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假如你班李华同学在今年“榜样的力量”评选活动中荣获“新时代好少年”的称号。作为校英语报小记者，请你根据下表内容，用英语写一篇短文介绍他的事迹，并谈谈你的看法，呼吁大家向他学习。
| Personality | hard-working, active and brave, warm-hearted and helpful... |
| --- | --- |
| Achievements | • won the first prize in the city swimming competition
• saved a young boy from
the river
• ... |
| Your opinion | ... |
【要求】（1）须包含上表所有内容，可适当发挥；（2）不得出现与你相关的真实信息；（3）不少于90词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Li Hua won this year's New Times' Good Teenager award. Now, it's my great honour to introduce him to you.
假如你班李华同学在今年“榜样的力量”评选活动中荣获“新时代好少年”的称号。作为校英语报小记者，请你根据下表内容，用英语写一篇短文介绍他的事迹，并谈谈你的看法，呼吁大家向他学习。
| Personality | hard-working, active and brave, warm-hearted and helpful... |
| --- | --- |
| Achievements | • won the first prize in the city swimming competition
• saved a young boy from
the river• ... |
| Your opinion | ... |
【要求】（1）须包含上表所有内容，可适当发挥；（2）不得出现与你相关的真实信息；（3）不少于90词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Li Hua won this year's New Times' Good Teenager award. Now, it's my great honour to introduce him to you.
答案
Li Hua won this year's New Times' Good Teenager award.Now,it's my great honour to introduce him to you.
Li Hua is not only hard-working,active and brave,but also warm-hearted.He is always ready to help his classmates and teachers when they are in need,and he does well in all his subjects at school.
He is skilled at swimming and once won the first prize in the city swimming competition.What's more,he bravely saved a little boy from the river last term.
In my opinion,Li Hua is a truly excellent teenager.He sets a perfect example for all of us.We should learn from him and try our best to be helpful,brave and responsible.(共100词)
Li Hua is not only hard-working,active and brave,but also warm-hearted.He is always ready to help his classmates and teachers when they are in need,and he does well in all his subjects at school.
He is skilled at swimming and once won the first prize in the city swimming competition.What's more,he bravely saved a little boy from the river last term.
In my opinion,Li Hua is a truly excellent teenager.He sets a perfect example for all of us.We should learn from him and try our best to be helpful,brave and responsible.(共100词)
解析
【分析】首先明确写作任务：介绍获“新时代好少年”称号的李华，需涵盖表格中性格、成就的全部内容，加入个人看法并呼吁学习。第一步衔接给定开头，先介绍李华的性格特点，对应表格中的hard-working、active and brave、warm-hearted等，可补充学校表现；第二步列举成就，包含给定的市游泳比赛一等奖、救落水男孩，可适当拓展细节；第三步表达看法，呼吁向他学习，确保内容完整、符合字数要求。
【解析】按照写作逻辑，先衔接开头介绍性格：Li Hua is not only hard-working, active and brave, but also warm-hearted. He is always ready to help others and does well in his studies. 接着写成就：He is good at swimming and won the first prize in the city swimming competition. Besides, he bravely saved a little boy from the river last term. 最后谈看法：In my opinion, Li Hua is an excellent teenager who sets a good example for us. We should learn from him and strive to be helpful and brave. 既覆盖所有要求，又符合字数规范。
【答案】Li Hua won this year's New Times' Good Teenager award.Now,it's my great honour to introduce him to you.Li Hua is not only hard-working,active and brave,but also warm-hearted.He is always ready to help his classmates and teachers when they are in need,and he does well in all his subjects at school.He is skilled at swimming and once won the first prize in the city swimming competition.What's more,he bravely saved a little boy from the river last term.In my opinion,Li Hua is a truly excellent teenager.He sets a perfect example for all of us.We should learn from him and try our best to be helpful,brave and responsible.
【知识点】英语人物介绍写作、词汇运用、句子结构
【点评】该写作严格遵循题目要求，涵盖表格全部内容，补充合理细节，结构清晰、逻辑连贯，观点明确，符合英语写作规范，是一篇优质范文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】按照写作逻辑，先衔接开头介绍性格：Li Hua is not only hard-working, active and brave, but also warm-hearted. He is always ready to help others and does well in his studies. 接着写成就：He is good at swimming and won the first prize in the city swimming competition. Besides, he bravely saved a little boy from the river last term. 最后谈看法：In my opinion, Li Hua is an excellent teenager who sets a good example for us. We should learn from him and strive to be helpful and brave. 既覆盖所有要求，又符合字数规范。
【答案】Li Hua won this year's New Times' Good Teenager award.Now,it's my great honour to introduce him to you.Li Hua is not only hard-working,active and brave,but also warm-hearted.He is always ready to help his classmates and teachers when they are in need,and he does well in all his subjects at school.He is skilled at swimming and once won the first prize in the city swimming competition.What's more,he bravely saved a little boy from the river last term.In my opinion,Li Hua is a truly excellent teenager.He sets a perfect example for all of us.We should learn from him and try our best to be helpful,brave and responsible.
【知识点】英语人物介绍写作、词汇运用、句子结构
【点评】该写作严格遵循题目要求，涵盖表格全部内容，补充合理细节，结构清晰、逻辑连贯，观点明确，符合英语写作规范，是一篇优质范文。
【难度系数】0.5
