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Ⅶ.书面表达(满分20分)
初中生活即将画上句号，这三年承载着成长的印记与蜕变的收获，请以“My middle school life”为题撰写一篇英语短文。要求通过具体事例展现成长过程中的关键转折点，介绍那些让你重新认识自我的人际交往、课业挑战或课外活动经历。
提示:1. How have you changed?
2. What made you change?
3. What do you think about your changes?
注意:1.须回答上面所有问题,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3.不少于100词。
My middle school life
初中生活即将画上句号，这三年承载着成长的印记与蜕变的收获，请以“My middle school life”为题撰写一篇英语短文。要求通过具体事例展现成长过程中的关键转折点，介绍那些让你重新认识自我的人际交往、课业挑战或课外活动经历。
提示:1. How have you changed?
2. What made you change?
3. What do you think about your changes?
注意:1.须回答上面所有问题,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3.不少于100词。
My middle school life
答案
One possible version:
My middle school life
My middle school life is coming to an end. I have changed a lot during these three years.
I used to be shy and afraid to speak in public. I was also weak in English,especially speaking. But when I joined the English club,everything changed. My teacher encouraged me to practise and communicate with others. I kept trying and became more confident.
Now I am outgoing and brave enough to answer questions in class. I have also made many good friends.
I feel proud of my changes. These years not only bring me knowledge but also teach me to grow up. I will keep moving forward and never give up.
My middle school life
My middle school life is coming to an end. I have changed a lot during these three years.
I used to be shy and afraid to speak in public. I was also weak in English,especially speaking. But when I joined the English club,everything changed. My teacher encouraged me to practise and communicate with others. I kept trying and became more confident.
Now I am outgoing and brave enough to answer questions in class. I have also made many good friends.
I feel proud of my changes. These years not only bring me knowledge but also teach me to grow up. I will keep moving forward and never give up.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“My middle school life”为题撰写英语短文，需围绕初中三年的成长，通过具体事例回应三个提示问题：自身的变化、促使变化的经历、对变化的看法，同时要注意不出现真实姓名和地名、词数不少于100。解题思路为：先点明初中生活即将结束及自身变化大的总起；再选取具体事例（如加入英语俱乐部），描述过去的状态、变化的契机、努力后的改变；最后总结对成长的感悟，确保内容连贯、覆盖所有要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 开头：直接点题，说明初中生活即将结束，自己这三年变化很大；2. 主体：具体描述变化：过去害羞、英语（尤其是口语）差，加入英语俱乐部后，在老师鼓励下坚持练习，变得自信、外向，还交到好友；3. 结尾：表达对自身变化的自豪，总结初中生活不仅带来知识，更教会成长，展望未来。
【答案】
One possible version:
My middle school life
My middle school life is coming to an end. I have changed a lot during these three years.
I used to be shy and afraid to speak in public. I was also weak in English,especially speaking. But when I joined the English club,everything changed. My teacher encouraged me to practise and communicate with others. I kept trying and became more confident.
Now I am outgoing and brave enough to answer questions in class. I have also made many good friends.
I feel proud of my changes. These years not only bring me knowledge but also teach me to grow up. I will keep moving forward and never give up.
【知识点】
初中英语书面表达、话题作文
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目要求，以具体事例展现成长过程，完整回应了所有提示问题，语言流畅自然，结构清晰，符合初中英语写作的评分标准。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以“My middle school life”为题撰写英语短文，需围绕初中三年的成长，通过具体事例回应三个提示问题：自身的变化、促使变化的经历、对变化的看法，同时要注意不出现真实姓名和地名、词数不少于100。解题思路为：先点明初中生活即将结束及自身变化大的总起；再选取具体事例（如加入英语俱乐部），描述过去的状态、变化的契机、努力后的改变；最后总结对成长的感悟，确保内容连贯、覆盖所有要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 开头：直接点题，说明初中生活即将结束，自己这三年变化很大；2. 主体：具体描述变化：过去害羞、英语（尤其是口语）差，加入英语俱乐部后，在老师鼓励下坚持练习，变得自信、外向，还交到好友；3. 结尾：表达对自身变化的自豪，总结初中生活不仅带来知识，更教会成长，展望未来。
【答案】
One possible version:
My middle school life
My middle school life is coming to an end. I have changed a lot during these three years.
I used to be shy and afraid to speak in public. I was also weak in English,especially speaking. But when I joined the English club,everything changed. My teacher encouraged me to practise and communicate with others. I kept trying and became more confident.
Now I am outgoing and brave enough to answer questions in class. I have also made many good friends.
I feel proud of my changes. These years not only bring me knowledge but also teach me to grow up. I will keep moving forward and never give up.
【知识点】
初中英语书面表达、话题作文
【点评】
该作文紧扣题目要求，以具体事例展现成长过程，完整回应了所有提示问题，语言流畅自然，结构清晰，符合初中英语写作的评分标准。
【难度系数】
0.5
