六、书面表达。（满分20分）
在你的生活中有哪些经历是难以忘记的？当事情发生的时候你又在做什么呢？请你根据自己的亲身体会以及下面的提示，写一篇英语短文描述一件你最难忘的事件。
提示：
1. When and where did it happen?
2. What were you doing when it happened?
3. What were your friends or other people doing at that time?
要求：
1. 需使用本单元所学的过去进行时；
2. 词数80左右。

六、One possible version:
Last Saturday afternoon, an
accident took place on the street near my
home.
At that moment, I was walking
home from school, listening to music on
my phone and paying no attention to
what was going on around me.
Suddenly, a loud noise caught my ear.
Looking up, I saw a car knock down an
old man. My friends were playing
basketball in the nearby park. They also
heard the sound and rushed to the scene
right away. We helped the old man up
and called 120 immediately.
It was truly a terrible accident. I
hope everyone can be more careful while
walking or driving on the road.

【分析】
本题要求用过去进行时写一篇80词左右的英语短文，描述最难忘的经历，需涵盖三个提示：事件的时间地点、自己当时的动作、他人（朋友等）当时的动作。解题思路：1. 选取贴近生活的难忘事件（如交通事故）；2. 用过去进行时准确描述事件发生时自己和他人正在做的事；3. 补充事件结果和个人感悟，确保词数达标、要点齐全。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 开篇点明事件的时间与地点；2. 用过去进行时描述自己当时的行为；3. 叙述事件经过，再用过去进行时写朋友的动作；4. 说明事件处理方式及个人感悟，控制词数在80左右，符合要求。
【答案】
六、One possible version:
Last Saturday afternoon, an accident took place on the street near my home.
At that moment, I was walking home from school, listening to music on my phone and paying no attention to what was going on around me.
Suddenly, a loud noise caught my ear. Looking up, I saw a car knock down an old man. My friends were playing basketball in the nearby park. They also heard the sound and rushed to the scene right away. We helped the old man up and called 120 immediately.
It was truly a terrible accident. I hope everyone can be more careful while walking or driving on the road.
【知识点】
过去进行时、英语书面表达
【点评】
范文紧扣题目所有要求，涵盖全部提示要点，正确运用过去进行时描述过去某时刻的动作，内容完整、逻辑清晰，词数符合要求，还加入了个人感悟，是一篇优秀的单元书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.6