五、书面表达
你校将于下个月开展“课间15分钟”活动，校英语报现向全校学生征集活动建议。请你给负责人Mr Wang写一封信，表达你的建议及其原因。
要求：（1）语句通顺，行文连贯；（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；（3）80—100词（短文的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Mr Wang,
How are you? I am very glad to share my ideas about the breaktime activities.















Yours,
Li Hua

One possible version:
During breaktime, I usually just sit at my desk and chat with my classmates briefly. If we have a 15-minute breaktime next month, I'd really love the activity of taking a short walk around the schoolyard.
Firstly, sitting in the classroom for a long time makes me feel stiff. A short walk can relax my body and refresh my mind, helping me be more focused in the following classes. Secondly, the schoolyard is full of green plants. Walking around allows me to enjoy the beautiful scenery and breathe in fresh air, which is beneficial to my health.
I hope my suggestions can be considered.
(104 words)

【分析】本题要求写一封给Mr Wang的建议信，主题为“课间15分钟”活动，需包含具体建议及对应原因，注意词数80-100，不得出现真实信息，开头结尾已给出。解题思路：1. 确定贴合实际的核心建议（如校园内短时间散步）；2. 分点阐述建议的合理性（从身体状态、环境益处等角度）；3. 收尾表达希望建议被采纳的意愿，确保行文连贯、符合书信格式。
【解析】首先承接开头，明确提出核心建议：选择在校园内短时间散步；接着分两点说明原因：一是长时间久坐会导致身体僵硬，散步能放松身体、提神醒脑，助力后续课堂专注；二是校园绿植丰富，散步可欣赏风景、呼吸新鲜空气，有益健康；最后收尾表达希望建议被考虑，控制词数在要求范围内，保证语句通顺连贯。
【答案】One possible version:
During breaktime, I usually just sit at my desk and chat with my classmates briefly. If we have a 15-minute breaktime next month, I'd really love the activity of taking a short walk around the schoolyard.
Firstly, sitting in the classroom for a long time makes me feel stiff. A short walk can relax my body and refresh my mind, helping me be more focused in the following classes. Secondly, the schoolyard is full of green plants. Walking around allows me to enjoy the beautiful scenery and breathe in fresh air, which is beneficial to my health.
I hope my suggestions can be considered.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、建议类书信写作
【点评】范文紧扣题目要求，建议明确，原因阐述条理清晰，语句通顺，符合书信格式，词数达标，是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】0.5