② 典例赏析
请以“My Trip to ”为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，叙述你的一次旅行。
提示：1. Where did you go? 2. What did you do there? 3. How did you feel about the trip?
要求：1. 请在题目空格处填入你旅行的地点，如：Beijing, Jinan 或 Qingdao 等；2. 短文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名及其他相关信息；3. 词数80~100。
审题指导：
1. 体裁:记叙文 2. 时态:一般过去时 3. 人称:第一人称
写作框架：

优秀范文：

My Trip to Beijing
Do you know about Beijing? I went to Beijing by train with my family last summer holiday.
I visited many famous places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum. I took a lot of photos with my phone. On the Great Wall I met some foreigners and talked with them in English. I also tried the famous Beijing Roast Duck, it tasted very delicious.
I felt a little tired but I was very happy. I look forward to visiting Beijing again.

【分析】
这是一道英语记叙文写作题，解题思路如下：1. 补全题目，选择一个具体的旅行地点（如Beijing）；2. 确定写作时态为一般过去时，人称用第一人称；3. 围绕提示的三个要点组织内容：①交代旅行的时间、同行者、交通方式；②详细叙述在旅行地的活动（如参观景点、互动、品尝美食等）；③表达对旅行的感受；4. 检查是否符合词数（80~100）、无真实个人信息的要求。
【解析】
补全题目为“My Trip to Beijing”，采用一般过去时、第一人称写作：开头点明旅行的基本信息（去年暑假和家人乘火车去北京）；中间列举在北京的活动（参观长城、颐和园、故宫等名胜，用手机拍照，在长城上和外国人用英语交流，品尝北京烤鸭）；结尾表达感受（有点累但很开心，期待再访北京），确保覆盖所有提示要点，语言流畅，符合要求。
【答案】
My Trip to Beijing
Do you know about Beijing? I went to Beijing by train with my family last summer holiday.
I visited many famous places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum. I took a lot of photos with my phone. On the Great Wall I met some foreigners and talked with them in English. I also tried the famous Beijing Roast Duck, it tasted very delicious.
I felt a little tired but I was very happy. I look forward to visiting Beijing again.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作，一般过去时运用，英语写作要点覆盖
【点评】
本文符合题目所有要求，补全题目恰当，时态人称正确，完整覆盖提示的三个要点，内容具体生动，语言通顺，词数符合要求，未出现真实信息，是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】
0.6