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十一、书面表达。假设去年暑假你跟父母一起坐火车去了桂林,请根据信息提示完成下面的短文，可适当发挥想象，不少于5句话。
参考短语：visit the mountains and the lakes, go boating, take pictures, eat delicious food, buy gifts
My summer holiday
Last summer holiday, I went to Guilin with my parents. We went there
参考短语：visit the mountains and the lakes, go boating, take pictures, eat delicious food, buy gifts
My summer holiday
Last summer holiday, I went to Guilin with my parents. We went there
答案
My summer holiday
Last summer holiday, I went
to Guilin with my parents. We
went there by train. We visited
the mountains and the lakes.
They are really beautiful. We
went boating on the lake. My fa-
ther took many pictures. We ate
delicious food and bought lots of
gifts. We had a good time in
Guilin!
Last summer holiday, I went
to Guilin with my parents. We
went there by train. We visited
the mountains and the lakes.
They are really beautiful. We
went boating on the lake. My fa-
ther took many pictures. We ate
delicious food and bought lots of
gifts. We had a good time in
Guilin!
解析
【分析】
这是一篇旅行主题的英语书面表达，解题时首先要抓住题目给出的核心信息：去年暑假和父母坐火车去桂林，要合理使用给出的参考短语，总句数不少于5句。首先第一步先补全交通方式，对应题干里“坐火车去桂林”的设定；接下来按照旅行的常规行程逻辑排序内容：先游览当地山水景观，再安排水上游玩项目，之后记录拍照、品尝美食、购买伴手礼的环节，最后补充旅行的收尾感受，全程注意时态统一用一般过去时，贴合“去年暑假”的过去时间背景，内容也和配图的桂林象鼻山景观呼应，很容易写出符合要求的短文。
【解析】
1. 第一句补全交通方式：根据题干“跟父母一起坐火车去了桂林”的设定，写出We went there by train，完成开篇交通信息的交代。
2. 第二句引入参考短语visit the mountains and the lakes，写出We visited the mountains and the lakes，再补充一句They are really beautiful，描述桂林山水的特点，内容更饱满。
3. 第三句引入参考短语go boating，结合桂林多河湖的特点写出We went boating on the lake，描述游玩项目。
4. 第四句引入参考短语take pictures，写出My father took many pictures，记录游玩的细节。
5. 第五句把剩下的参考短语eat delicious food和buy gifts结合，写出We ate delicious food and bought lots of gifts，覆盖所有提示短语。
6. 最后补充收尾句We had a good time in Guilin! 表达旅行的愉快感受，全文时态统一为一般过去时，句数满足不少于5句的要求，逻辑通顺自然。
【答案】
My summer holiday
Last summer holiday, I went to Guilin with my parents. We went there by train. We visited the mountains and the lakes. They are really beautiful. We went boating on the lake. My father took many pictures. We ate delicious food and bought lots of gifts. We had a good time in Guilin!
【知识点】
一般过去时，旅行话题写作
【点评】
本题属于基础的叙事类写作题，题干给出了充足的提示信息和参考短语，学生只需要按照旅行的先后行程逻辑串联内容，注意规则和不规则动词的过去式正确变形，就可以写出符合要求的短文，适当补充少量感受类语句还能让文章更生动自然。
【难度系数】
0.8
这是一篇旅行主题的英语书面表达，解题时首先要抓住题目给出的核心信息：去年暑假和父母坐火车去桂林，要合理使用给出的参考短语，总句数不少于5句。首先第一步先补全交通方式，对应题干里“坐火车去桂林”的设定；接下来按照旅行的常规行程逻辑排序内容：先游览当地山水景观，再安排水上游玩项目，之后记录拍照、品尝美食、购买伴手礼的环节，最后补充旅行的收尾感受，全程注意时态统一用一般过去时，贴合“去年暑假”的过去时间背景，内容也和配图的桂林象鼻山景观呼应，很容易写出符合要求的短文。
【解析】
1. 第一句补全交通方式：根据题干“跟父母一起坐火车去了桂林”的设定，写出We went there by train，完成开篇交通信息的交代。
2. 第二句引入参考短语visit the mountains and the lakes，写出We visited the mountains and the lakes，再补充一句They are really beautiful，描述桂林山水的特点，内容更饱满。
3. 第三句引入参考短语go boating，结合桂林多河湖的特点写出We went boating on the lake，描述游玩项目。
4. 第四句引入参考短语take pictures，写出My father took many pictures，记录游玩的细节。
5. 第五句把剩下的参考短语eat delicious food和buy gifts结合，写出We ate delicious food and bought lots of gifts，覆盖所有提示短语。
6. 最后补充收尾句We had a good time in Guilin! 表达旅行的愉快感受，全文时态统一为一般过去时，句数满足不少于5句的要求，逻辑通顺自然。
【答案】
My summer holiday
Last summer holiday, I went to Guilin with my parents. We went there by train. We visited the mountains and the lakes. They are really beautiful. We went boating on the lake. My father took many pictures. We ate delicious food and bought lots of gifts. We had a good time in Guilin!
【知识点】
一般过去时，旅行话题写作
【点评】
本题属于基础的叙事类写作题，题干给出了充足的提示信息和参考短语，学生只需要按照旅行的先后行程逻辑串联内容，注意规则和不规则动词的过去式正确变形，就可以写出符合要求的短文，适当补充少量感受类语句还能让文章更生动自然。
【难度系数】
0.8
