任务情境
为了倡导健康饮食,学校正在举办主题为“How to Eat Well”的英文征文比赛。假设你是李华,请你围绕下面的写作要点,写一篇短文参加比赛。
写作要点:
1. 你的饮食习惯一日三餐及最喜欢的食物;
2. 提出健康饮食的建议至少2条;
3. 呼吁大家要健康饮食。
要求:
1. 包含所给信息,可适当发挥;
2. 80词左右开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Hua. I would like to share something about my eating habits with you.
思路点拨
1. 人称:第一人称
2. 时态:一般现在时
3. 结构:

素材积累
1. 主题词块
①想要
②炸鱼薯条
③搭配;相配
④太多
⑤快餐
⑥增加体重
⑦均衡的膳食
⑧太……以至于不能
⑨毕竟;终归
⑩远离
⑪饮食习惯
2. 句型仿写
①I usually have porridge for ...教材p.26 1d
句型:I usually have ... for ...
仿写:我通常早餐吃些水饺。
②... my mum says that it's not good to drink too much of it.教材p.29 3c
句型:It's not good to do ...
仿写:吃太多快餐是不好的。
③Healthy eating is important for a healthy body and mind.教材p.30 1b
句型:be important for ...
仿写:健康的饮食习惯对于我们的健康很重要。
连句成篇
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Hua. I would like to share something about my eating habits with you.
为了倡导健康饮食,学校正在举办主题为“How to Eat Well”的英文征文比赛。假设你是李华,请你围绕下面的写作要点,写一篇短文参加比赛。
写作要点:
1. 你的饮食习惯一日三餐及最喜欢的食物;
2. 提出健康饮食的建议至少2条;
3. 呼吁大家要健康饮食。
要求:
1. 包含所给信息,可适当发挥;
2. 80词左右开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Hua. I would like to share something about my eating habits with you.
思路点拨
1. 人称:第一人称
2. 时态:一般现在时
3. 结构:
素材积累
1. 主题词块
①想要
②炸鱼薯条
③搭配;相配
④太多
⑤快餐
⑥增加体重
⑦均衡的膳食
⑧太……以至于不能
⑨毕竟;终归
⑩远离
⑪饮食习惯
2. 句型仿写
①I usually have porridge for ...教材p.26 1d
句型:I usually have ... for ...
仿写:我通常早餐吃些水饺。
②... my mum says that it's not good to drink too much of it.教材p.29 3c
句型:It's not good to do ...
仿写:吃太多快餐是不好的。
③Healthy eating is important for a healthy body and mind.教材p.30 1b
句型:be important for ...
仿写:健康的饮食习惯对于我们的健康很重要。
连句成篇
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Hua. I would like to share something about my eating habits with you.
答案
【素材积累】
1. 主题词块
①would like ②fish and chips
③go with ④too much
⑤fast food ⑥put on weight
⑦balanced meals ⑧too ... to
⑨after all ⑩keep away
⑪eating habits
2. 句型仿写
①I usually have some dumplings for
breakfast.
②It's not good to eat too much fast food.
③Healthy eating habits are very
important for our health.
【连句成篇】
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Hua. I would
like to share something about my eating
habits with you.
In the morning, I usually have some
dumplings for breakfast. I like to eat some
rice and vegetables for lunch. In the
evening, I like to eat some porridge. My
favourite fruit is the apple. As the saying
goes, "An apple a day keeps the doctor
away." I never eat fast food because it is
unhealthy.
In my opinion, we should try to develop
healthy eating habits to keep healthy. Eating
three meals a day is important. In this way,
we can study better. Besides, eating healthy
food is good for our development.
In order to keep healthy, let's eat
healthy food and try not to eat fast food.
1. 主题词块
①would like ②fish and chips
③go with ④too much
⑤fast food ⑥put on weight
⑦balanced meals ⑧too ... to
⑨after all ⑩keep away
⑪eating habits
2. 句型仿写
①I usually have some dumplings for
breakfast.
②It's not good to eat too much fast food.
③Healthy eating habits are very
important for our health.
【连句成篇】
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Hua. I would
like to share something about my eating
habits with you.
In the morning, I usually have some
dumplings for breakfast. I like to eat some
rice and vegetables for lunch. In the
evening, I like to eat some porridge. My
favourite fruit is the apple. As the saying
goes, "An apple a day keeps the doctor
away." I never eat fast food because it is
unhealthy.
In my opinion, we should try to develop
healthy eating habits to keep healthy. Eating
three meals a day is important. In this way,
we can study better. Besides, eating healthy
food is good for our development.
In order to keep healthy, let's eat
healthy food and try not to eat fast food.
解析
【分析】首先明确写作任务:以李华的身份参加“How to Eat Well”主题英文征文,需用第一人称、一般现在时,结构分为开篇点题(已给出开头)、主体介绍一日三餐及健康饮食建议、结尾呼吁健康饮食。解题时先完成素材积累的词块和句型仿写,再按照思维导图的结构连句成篇,确保覆盖所有写作要点,语言准确流畅。
【解析】1. 完成素材积累:根据主题词块和句型仿写的要求,对应写出正确的英文表达,如“想要”对应would like,“炸鱼薯条”对应fish and chips等;2. 连句成篇:先写一日三餐的内容,再提出健康饮食建议,最后发出呼吁,注意衔接自然,符合字数要求。
【答案】Hello, everyone. I'm Li Hua. I would like to share something about my eating habits with you.
In the morning, I usually have some dumplings for breakfast. I like to eat some rice and vegetables for lunch. In the evening, I like to eat some porridge. My favourite fruit is the apple. As the saying goes, "An apple a day keeps the doctor away." I never eat fast food because it is unhealthy.
In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to keep healthy. Eating three meals a day is important. In this way, we can study better. Besides, eating healthy food is good for our development.
In order to keep healthy, let's eat healthy food and try not to eat fast food.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、健康饮食主题词汇、一般现在时运用
【点评】本文紧扣主题,结构清晰,涵盖了一日三餐、健康建议和呼吁三个要点,语言准确,符合征文要求,是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 完成素材积累:根据主题词块和句型仿写的要求,对应写出正确的英文表达,如“想要”对应would like,“炸鱼薯条”对应fish and chips等;2. 连句成篇:先写一日三餐的内容,再提出健康饮食建议,最后发出呼吁,注意衔接自然,符合字数要求。
【答案】Hello, everyone. I'm Li Hua. I would like to share something about my eating habits with you.
In the morning, I usually have some dumplings for breakfast. I like to eat some rice and vegetables for lunch. In the evening, I like to eat some porridge. My favourite fruit is the apple. As the saying goes, "An apple a day keeps the doctor away." I never eat fast food because it is unhealthy.
In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to keep healthy. Eating three meals a day is important. In this way, we can study better. Besides, eating healthy food is good for our development.
In order to keep healthy, let's eat healthy food and try not to eat fast food.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、健康饮食主题词汇、一般现在时运用
【点评】本文紧扣主题,结构清晰,涵盖了一日三餐、健康建议和呼吁三个要点,语言准确,符合征文要求,是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】0.6
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