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(二)书面表达(本题15分)
请根据要求完成短文写作。
生活中,我们难免会产生消极情绪,比如考试失利后的沮丧、和朋友闹矛盾时的难过等。某英语网站正在开展以"How I Deal with Negative Feelings"为题的征文活动,请你根据思维导图的提示,用英语写一篇短文投稿,分享你曾经应对消极情绪的经历。
注意:(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
(2)不能照抄原文;
(3)语句连贯,词数70左右。
How I Deal with Negative Feelings
请根据要求完成短文写作。
生活中,我们难免会产生消极情绪,比如考试失利后的沮丧、和朋友闹矛盾时的难过等。某英语网站正在开展以"How I Deal with Negative Feelings"为题的征文活动,请你根据思维导图的提示,用英语写一篇短文投稿,分享你曾经应对消极情绪的经历。
注意:(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
(2)不能照抄原文;
(3)语句连贯,词数70左右。
How I Deal with Negative Feelings
答案
One possible version:
How I Deal with Negative Feelings
Everyone has negative feelings sometimes, and so do I. The important thing is how we deal with them.
Last month, I felt quite low after failing a maths test. It was like there was a dark cloud hanging over my head. Instead of shutting myself in my room, I decided to talk to my best friend, Lily. She listened patiently and said to me, "It's OK to fail. Go ahead and keep trying. That's how we learn." Her words comforted me and made me feel more confident. I made a study plan and worked harder. And finally, I scored much better in the next exam!
This experience taught me that negative feelings don't last forever. Only by facing them bravely can we overcome them.
How I Deal with Negative Feelings
Everyone has negative feelings sometimes, and so do I. The important thing is how we deal with them.
Last month, I felt quite low after failing a maths test. It was like there was a dark cloud hanging over my head. Instead of shutting myself in my room, I decided to talk to my best friend, Lily. She listened patiently and said to me, "It's OK to fail. Go ahead and keep trying. That's how we learn." Her words comforted me and made me feel more confident. I made a study plan and worked harder. And finally, I scored much better in the next exam!
This experience taught me that negative feelings don't last forever. Only by facing them bravely can we overcome them.
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，主题是“How I Deal with Negative Feelings”，需结合思维导图的“事件、应对方式、感悟”三个模块完成写作。解题思路：首先确定具体事件（如考试失利），再梳理应对方式（思维导图提及的倾诉、制订计划，可适当补充合理方式），最后提炼感悟，确保内容围绕主题、语句连贯、符合词数要求，不照抄原文，适当拓展细节。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开头引入：点明每个人都有消极情绪，引出自己的相关经历；2. 叙述事件：讲述自己数学考试失利后感到沮丧的具体情况；3. 阐述应对方式：和好友倾诉获得鼓励，制定学习计划并努力执行；4. 结尾感悟：总结经历，说明消极情绪可通过勇敢面对克服。
【答案】One possible version:
How I Deal with Negative Feelings
Everyone has negative feelings sometimes, and so do I. The important thing is how we deal with them.
Last month, I felt quite low after failing a maths test. It was like there was a dark cloud hanging over my head. Instead of shutting myself in my room, I decided to talk to my best friend, Lily. She listened patiently and said to me, "It's OK to fail. Go ahead and keep trying. That's how we learn." Her words comforted me and made me feel more confident. I made a study plan and worked harder. And finally, I scored much better in the next exam!
This experience taught me that negative feelings don't last forever. Only by facing them bravely can we overcome them.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题写作、思维导图写作
【点评】本文结合思维导图提示，内容真实具体，围绕应对消极情绪的经历展开，语句连贯，符合词数要求，传递了积极向上的态度，是符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开头引入：点明每个人都有消极情绪，引出自己的相关经历；2. 叙述事件：讲述自己数学考试失利后感到沮丧的具体情况；3. 阐述应对方式：和好友倾诉获得鼓励，制定学习计划并努力执行；4. 结尾感悟：总结经历，说明消极情绪可通过勇敢面对克服。
【答案】One possible version:
How I Deal with Negative Feelings
Everyone has negative feelings sometimes, and so do I. The important thing is how we deal with them.
Last month, I felt quite low after failing a maths test. It was like there was a dark cloud hanging over my head. Instead of shutting myself in my room, I decided to talk to my best friend, Lily. She listened patiently and said to me, "It's OK to fail. Go ahead and keep trying. That's how we learn." Her words comforted me and made me feel more confident. I made a study plan and worked harder. And finally, I scored much better in the next exam!
This experience taught me that negative feelings don't last forever. Only by facing them bravely can we overcome them.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题写作、思维导图写作
【点评】本文结合思维导图提示，内容真实具体，围绕应对消极情绪的经历展开，语句连贯，符合词数要求，传递了积极向上的态度，是符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.5
