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五、书面表达
假如你是李军，是学校英语俱乐部的一员。自从加入英语俱乐部，你的英语学习有了很大的变化，你为此感到很高兴。请你根据以下信息给英语俱乐部的负责人张老师写一封邮件，谈一谈你加入英语俱乐部前后的变化。
内容要点: 1. 很幸运成为英语俱乐部的一员；
2. 你在英语学习上的变化：
加入前：没有学习英语的强大动力，英语成绩落后；
加入后：受到俱乐部成员的鼓舞，设立目标，和成员一起用英语交流，进步很大。
注意事项: 1. 邮件应适当添加一些细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；
2. 词数90左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Ms Zhang,
I'm Li Jun. It's so lucky to be a member of the English Club.
Thank you for making the club so fun! I'll keep working hard!
Yours sincerely,
Li Jun
假如你是李军，是学校英语俱乐部的一员。自从加入英语俱乐部，你的英语学习有了很大的变化，你为此感到很高兴。请你根据以下信息给英语俱乐部的负责人张老师写一封邮件，谈一谈你加入英语俱乐部前后的变化。
内容要点: 1. 很幸运成为英语俱乐部的一员；
2. 你在英语学习上的变化：
加入前：没有学习英语的强大动力，英语成绩落后；
加入后：受到俱乐部成员的鼓舞，设立目标，和成员一起用英语交流，进步很大。
注意事项: 1. 邮件应适当添加一些细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；
2. 词数90左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Ms Zhang,
I'm Li Jun. It's so lucky to be a member of the English Club.
Thank you for making the club so fun! I'll keep working hard!
Yours sincerely,
Li Jun
答案
One possible version:
Dear Ms Zhang,
I'm Li Jun. It's so lucky to be a member of the English Club.
Before joining the club, I didn't like English. I didn't have strong drive to learn it. I kept falling behind. At the club, I feel encouraged by the members of the club. I learn that most of them teach themselves by reading, watching TV series or talking with others in English. So I set some small goals. The most important way is to talk with other members in English. These ways help me improve my English a lot. What's more, when we have problems, we are willing to help each other.
Thank you for making the club so fun! I'll keep working hard!
Yours Sincerely,
Li Jun
(90 words)
Dear Ms Zhang,
I'm Li Jun. It's so lucky to be a member of the English Club.
Before joining the club, I didn't like English. I didn't have strong drive to learn it. I kept falling behind. At the club, I feel encouraged by the members of the club. I learn that most of them teach themselves by reading, watching TV series or talking with others in English. So I set some small goals. The most important way is to talk with other members in English. These ways help me improve my English a lot. What's more, when we have problems, we are willing to help each other.
Thank you for making the club so fun! I'll keep working hard!
Yours Sincerely,
Li Jun
(90 words)
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，要求以李军的身份给英语俱乐部负责人张老师写邮件，阐述加入俱乐部前后的英语学习变化。解题思路：1. 承接给定开头，明确表达加入俱乐部的幸运；2. 分两部分对比变化：加入前（无英语学习动力、成绩落后），加入后（受成员鼓舞、设立目标、用英语交流、进步显著）；3. 适当补充细节（如成员的学习方式、互相帮助）使内容连贯充实；4. 控制词数90左右，符合邮件格式要求，衔接给定结尾。
【解析】首先承接开头，说明加入前的状态：Before joining the club, I didn't like English and had no strong drive to learn it, so I kept falling behind. 接着写加入后的变化：At the club, I feel encouraged by members who teach themselves by reading, watching TV series or talking in English. So I set small goals and communicate with others in English, which helps me improve a lot. Also, we help each other when in trouble. 最后衔接给定结尾，确保行文连贯，词数符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Ms Zhang,
I'm Li Jun. It's so lucky to be a member of the English Club.
Before joining the club, I didn't like English. I didn't have strong drive to learn it. I kept falling behind. At the club, I feel encouraged by the members of the club. I learn that most of them teach themselves by reading, watching TV series or talking with others in English. So I set some small goals. The most important way is to talk with other members in English. These ways help me improve my English a lot. What's more, when we have problems, we are willing to help each other.
Thank you for making the club so fun! I'll keep working hard!
Yours sincerely,
Li Jun
【知识点】英语邮件写作、英语书面表达
【点评】本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求结合给定要点完成邮件，需学生清晰对比自身英语学习的前后变化，适当补充细节使内容充实，符合邮件的正式语气，是初中英语常见的写作题型。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】首先承接开头，说明加入前的状态：Before joining the club, I didn't like English and had no strong drive to learn it, so I kept falling behind. 接着写加入后的变化：At the club, I feel encouraged by members who teach themselves by reading, watching TV series or talking in English. So I set small goals and communicate with others in English, which helps me improve a lot. Also, we help each other when in trouble. 最后衔接给定结尾，确保行文连贯，词数符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Ms Zhang,
I'm Li Jun. It's so lucky to be a member of the English Club.
Before joining the club, I didn't like English. I didn't have strong drive to learn it. I kept falling behind. At the club, I feel encouraged by the members of the club. I learn that most of them teach themselves by reading, watching TV series or talking with others in English. So I set some small goals. The most important way is to talk with other members in English. These ways help me improve my English a lot. What's more, when we have problems, we are willing to help each other.
Thank you for making the club so fun! I'll keep working hard!
Yours sincerely,
Li Jun
【知识点】英语邮件写作、英语书面表达
【点评】本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求结合给定要点完成邮件，需学生清晰对比自身英语学习的前后变化，适当补充细节使内容充实，符合邮件的正式语气，是初中英语常见的写作题型。
【难度系数】0.7
