典例分析
请你根据以下要点，以“How I Manage My Pocket Money”为题，写一篇不少于100词的短文。
【要点】(1) How do you get your pocket money? (2) How do you spend and save your pocket money? (3) What do you think of money? (4) What lesson do you learn from managing pocket money?
【审题要领】
主题 人称 时态

【写作框架】
列提纲
1. 开门见山，点明主题 → I'd like to share how I manage my pocket money every month.
2. 详述自己的理财方式 → (1) I spend half of it... (2) I set ide 30%... (3) The rest 20%...
3. 总结全文，表达期许 → I am sure I will have a right attitude towards money one day.
【素材积累】
重点短语
1. 省钱
2. 处理；应对
3. 合理规划资金使用
重点句子
开头句：When it comes to money, I often think of the story The Gift of the Magi. 当提及钱，我总是想起《麦琪的礼物》这个故事。
中间句：I choose this story because it shows true love is more valuable than money. 我选择这个故事是因为它展示了真爱远比金钱更珍贵。
结尾句：There is something much more important than money — it's love. 有比钱更重要的东西 —— 是爱。
【美文欣赏】
How I Manage My Pocket Money
I'd like to share how I manage my pocket money every month.
I get pocket money from my parents monthly and manage it in a planned way. I spend half of it on my daily needs, like school things and snacks, which makes my school life convenient. I set aside 30% for my small dreams, such as buying my favourite books. The rest 20% is used to donate to people in need. In other words, I will never treat money as something easy to get in life.
For me, managing pocket money is filled with benefits. It cultivates my sense of responsibility and helps me understand the true value of money. The better I manage my pocket money, the more happily I will live. I am sure I will have a right attitude towards money one day.
【小试牛刀】
上周，你校对九年级学生开展了“自主管理零花钱”的问卷调查。请你根据调查结果，写一篇英语短文，介绍本次调查情况并谈谈你的观点。
Yes
· become independent
· use money wisely
· ...
65% 35%
No
· waste money
· develop poor money habits
· ...
【要求】(1) 须包含调查结果的所有内容，可适当发挥；(2) 不得出现与你相关的真实信息；(3) 不少于90词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Last week, our school did a survey about managing pocket money. Here are the results.

【审题要领】
零花钱管理;第一人称;一般现在时
【素材积累】
1.save money 2.deal/do with 3.budget money
【小试牛刀】
65% of the students say yes.They believe it makes more sense to save money than to get more pocket money. Saving money helps them become more independent and learn how to deal with their money wisely, like saving for books. However, 35% of the students disagree.They worry that managing money on their own will make them waste it on useless things and develop poor money habits.It seems a bit difficult for them to save money, because the more they get,the more they spend.
In my opinion, we teenagers should try hard to manage our pocket money. When we make saving money a daily habit, we will see the fruit of our efforts. Remember,it's not the number that matters;it's what we do with our money.(共130词)

【分析】
本题为英语调查类写作题，解题思路如下：1. 审题：确定主题为“自主管理零花钱的调查情况”，人称以第一人称（谈个人观点）和第三人称（介绍调查）为主，时态统一用一般现在时；2. 结构搭建：承接给定开头，先呈现调查结果的两部分——65%学生支持自主管理的理由（培养独立、合理用钱），再写35%学生反对的理由（浪费钱、养成坏习惯）；最后加入个人观点，确保所有要点齐全；3. 语言表达：运用相关话题短语，语句通顺，满足词数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头句，先阐述65%学生的观点：65% of the students say yes，说明他们认为自主管理零花钱能帮助自己变得独立，还能学会合理处理金钱，比如攒钱买喜欢的书；2. 接着写35%学生的反对观点：35% of the students disagree，指出他们担心自主管理会导致浪费钱、养成不好的用钱习惯，且零花钱越多花得越多；3. 最后表达个人观点：青少年应尝试管理零花钱，养成攒钱的日常习惯，强调用钱的方式比数量更重要，完成全文。
【答案】
65% of the students say yes. They believe it makes more sense to save money than to get more pocket money. Saving money helps them become more independent and learn how to deal with their money wisely, like saving for books. However, 35% of the students disagree. They worry that managing money on their own will make them waste it on useless things and develop poor money habits. It seems a bit difficult for them to save money, because the more they get, the more they spend.
In my opinion, we teenagers should try hard to manage our pocket money. When we make saving money a daily habit, we will see the fruit of our efforts. Remember, it's not the number that matters; it's what we do with our money.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、调查类短文写作、话题词汇运用
【点评】
本题紧扣学生生活实际，考查信息整合与书面表达能力，结构清晰，要点明确，既涵盖调查的正反观点，又融入个人看法，能引导学生树立正确的金钱观，符合英语写作的规范要求。
【难度系数】
0.5