There are three people in my family. We like different kinds of sports. Now let me tell you our favourite sports.
My father likes basketball best. He thinks it is helpful and can keep him healthy. He plays basketball with his friends every Saturday. My mother's favourite sport is swimming. She thinks it is relaxing for her. She often goes swimming on Friday. As for me, I love playing tennis best. I think it is very interesting. I often play tennis with my best friend on Sunday.
We all think exercise is good for our health. So we keep doing it.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先明确核心要求：以夏林的身份，结合表格信息介绍全家的运动情况，贴合“阳光运动，健康生活”的主题。第一步先梳理所有必须包含的要点：父亲爱好篮球、理由是有益、运动时间为周六；母亲爱好游泳、理由是放松、运动时间为周五；自己爱好网球、理由是有趣、运动时间为周日。接下来构思行文逻辑：承接题目给出的开头，先总起说明家庭人数，点明全家都热爱运动，引出下文介绍；再按照父亲、母亲、自己的顺序依次介绍每个人的运动相关信息，适当补充少量合理细节让语句更通顺；最后用一句贴合主题的话收尾，检查所有要点都覆盖，词数符合70左右的要求，也不出现真实人名校名即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇衔接：承接给定开头，先总述家庭基本情况，点明全家都喜爱运动，自然引出下文的介绍，避免行文突兀。
2. 分点对应信息：
① 介绍父亲：说明父亲最爱的运动是篮球，点明他认为篮球很有益、能帮助保持健康，运动时间是每周周六，补充“和朋友一起打球”的细节让内容更真实。
② 介绍母亲：说明母亲最喜欢的运动是游泳，点明她觉得游泳非常放松，她通常周五去游泳。
③ 介绍自己：说明自己最爱打网球，觉得网球十分有趣，经常周日和好朋友一起打网球。
3. 收尾升华：点明全家都认为运动对健康有益，一直坚持运动，呼应本次活动的“阳光运动，健康生活”主题。
最后通读全文，确认所有表格信息都已涵盖，词数符合要求，没有出现违规的真实个人信息即可。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, everyone! My name is Xia Lin. There are three people in my family. We like different kinds of sports. Now let me tell you our favourite sports.
My father likes basketball best. He thinks it is helpful and can keep him healthy. He plays basketball with his friends every Saturday. My mother's favourite sport is swimming. She thinks it is relaxing for her. She often goes swimming on Friday. As for me, I love playing tennis best. I think it is very interesting. I often play tennis with my best friend on Sunday.
We all think exercise is good for our health. So we keep doing it.
【知识点】
英语提示类写作
一般现在时运用
信息整合表达
【点评】
本题属于基础图表提示类英语写作，难度较低，重点考察学生对日常活动描述的常用表达掌握，以及梳理整合给定信息、不遗漏要点的能力，行文逻辑清晰，只需要按顺序串联表格内容、补充少量衔接语句就能完成，适合巩固基础写作的谋篇能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题，首先明确核心要求：以夏林的身份，结合表格信息介绍全家的运动情况，贴合“阳光运动，健康生活”的主题。第一步先梳理所有必须包含的要点：父亲爱好篮球、理由是有益、运动时间为周六；母亲爱好游泳、理由是放松、运动时间为周五；自己爱好网球、理由是有趣、运动时间为周日。接下来构思行文逻辑：承接题目给出的开头，先总起说明家庭人数，点明全家都热爱运动，引出下文介绍；再按照父亲、母亲、自己的顺序依次介绍每个人的运动相关信息，适当补充少量合理细节让语句更通顺；最后用一句贴合主题的话收尾，检查所有要点都覆盖，词数符合70左右的要求，也不出现真实人名校名即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇衔接：承接给定开头，先总述家庭基本情况，点明全家都喜爱运动，自然引出下文的介绍，避免行文突兀。
2. 分点对应信息：
① 介绍父亲：说明父亲最爱的运动是篮球，点明他认为篮球很有益、能帮助保持健康，运动时间是每周周六，补充“和朋友一起打球”的细节让内容更真实。
② 介绍母亲：说明母亲最喜欢的运动是游泳，点明她觉得游泳非常放松，她通常周五去游泳。
③ 介绍自己：说明自己最爱打网球，觉得网球十分有趣，经常周日和好朋友一起打网球。
3. 收尾升华：点明全家都认为运动对健康有益，一直坚持运动，呼应本次活动的“阳光运动，健康生活”主题。
最后通读全文，确认所有表格信息都已涵盖，词数符合要求，没有出现违规的真实个人信息即可。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, everyone! My name is Xia Lin. There are three people in my family. We like different kinds of sports. Now let me tell you our favourite sports.
My father likes basketball best. He thinks it is helpful and can keep him healthy. He plays basketball with his friends every Saturday. My mother's favourite sport is swimming. She thinks it is relaxing for her. She often goes swimming on Friday. As for me, I love playing tennis best. I think it is very interesting. I often play tennis with my best friend on Sunday.
We all think exercise is good for our health. So we keep doing it.
【知识点】
英语提示类写作
一般现在时运用
信息整合表达
【点评】
本题属于基础图表提示类英语写作，难度较低，重点考察学生对日常活动描述的常用表达掌握，以及梳理整合给定信息、不遗漏要点的能力，行文逻辑清晰，只需要按顺序串联表格内容、补充少量衔接语句就能完成，适合巩固基础写作的谋篇能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
