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新学校的第一节课通常是令人印象深刻的，那是一个充满兴奋和期待的新开始。你还记得你升入初中的第一节课和授课的老师吗？请根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文。
提示：1. 第一节课是哪位老师的课？你认为他/她怎么样？
2. 在第一节课上你学到了什么？有什么印象深刻的经历？
3. 第一节课对你有什么影响？
注意：1. 词数60~70；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
22 英语 七年级 上册 外研版
新学校的第一节课通常是令人印象深刻的，那是一个充满兴奋和期待的新开始。你还记得你升入初中的第一节课和授课的老师吗？请根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文。
提示：1. 第一节课是哪位老师的课？你认为他/她怎么样？
2. 在第一节课上你学到了什么？有什么印象深刻的经历？
3. 第一节课对你有什么影响？
注意：1. 词数60~70；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
I still remember the first Chinese class in Grade Seven.
Mr Zhang is our Chinese teacher. He is very kind and helpful.
He starts the class by introducing himself. And then he starts to give lessons. He teaches us some interesting ways to remember new writers.
At first, I don't like Chinese, but after the class, I become interested in it.
I can't forget the first Chinese class. It helps me fall in love with Chinese.
22 英语 七年级 上册 外研版
答案
One possible version:
I still remember the first Chinese class in Grade Seven.
Mr Zhang is our Chinese teacher. He is very kind and helpful.
He starts the class by introducing himself. And then he starts to give lessons. He teaches us some interesting ways to remember new writers. At first, I don't like Chinese, but after the class, I become interested in it.
I can't forget the first Chinese class. It helps me fall in love with Chinese.
I still remember the first Chinese class in Grade Seven.
Mr Zhang is our Chinese teacher. He is very kind and helpful.
He starts the class by introducing himself. And then he starts to give lessons. He teaches us some interesting ways to remember new writers. At first, I don't like Chinese, but after the class, I become interested in it.
I can't forget the first Chinese class. It helps me fall in love with Chinese.
解析
【分析】
本次写作要求围绕“升入初中的第一节课和授课老师”展开，需紧扣三个提示要点：确定授课老师及对老师的评价、课堂上学到的内容与印象深刻的经历、课程的影响。写作时需用简单连贯的英语语句，控制词数在60-70之间，符合七年级学生的英语表达水平。
【解析】
1. 开篇点明升入初中的第一节课是语文课，引出语文老师；
2. 介绍老师的性格特点（如友善、乐于助人）；
3. 描述课堂上的具体经历：老师用有趣的方法教记作家，这是印象深刻的内容；
4. 说明课程的影响：从原本不喜欢语文到产生兴趣，最后收尾呼应，表达对这节课的难忘。
【答案】
One possible version:
I still remember the first Chinese class in Grade Seven.
Mr Zhang is our Chinese teacher. He is very kind and helpful.
He starts the class by introducing himself. And then he starts to give lessons. He teaches us some interesting ways to remember new writers. At first, I don't like Chinese, but after the class, I become interested in it.
I can't forget the first Chinese class. It helps me fall in love with Chinese.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、七年级记叙文写作
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目提示，结构清晰，内容具体，语言简洁流畅，符合七年级学生的英语写作要求，准确传达了主题，完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.7
本次写作要求围绕“升入初中的第一节课和授课老师”展开，需紧扣三个提示要点：确定授课老师及对老师的评价、课堂上学到的内容与印象深刻的经历、课程的影响。写作时需用简单连贯的英语语句，控制词数在60-70之间，符合七年级学生的英语表达水平。
【解析】
1. 开篇点明升入初中的第一节课是语文课，引出语文老师；
2. 介绍老师的性格特点（如友善、乐于助人）；
3. 描述课堂上的具体经历：老师用有趣的方法教记作家，这是印象深刻的内容；
4. 说明课程的影响：从原本不喜欢语文到产生兴趣，最后收尾呼应，表达对这节课的难忘。
【答案】
One possible version:
I still remember the first Chinese class in Grade Seven.
Mr Zhang is our Chinese teacher. He is very kind and helpful.
He starts the class by introducing himself. And then he starts to give lessons. He teaches us some interesting ways to remember new writers. At first, I don't like Chinese, but after the class, I become interested in it.
I can't forget the first Chinese class. It helps me fall in love with Chinese.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、七年级记叙文写作
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目提示，结构清晰，内容具体，语言简洁流畅，符合七年级学生的英语写作要求，准确传达了主题，完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】
0.7
