Ⅴ.写作。
亲爱的同学们,首先祝贺大家顺利完成了七年级的课程学习!在这一年的学习中,大家经历了许多开心、感动和难忘的日子。请写一篇英语短文介绍一下令你难忘的一天。
提示:1.这一天发生的特别的事情;
2.简单地描述一下你的感受。
写作要求:1.文中须包含所有的提示信息,可适当发挥;
2.词数为70左右。
参考词汇:give up 放弃;a sense of success 成就感

One possible version:
It was a bright and sunny day. I went fishing with my father. We started fishing when we arrived at a lake. Half an hour passed, but we got no fish. I became impatient and wanted to give up.
"Just wait patiently, son. We can't get anything easily," my father encouraged me. I sat patiently to fish with my father. Finally, I got a big fish. I was very glad and a sense of success came to me.
I would always remember this day because I learnt that being patient was important to me.

【分析】首先明确写作主题为“令你难忘的一天”，需包含两个核心内容：当天发生的特别事情、自身感受。写作时要选取具体小事作为事例，运用参考词汇“give up”“a sense of success”，控制词数在70左右，结构分为三部分：点明当天基本情况、叙述事件经过、表达个人感悟，确保所有提示信息都涵盖，语言符合七年级英语表达水平。
【解析】先确定具体事例（和父亲钓鱼），开头点明天气与事件；中间叙述遇到的困难（半小时没钓到鱼想放弃），父亲鼓励后坚持，最终钓到鱼，运用参考词汇；结尾表达感悟（学会耐心的重要性），调整语句使词数符合要求，保证逻辑通顺、内容完整。
【答案】One possible version:
It was a bright and sunny day. I went fishing with my father. We started fishing when we arrived at a lake. Half an hour passed, but we got no fish. I became impatient and wanted to give up.
"Just wait patiently, son. We can't get anything easily," my father encouraged me. I sat patiently to fish with my father. Finally, I got a big fish. I was very glad and a sense of success came to me.
I would always remember this day because I learnt that being patient was important to me.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作；词汇运用；英语写作
【点评】范文紧扣题目要求，以具体事例展现难忘的一天，涵盖所有提示信息，合理运用参考词汇，结构清晰，语言简洁，符合七年级学生的英语写作要求，能有效体现写作要点。
【难度系数】0.6