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Ⅶ.书面表达(满分20分)
“吾日三省吾身。”习近平总书记在讲话中多次引用这句话，告诫我们要勇于面对自己的缺点，在学习中求真务实。怎样成为更好的自己呢？请你根据以下内容提示，以“How to be a better teenager?”为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿，在毕业典礼上发言。
内容提示:1.养成健康的生活习惯；
2.学习有计划、有行动；
3.友善待人；
4.培养良好的兴趣爱好，参加志愿活动。
写作要求:1.内容必须包括所给要点，并适当发挥一至两点；
2.语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名和地名；
4.不少于90词。
How to be a better teenager?
Hello, everyone! Today I'd like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager.
In order to be a better teenager, I plan to do the following things. First, we should develop healthy living habits. Only in this way can we live and study well. Second, we should make a study plan and put it into action so that we can learn better. Third, we should be kind to others. When they are in need,we should give them a helping hand. In addition,we should develop good interests and take part in more voluntary activities.
Teenagers are the hope of our country. So let's all try our best to be better teenagers and serve our country in the future.
Thank you!
“吾日三省吾身。”习近平总书记在讲话中多次引用这句话，告诫我们要勇于面对自己的缺点，在学习中求真务实。怎样成为更好的自己呢？请你根据以下内容提示，以“How to be a better teenager?”为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿，在毕业典礼上发言。
内容提示:1.养成健康的生活习惯；
2.学习有计划、有行动；
3.友善待人；
4.培养良好的兴趣爱好，参加志愿活动。
写作要求:1.内容必须包括所给要点，并适当发挥一至两点；
2.语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名和地名；
4.不少于90词。
How to be a better teenager?
Hello, everyone! Today I'd like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager.
In order to be a better teenager, I plan to do the following things. First, we should develop healthy living habits. Only in this way can we live and study well. Second, we should make a study plan and put it into action so that we can learn better. Third, we should be kind to others. When they are in need,we should give them a helping hand. In addition,we should develop good interests and take part in more voluntary activities.
Teenagers are the hope of our country. So let's all try our best to be better teenagers and serve our country in the future.
Thank you!
答案
One possible version:
How to be a better teenager?
Hello, everyone! Today I'd like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager.
In order to be a better teenager, I plan to do the following things. First, we should develop healthy living habits. Only in this way can we live and study well. Second, we should make a study plan and put it into action so that we can learn better. Third, we should be kind to others. When they are in need,we should give them a helping hand. In addition,we should develop good interests and take part in more voluntary activities.
Teenagers are the hope of our country. So let's all try our best to be better teenagers and serve our country in the future.
Thank you!
How to be a better teenager?
Hello, everyone! Today I'd like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager.
In order to be a better teenager, I plan to do the following things. First, we should develop healthy living habits. Only in this way can we live and study well. Second, we should make a study plan and put it into action so that we can learn better. Third, we should be kind to others. When they are in need,we should give them a helping hand. In addition,we should develop good interests and take part in more voluntary activities.
Teenagers are the hope of our country. So let's all try our best to be better teenagers and serve our country in the future.
Thank you!
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“How to be a better teenager?”为题写一篇毕业典礼演讲稿，需涵盖指定要点并适当发挥。解题思路：1. 采用演讲稿格式，开头问候听众、点明主题；2. 中间用逻辑连接词分层阐述四个要点，补充细节让内容更充实；3. 结尾升华主题、呼吁行动并致谢；4. 检查是否覆盖所有要点、无真实信息、词数达标。
【解析】
1. 开头：用“Hello, everyone!”问候，引出写作主题；
2. 主体：按要点依次展开：
健康生活习惯：说明其对学习生活的支撑作用；
学习计划与行动：强调计划落实的重要性；
友善待人：补充帮助有需要的人的细节；
兴趣爱好与志愿活动：明确参与的意义；
3. 结尾：升华青少年的责任，呼吁大家努力，最后致谢；
4. 确保语句通顺、语法正确、符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
How to be a better teenager?
Hello, everyone! Today I'd like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager.
In order to be a better teenager, I plan to do the following things. First, we should develop healthy living habits. Only in this way can we live and study well. Second, we should make a study plan and put it into action so that we can learn better. Third, we should be kind to others. When they are in need,we should give them a helping hand. In addition,we should develop good interests and take part in more voluntary activities.
Teenagers are the hope of our country. So let's all try our best to be better teenagers and serve our country in the future.
Thank you!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、演讲稿写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，覆盖所有要点并适当补充细节，采用标准演讲稿格式，逻辑清晰，语句通顺，符合词数要求，是规范的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以“How to be a better teenager?”为题写一篇毕业典礼演讲稿，需涵盖指定要点并适当发挥。解题思路：1. 采用演讲稿格式，开头问候听众、点明主题；2. 中间用逻辑连接词分层阐述四个要点，补充细节让内容更充实；3. 结尾升华主题、呼吁行动并致谢；4. 检查是否覆盖所有要点、无真实信息、词数达标。
【解析】
1. 开头：用“Hello, everyone!”问候，引出写作主题；
2. 主体：按要点依次展开：
健康生活习惯：说明其对学习生活的支撑作用；
学习计划与行动：强调计划落实的重要性；
友善待人：补充帮助有需要的人的细节；
兴趣爱好与志愿活动：明确参与的意义；
3. 结尾：升华青少年的责任，呼吁大家努力，最后致谢；
4. 确保语句通顺、语法正确、符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
How to be a better teenager?
Hello, everyone! Today I'd like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager.
In order to be a better teenager, I plan to do the following things. First, we should develop healthy living habits. Only in this way can we live and study well. Second, we should make a study plan and put it into action so that we can learn better. Third, we should be kind to others. When they are in need,we should give them a helping hand. In addition,we should develop good interests and take part in more voluntary activities.
Teenagers are the hope of our country. So let's all try our best to be better teenagers and serve our country in the future.
Thank you!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、演讲稿写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，覆盖所有要点并适当补充细节，采用标准演讲稿格式，逻辑清晰，语句通顺，符合词数要求，是规范的参考范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
