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任务二:书面表达。
从上面的短文中,我们了解到狗狗可以通过多种方式帮助人类——它们可以是盲人的"眼睛",帮助盲人安全走路,也可以在人们有需要的时候帮忙呼救,还可以去医院安慰病人。动物真是人类的好伙伴!
现在请你根据下列写作要点写一篇短文,介绍你最喜欢的一种动物。可适当发挥,不少于60词。
写作要点:
1. What's your favourite animal? Why do you like this animal?
2. How can this animal help people or be important to people?
3. What rules should people follow when they are with this animal?(请至少写出两条规则) Why are the rules important?
从上面的短文中,我们了解到狗狗可以通过多种方式帮助人类——它们可以是盲人的"眼睛",帮助盲人安全走路,也可以在人们有需要的时候帮忙呼救,还可以去医院安慰病人。动物真是人类的好伙伴!
现在请你根据下列写作要点写一篇短文,介绍你最喜欢的一种动物。可适当发挥,不少于60词。
写作要点:
1. What's your favourite animal? Why do you like this animal?
2. How can this animal help people or be important to people?
3. What rules should people follow when they are with this animal?(请至少写出两条规则) Why are the rules important?
答案
My Favourite Animal
My favourite animal is the dog. I like dogs best because they are very cute, smart and friendly to people. They are our lovely and warm friends.
Dogs are very helpful to us. Some dogs are guide dogs, they can help blind people walk to different places safely. Some dogs can look after our houses when we are not at home. They can also stay with old people to make them feel less lonely.
We need to follow two rules when we are with dogs. First, we must tie the dog with a leash when we take it to go outside. This rule is important because it can stop the dog from running everywhere and hurting other strangers. Second, we should clean up the dog's waste in public areas. It can keep the public place clean and make everyone feel comfortable.
My favourite animal is the dog. I like dogs best because they are very cute, smart and friendly to people. They are our lovely and warm friends.
Dogs are very helpful to us. Some dogs are guide dogs, they can help blind people walk to different places safely. Some dogs can look after our houses when we are not at home. They can also stay with old people to make them feel less lonely.
We need to follow two rules when we are with dogs. First, we must tie the dog with a leash when we take it to go outside. This rule is important because it can stop the dog from running everywhere and hurting other strangers. Second, we should clean up the dog's waste in public areas. It can keep the public place clean and make everyone feel comfortable.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇介绍最喜欢动物的英语书面表达，需紧扣三个写作要点完成。第一步，明确最喜欢的动物（本题选狗），说明喜欢的原因；第二步，阐述该动物对人类的帮助；第三步，列出与该动物相处的至少两条规则并说明规则的重要性，同时满足不少于60词的要求，语言需通顺连贯。
【解析】
按照写作要点依次组织内容：1. 开篇点明最喜欢的动物是狗，说明喜欢的原因（可爱、聪明、友好）；2. 具体说明狗对人类的帮助，如导盲犬帮助盲人安全出行、看家、陪伴老人减少孤独感；3. 提出两条与狗相处的规则：外出牵狗绳（防止狗乱跑伤人）、清理狗的排泄物（保持公共卫生），并解释规则的重要性，确保内容完整符合要求。
【答案】
My Favourite Animal
My favourite animal is the dog. I like dogs best because they are very cute, smart and friendly to people. They are our lovely and warm friends.
Dogs are very helpful to us. Some dogs are guide dogs, they can help blind people walk to different places safely. Some dogs can look after our houses when we are not at home. They can also stay with old people to make them feel less lonely.
We need to follow two rules when we are with dogs. First, we must tie the dog with a leash when we take it to go outside. This rule is important because it can stop the dog from running everywhere and hurting other strangers. Second, we should clean up the dog's waste in public areas. It can keep the public place clean and make everyone feel comfortable.
【知识点】英语书面表达（话题写作）、动物与人类的关系
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣写作要点，结构清晰，内容充实，语言通顺，准确传达了狗作为人类伙伴的特点、对人类的帮助以及与狗相处的规则，符合题目要求，是一篇优秀的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.5
这是一篇介绍最喜欢动物的英语书面表达，需紧扣三个写作要点完成。第一步，明确最喜欢的动物（本题选狗），说明喜欢的原因；第二步，阐述该动物对人类的帮助；第三步，列出与该动物相处的至少两条规则并说明规则的重要性，同时满足不少于60词的要求，语言需通顺连贯。
【解析】
按照写作要点依次组织内容：1. 开篇点明最喜欢的动物是狗，说明喜欢的原因（可爱、聪明、友好）；2. 具体说明狗对人类的帮助，如导盲犬帮助盲人安全出行、看家、陪伴老人减少孤独感；3. 提出两条与狗相处的规则：外出牵狗绳（防止狗乱跑伤人）、清理狗的排泄物（保持公共卫生），并解释规则的重要性，确保内容完整符合要求。
【答案】
My Favourite Animal
My favourite animal is the dog. I like dogs best because they are very cute, smart and friendly to people. They are our lovely and warm friends.
Dogs are very helpful to us. Some dogs are guide dogs, they can help blind people walk to different places safely. Some dogs can look after our houses when we are not at home. They can also stay with old people to make them feel less lonely.
We need to follow two rules when we are with dogs. First, we must tie the dog with a leash when we take it to go outside. This rule is important because it can stop the dog from running everywhere and hurting other strangers. Second, we should clean up the dog's waste in public areas. It can keep the public place clean and make everyone feel comfortable.
【知识点】英语书面表达（话题写作）、动物与人类的关系
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣写作要点，结构清晰，内容充实，语言通顺，准确传达了狗作为人类伙伴的特点、对人类的帮助以及与狗相处的规则，符合题目要求，是一篇优秀的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.5
