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51. 假设你是李华,校刊英语专栏现向同学们发起征文活动,题目是“Wonderful Hobby, Colourful Life”。请根据以下思维导图内容提示,用英语写一篇有关自己兴趣爱好的短文并投稿。
注意:
(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生真实姓名。
(3)语句连贯,词数80左右。短文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Wonderful Hobby, Colourful Life
I have a wonderful hobby. It makes my life colourful.
I hope you can find your hobbies and let them colour your life.
51. 假设你是李华,校刊英语专栏现向同学们发起征文活动,题目是“Wonderful Hobby, Colourful Life”。请根据以下思维导图内容提示,用英语写一篇有关自己兴趣爱好的短文并投稿。
注意:
(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生真实姓名。
(3)语句连贯,词数80左右。短文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Wonderful Hobby, Colourful Life
I have a wonderful hobby. It makes my life colourful.
I hope you can find your hobbies and let them colour your life.
答案
51. 参考范文：
Wonderful Hobby, Colourful Life
I have a wonderful hobby. It makes my life colourful. My wonderful hobby is painting. I started painting when I was eight. At that time, I saw a beautiful painting in a book and was deeply attracted by its colours and lines. From then on, I began to practise painting whenever I had free time.
Painting not only helps me learn new skills like mixing colours and creating different textures, but also allows me to express my feelings and thoughts. It brings me great joy and relaxation. Whenever I feel stressed or bored, painting becomes my best friend.
I hope you can find your hobbies and let them colour your life.
Wonderful Hobby, Colourful Life
I have a wonderful hobby. It makes my life colourful. My wonderful hobby is painting. I started painting when I was eight. At that time, I saw a beautiful painting in a book and was deeply attracted by its colours and lines. From then on, I began to practise painting whenever I had free time.
Painting not only helps me learn new skills like mixing colours and creating different textures, but also allows me to express my feelings and thoughts. It brings me great joy and relaxation. Whenever I feel stressed or bored, painting becomes my best friend.
I hope you can find your hobbies and let them colour your life.
解析
【分析】首先明确题目要求：围绕主题“Wonderful Hobby, Colourful Life”，根据思维导图的三个模块（爱好的内容/开始时间、相关经历、至少两点益处）写作，结合给出的开头结尾，词数80左右，不能出现真实信息。思考步骤：1.选择一个具体的爱好（如绘画）；2.说明爱好是什么、开始时间及原因；3.补充相关经历；4.阐述爱好带来的至少两点益处；5.用连贯语句连接内容，控制词数，符合要求。
【解析】1. 确定爱好为painting，开始时间是8岁，起因是看到书中的画被吸引；2. 补充相关经历：空闲时间练习绘画；3. 写益处：提升绘画技能、表达情感、缓解压力；4. 连接开头结尾，调整语句，确保连贯，词数符合要求，无真实信息。
【答案】Wonderful Hobby, Colourful Life
I have a wonderful hobby. It makes my life colourful. My wonderful hobby is painting. I started painting when I was eight. At that time, I saw a beautiful painting in a book and was deeply attracted by its colours and lines. From then on, I began to practise painting whenever I had free time.
Painting not only helps me learn new skills like mixing colours and creating different textures, but also allows me to express my feelings and thoughts. It brings me great joy and relaxation. Whenever I feel stressed or bored, painting becomes my best friend.
I hope you can find your hobbies and let them colour your life.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题类写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题，按照思维导图的三个要点展开，内容具体充实，益处部分明确提到两点以上，语句通顺连贯，符合题目对词数、信息真实性的要求，是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】1. 确定爱好为painting，开始时间是8岁，起因是看到书中的画被吸引；2. 补充相关经历：空闲时间练习绘画；3. 写益处：提升绘画技能、表达情感、缓解压力；4. 连接开头结尾，调整语句，确保连贯，词数符合要求，无真实信息。
【答案】Wonderful Hobby, Colourful Life
I have a wonderful hobby. It makes my life colourful. My wonderful hobby is painting. I started painting when I was eight. At that time, I saw a beautiful painting in a book and was deeply attracted by its colours and lines. From then on, I began to practise painting whenever I had free time.
Painting not only helps me learn new skills like mixing colours and creating different textures, but also allows me to express my feelings and thoughts. It brings me great joy and relaxation. Whenever I feel stressed or bored, painting becomes my best friend.
I hope you can find your hobbies and let them colour your life.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题类写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题，按照思维导图的三个要点展开，内容具体充实，益处部分明确提到两点以上，语句通顺连贯，符合题目对词数、信息真实性的要求，是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】0.3
