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五、书面表达
每逢新年，每位同学都会收到来自长辈的红包。七年级（2）班的同学在班会课上，就如何合理利用零花钱展开讨论。有的同学想给自己买书，有的同学想为山区贫困儿童买衣物，你准备怎样做呢？请用英语写一篇短文，阐述讨论结果和你的看法。
注意事项：
1. 短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 词数不少于70，短文的首句和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
When the Spring Festival comes, every student can get lots of red packets.
I think we should learn to spend and save money wisely.
每逢新年，每位同学都会收到来自长辈的红包。七年级（2）班的同学在班会课上，就如何合理利用零花钱展开讨论。有的同学想给自己买书，有的同学想为山区贫困儿童买衣物，你准备怎样做呢？请用英语写一篇短文，阐述讨论结果和你的看法。
注意事项：
1. 短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 词数不少于70，短文的首句和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
When the Spring Festival comes, every student can get lots of red packets.
I think we should learn to spend and save money wisely.
答案
One possible version:
When the Spring Festival comes, every student can get lots of red packets. Some students want to buy some books with their pocket money because they can learn a lot from books. Others want to buy clothes or food for the children in poor areas because the children there don’t have enough money to buy them. As for me, I want to buy some presents for my parents and grandparents because I want to give my thanks to them in this way.
I think we should learn to spend and save money wisely.
(70 words)
When the Spring Festival comes, every student can get lots of red packets. Some students want to buy some books with their pocket money because they can learn a lot from books. Others want to buy clothes or food for the children in poor areas because the children there don’t have enough money to buy them. As for me, I want to buy some presents for my parents and grandparents because I want to give my thanks to them in this way.
I think we should learn to spend and save money wisely.
(70 words)
解析
【分析】本题是七年级英语话题书面表达题，要求围绕“零花钱合理利用”展开写作，需包含两个核心内容：一是班会课上同学的讨论结果（部分同学用零花钱买书，部分同学为山区贫困儿童买衣物），二是自己对零花钱使用的看法；需使用给定的开头和结尾，词数不少于70，语句通顺连贯。解题思路为：先承接开头句说明同学的两种想法及原因，再阐述自己的做法，最后衔接给定结尾，确保覆盖所有要点，符合英语表达规范。
【解析】根据题目要求，先承接开头句，说明同学的讨论结果：Some students want to buy some books with their pocket money because they can learn a lot from books. Others want to buy clothes or food for the children in poor areas because the children there don’t have enough money to buy them. 接着说明自己的做法：As for me, I want to buy some presents for my parents and grandparents because I want to give my thanks to them in this way. 最后衔接给定结尾句，完成短文，确保语句通顺、要点齐全、词数达标。
【答案】When the Spring Festival comes, every student can get lots of red packets. Some students want to buy some books with their pocket money because they can learn a lot from books. Others want to buy clothes or food for the children in poor areas because the children there don’t have enough money to buy them. As for me, I want to buy some presents for my parents and grandparents because I want to give my thanks to them in this way.
I think we should learn to spend and save money wisely.
【知识点】英语话题作文、书面表达
【点评】本文紧扣“合理利用零花钱”的主题，完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点，语句通顺，逻辑清晰，符合七年级英语写作的要求，是一篇规范的范文。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】根据题目要求，先承接开头句，说明同学的讨论结果：Some students want to buy some books with their pocket money because they can learn a lot from books. Others want to buy clothes or food for the children in poor areas because the children there don’t have enough money to buy them. 接着说明自己的做法：As for me, I want to buy some presents for my parents and grandparents because I want to give my thanks to them in this way. 最后衔接给定结尾句，完成短文，确保语句通顺、要点齐全、词数达标。
【答案】When the Spring Festival comes, every student can get lots of red packets. Some students want to buy some books with their pocket money because they can learn a lot from books. Others want to buy clothes or food for the children in poor areas because the children there don’t have enough money to buy them. As for me, I want to buy some presents for my parents and grandparents because I want to give my thanks to them in this way.
I think we should learn to spend and save money wisely.
【知识点】英语话题作文、书面表达
【点评】本文紧扣“合理利用零花钱”的主题，完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点，语句通顺，逻辑清晰，符合七年级英语写作的要求，是一篇规范的范文。
【难度系数】0.7
